| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:03 EDT
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Whee! I can't wait for the next chapter to be finished. Whee! This chapter was fun.
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Reviewed By: Reneé Nobumoto On: May 14, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been my experience with pregnancy, that it's best to let them eat *whatever* they want... otherwise, it comes right back up an hour later. *Talking from experience, foods don't often taste the same coming back up as they did going down either.* This is an incredibly enjoyable fic, and I'd love for you to update soon!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 14, 2004 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great chapter ....Please, please,please update again soon....
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 03:11 EDT
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lol..i guess Quatre can be a talkative little bugger cant he...ohh well give that boy some doggy downers and hand him over to Trowa and they'll be fine!
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Reviewed By: Ecclectic Electric Etna On: May 13, 2004 23:44 EDT
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Every time one of those guys faints I got the urge to sing "Another One Bites the Dust" Heheheh. Although, it didn't surprise me in the least that Quatre was the only one that didn't faint; not really sure why though. It has been my experience with pregnancy that it's best to let the mother eat whatever she wants. For example, my aunt, couldn't eat anything at all unless it was covered in chocolate sauce, my mother couldn't eat oatmeal, and as for me, if I ate anything except what I was craving at the time it came right back up an hour later. It may be a little different in Duo's case, but then again, maybe not...
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Reviewed By: prisc On: May 13, 2004 20:57 EDT
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aww no alone time for the two love birds. I hope that they get spend the whole day in the next chapter cuddling. (^_^) They're so cute.
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Reviewed By: ki-tsu-ne On: May 13, 2004 20:15 EDT
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Um...compared to your other chapter, this one seemed like a...well, filler. I mean, Trowa and Quatre did find out and that was important, but the characters seemed a little out of character, especially the speech. It seemed a little too formal, especially Duo. And Quatre really showed his blond side in this chapter, although maybe you meant him to be amusing in a silly, sort of dumb, way. Overall, this chapter had quite a different feel to it than your others.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre can be cute sometimes but he won't shut the fuck up! And poor Heero now that Trowa and Quatre are staying, he won't have *alone* time with Duo now. *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Duo and the baby are all right! I wonder how Quatre and Trowa will react to Duo's pregnancy? Update soon! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Rav Rev On: May 10, 2004 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! Why did you stop there? I wanted to see how Quartre and Trowa would react to Duo's pregnancy. So far three of the five Gundam pilots have fainted. I wonder if Quartre will faint or he will know in a small way because of his spaceheart? I guess that Duo and Heero will have to lay down pillows on the floor to catch both Trowa and Quartre when they both faint.
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Reviewed By: Skeren Dreamera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 11:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the second time I've run through this story, and you've added a good fifteen chapters since I last caught up with it. ::huge grin:: It's one of my favorite stories actually. I will mention one thing though. Men do have mamary glands from what I understand, they are just, overall nonworkable. Not to say Duo will be able to produce milk by any means. But it's there. ::bigger grin:: Cause I know of cases where men have started lactating. Okay, that's all I wanted to say, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 17:40 EDT
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More, more, MORE! Need more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 01:57 EDT
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Ah it's good to see Duo get released from the hospital, and Heero able to finally get a good night sleep! Oh jeez, I can just imagine Heero being one of those anal parents that makes everyone wash up before holding the baby (if he even allows anyone to hold it!), while Duo is just the opposite - loving to watch others hold the infant and gush over it. I loved Heero's reaction when he thought of Duo not having mam's! I have a feeling he's going to inadvertently add a lot of comic relief for the rest of the fic!
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Reviewed By: Chassity23 On: May 07, 2004 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I just wanted to say I love this fiC! I just started reading... ch 25, so don't stop updating on my account.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 07, 2004 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter keeps geting better and better ..I really can't wait to read the next chapter... So as always please update,update,update...And I hope to read more soon...^_~Thank you for such a wonderful story...
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