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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 17, 2004 03:41 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I can't believe all the updates since I've been gone!! It's like 30 different people updated and I finely read them all(Sweat drop) Some people even updated 3 times ..Wow .Was I gone that long? Well I read them all and now I must review but I don't have the time to review each one .So I'm doing another MASS Review I'm sorry I have to do this ..But I wanted to let you all Know I read your story and or updated stories and Loved it or them...^_~ and look forward to reading more of them...For the people who have updated more than 1 time and see this same review for more than one chapter .I want you to know I have read each and every chapter and I'm sorry for the displaced review and will try to do better next time..And as for my Daughter Jillian she is doing better and will be home on 9/26/04 .Her epilepsy is under control .Thank Goddess...^_~ Well I guess that's it for this time .Soooo you all keep writing and I'll keep reading...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 17, 2004 03:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I can't believe all the updates since I've been gone!! It's like 30 different people updated and I finely read them all(Sweat drop) Some people even updated 3 times ..Wow .Was I gone that long? Well I read them all and now I must review but I don't have the time to review each one .So I'm doing another MASS Review I'm sorry I have to do this ..But I wanted to let you all Know I read your story and or updated stories and Loved it or them...^_~ and look forward to reading more of them...For the people who have updated more than 1 time and see this same review for more than one chapter .I want you to know I have read each and every chapter and I'm sorry for the displaced review and will try to do better next time..And as for my Daughter Jillian she is doing better and will be home on 9/26/04 .Her epilepsy is under control .Thank Goddess...^_~ Well I guess that's it for this time .Soooo you all keep writing and I'll keep reading...
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sniffles:: I love how you ended that scare with something so precious as the baby's first kick. I'm enjoying this story very much and am looking forward to more. ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: Mina_Hatori On: September 15, 2004 18:53 EDT
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great new update. I just love all the emotion u put into it. Ur a very good writer. Can't wait to read more so that mean update soon!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. I love the feeling of going through the pregnancy with our two boys, and with your descriptive writing its easier to imagine. Well done. As for RL, it happens to us all and it must come first. I hope everything is alright.
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: September 15, 2004 07:02 EDT
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*glomps shenlong* wow what a beautiful ending *blocks out thought and mention of evil duck apparatus*, and man is heero cute when he sniffles. take your time *steals a hug from shenlong and disappears*
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter full of angst and I just adore Heero in this fic, and I love Nurse Brown, she's lovely. Poor Duo...I hope everything will be alright. Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent story.
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: September 11, 2004 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am so happy that the damage was not that bad after all/ I just wish that Heero would not blame himself its sooo sad u could cry.Well I really really can't wait to read what happens next so update soon PLZZZZZZ!!!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel- --notsignedin-- - On: September 11, 2004 04:13 EDT
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*Smiles* oh I'm so happy the PA wasn't as serious as Sally thought but I'm sure it was a good idea for her to tell Duo the worst possibility considering she wanted to keep him calm and reduce his blood pressure to get him in some semblance of a stable position just before he wa on the gurney to the Hospital?! *thinks back to Duo's distressed sob* Yea I remember though that Duo wanted her to be frank and tell him all the possibilities. Hmm i'm sure that the paramedics that brought them there couldn't help but notice the abnormal size tummy on a wiry built Duo, but that suspicion is just me being overprotected and peeking around every corner *snickers* A typo: '... officer pass her through the hand set ' patched? As always, this was another well written chapter, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 10, 2004 15:25 EDT
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You got to update soon! Keep up the good job!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I sure hope that Duo and the baby will be o.k...I love the way u leave it on a cliffy like this. I love the stroy and hoop that u UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 07:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love yuor story!!! I hope Duo's baby will be fine. : (
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 09, 2004 02:02 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok well I have to make this short because I'm off to Dallas children's Hospital again with Jillian..My 16 years old daughter so I just wanted to let you know I read your chapter and or update or story and enjoyed them very much!!! ... You see I had 27 chapters to read and review so I'm doing a mass review because I have to go back to Dallas. So Please update and I will read your next chapter and or update or story when I return from Dallas.And thanks for updating..Patty 40
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter with a lovely cliffhanger *evil* Keep up the good work. This story only gets better with a lot of angst for both our boys.
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 12:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor heero he must feel really bad about this.I hope that duo will be o.k.Thank u for updating soo fast and hope to read more.
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