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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 14, 2004 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great please update I really, really mean it...
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Duo and Heero are getting married! Great story so far! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: inulover116 On: October 10, 2004 19:58 EDT
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i love the new chap. a lot it was another well done fic on ur part. The ice cream sounds really good(mmmmmmmmmmm)how to read another chap soon.Can something happen to Heero for a little angest on his mission PLZZZZZZZ!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel *grins* On: October 06, 2004 17:57 EDT
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What a nice interlude for the hectic hell with concern for the baby's and Duo's survival. Do they still sell Heath nutty bars in Australia? I tried to find them here in the US and had little success *pouts*.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I love this fic. Lot's of humor and just a little drama now and then, I think it is a perfect balance. I like it that during your story they both change their characters a little. Heero is opening up more emotionally and Duo learns to trust and lean on other people. That is soooo good. Hmm, maybe Duo should start knitting or crocheting to have something to do. hehehe isn't that what mothers do during pregnancy??? lol
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 06, 2004 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where is WuFei is he going to be in this flic some more?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 06, 2004 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was wonderful ..I loved it... Please update again soon..
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Reviewed By: Sakura loves yaoi On: October 02, 2004 02:02 EDT
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i love this story a lot and can't wait until u update soon.I love how Duo finally decided to consider what Heero was feeling.I think that when u write the next chap or two that there should be some angest about heero going on his trip and mabey he gets hurt or something.Well good tiding with the writhing and all. I hope that u write more of the story u have so well built so far...^_^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 01, 2004 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story.I've Enjoyed reading this chapter please update.......
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 25, 2004 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry It took me so long to review,I found your story very well written, you are a talented writer..I thought that this was or is an excellent story. . I am always reading drama or humor stories depending on what mood I'm in and I found this one of the few good one's out there. So I thank you for writing this story for me and everyone else to read.So again please update soon.. NOTE: If you find the same review for more than one chapter of your story, It is because I just go home and read everything in my in box and have done another mass review ...But believe me I mean every word of this review and want to read more of everyone's stories...^_~
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Reviewed By: camillian On: September 24, 2004 19:08 EDT
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the baby kicking was so cool! hope you're feeling better, but i can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Moon Wizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW *dancing all around, smiling*, I love your story. It's completely original!!. I loved to see Heero as an "overexcited expectant father", not to mentio Duo with a belly. :) Please, don't take too long with the update. Don't leave us waitnig too much.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 17, 2004 04:13 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I can't believe all the updates since I've been gone!! It's like 30 different people updated and I finely read them all(Sweat drop) Some people even updated 3 times ..Wow .Was I gone that long? Well I read them all and now I must review but I don't have the time to review each one .So I'm doing another MASS Review I'm sorry I have to do this ..But I wanted to let you all Know I read your story and or updated stories and Loved it or them...^_~ and look forward to reading more of them...For the people who have updated more than 1 time and see this same review for more than one chapter .I want you to know I have read each and every chapter and I'm sorry for the displaced review and will try to do better next time..And as for my Daughter Jillian she is doing better and will be home on 9/26/04 .Her epilepsy is under control .Thank Goddess...^_~ Well I guess that's it for this time .Soooo you all keep writing and I'll keep reading...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 17, 2004 03:48 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I can't believe all the updates since I've been gone!! It's like 30 different people updated and I finely read them all(Sweat drop) Some people even updated 3 times ..Wow .Was I gone that long? Well I read them all and now I must review but I don't have the time to review each one .So I'm doing another MASS Review I'm sorry I have to do this ..But I wanted to let you all Know I read your story and or updated stories and Loved it or them...^_~ and look forward to reading more of them...For the people who have updated more than 1 time and see this same review for more than one chapter .I want you to know I have read each and every chapter and I'm sorry for the displaced review and will try to do better next time..And as for my Daughter Jillian she is doing better and will be home on 9/26/04 .Her epilepsy is under control .Thank Goddess...^_~ Well I guess that's it for this time .Soooo you all keep writing and I'll keep reading...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 17, 2004 03:48 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I can't believe all the updates since I've been gone!! It's like 30 different people updated and I finely read them all(Sweat drop) Some people even updated 3 times ..Wow .Was I gone that long? Well I read them all and now I must review but I don't have the time to review each one .So I'm doing another MASS Review I'm sorry I have to do this ..But I wanted to let you all Know I read your story and or updated stories and Loved it or them...^_~ and look forward to reading more of them...For the people who have updated more than 1 time and see this same review for more than one chapter .I want you to know I have read each and every chapter and I'm sorry for the displaced review and will try to do better next time..And as for my Daughter Jillian she is doing better and will be home on 9/26/04 .Her epilepsy is under control .Thank Goddess...^_~ Well I guess that's it for this time .Soooo you all keep writing and I'll keep reading...
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