| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 09:31 EDT
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No! oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no! *sniffles* Heero is going to feel a hellofva lot of guilt about this, will he even accept that it msy have started from pain in Duo's side from running? But even if he known that he'd still take the responsibility for being the reason Duo ran! yes, I'm obssessed. I admit it and I refuse treatment so there *sticks out tongue* Oh update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel *eyes story then blinks* On: September 06, 2004 17:38 EDT
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heero is so Kawaii! I'm kind of concerned about the cramp in Duo's side, could it be that his old injury that lead Sally to discover that Duo had female parts?! I only have those few words but I hope the energy in them inspires you to continue!
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Title: question
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: September 04, 2004 02:18 EDT
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Hi... well i was thinking... Q-chan y Trowa are married Heero and Duo will married some day... i was just imagine a wedding... Duo with a bigggg tummy and Heero all handsome and proud... well thats just my imagination... see ya duo_maxwel_the_shinigami@yahoo.com.mx
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Title: Wow!!!
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is excellent and one of the best stories I have read for a long time with 1 x 2. I love your style and the way you word things, your description is impeccable and on top of that the plot is excellent and well researched. My only wish is that I had reviewed sooner because this little gem is worth every damn review and more. Not many stories these days deserves my full praise...this is one of them (Kracken, CalicoCat, Dyna Lee are the others for GW). Looking forward to the next chapter and keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 03, 2004 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a fight an a half... I'm glad they go it all stratend out.. Quatre is comming shiver..please update soon...
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a good chap...Does the apin in his lower belly mena that he is having contractions because sometimes that means it does.Well who knows but u.I hope to read another chap soon and love this fic a lot.So UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 30, 2004 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well your doing your part..The updateing that is ..Now all I have to do is the reviewing..Ok here gose everything(takes a big breth) I am realy enjoying reading this story..And I really want to read more becase it is really good..Soo how did I do? I hope you liked my review now PLASE update...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 30, 2004 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well your doing your part..The updateing that is ..Now all I have to do is the reviewing..Ok here gose everything(takes a big breth) I am realy enjoying reading this story..And I really want to read more becase it is really good..Soo how did I do? I hope you liked my review now PLASE update...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 15:32 EDT
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*whines and pouts* I wanna see the ultrasound photos and touch duo's tummy! *looks at author with quivering lower lip, then snickers* I gotta say i'm getting anxious, but isn't it a little soon for the nurse to be moving I thought she would come live with them around Duo's 7th month? but he is a special guy and a bit stubborn. keep it coming and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 12:48 EDT
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I love this story! More! write more! ^-^ Weissangel24
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Title: ch. 58
Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this story. Please update soon! ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 23, 2004 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo,Great chapter and wonderful story...This story is the best and I just want more..More,more..So please update again soon and if you keep writing I'll keep reading...TTFN
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 23, 2004 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: Saizen On: August 23, 2004 15:33 EDT
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Good chap..I loved at the end with the candy bars part.That was funny.Update soon and keep up the good work.*_*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 19, 2004 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hert my wrist so I can't type all that well ..So all I'm going to do is begg you to update and say I loved this chapter...
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