| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:11 EST
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So outside of Heero and Duo, the number of people that knows about the pregnancy is about to double. And they're all expected to keep that secret under wraps for the next six - seven months. This is going to be a hoot! I'm trying to figure out who's going to be the one that spills the beans. I'm sure it won't be intentional - all of them will do their best to stand by Duo and Heero through this... very interesting time in their lives. I can't wait to see the boys' reactions to the ultrasound. And when they hear the heartbeat for the first time. And when little Whozit starts kicking and bouncing on Duo's bladder. And when... Oops - sorry. Got a little carried away for a moment. Congrats on the granddaughter! I've decided that if I had known how much fun it was to be a "Grammie" I would have skipped having kids altogether! : )
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 14, 2004 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating... This was a great chapter I can see this baby will bring all the g-boys back together and that's great I can't wait to read more... And see what WuFei says about all this?..So please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 11:32 EST
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I must say that the bit I'm looking forward to the most right after 'Heero and DUo finding out' is the bit where they have to tell Wufei :D I hope you give that scene its proper due! And Quatre and Trowa too, now. Bundling them off to Quatre will be a good option but what are they going to do about all the medical equipment they'll need to follow this unusual pregnancy? Can't wait for more!
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Title: soumanyon
Reviewed By: soumanyon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm...that was surprising! lol, just kidding, of course Duo and Heero would have the child, right? Well, I've been following this fic for a couple of months now but this is the first time I've reviewed, so I just wanted to say good luck and keep up the good work! This was an awesome concept, and it seems to be going well so far. Can't wait for the child! Only tiny little request is to hurry it up a little? I mean, it took 35 chapters for them to actually decide on whether or not to have the baby, so it'd be great if you could speed it up a little, do you know what I mean? If not, it's fine and you're awesome at quick updates, so I won't mention it again. I'm sorry if it offends you, I really don't mean to since this is a great fic nonetheless. I'm just an impatient person, I guess. And by the way, congrats on your granddaughter! She has such a pretty name! And wow...^_^; didn't know any grandparents were interested in Gundam Wing, that's kinda cool. I always thought the whole slash/yaoi fanfic stuff was only interesting to younger people, but guess not! lol, well, congratulations and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Anako- On: March 09, 2004 21:10 EST
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Waaah! Duo could DIE?! DUO CAN'T DIE That's not riiiiiiiight! He won't die, right? ;-; Because Heero will be a sad daddy. And I will cry...*nodnod*
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 21:32 EST
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*sob* I love it. I'm really crying here. Have you thought of ever publishing stories you're really good at it. ^-^ ja ne, chibi
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 07, 2004 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating... I just love this story ..And this is the chapter I was waiting for .. I'm so glad there keeping the baby...And I hope everything goes ok... Please update again soon..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe.. On: March 07, 2004 11:00 EST
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That is just so touching... beautiful... love it... update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 09:53 EST
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*Squeals* YAY!!!! YAY!!!! YAY!!!! I'm Speechless!! That was just Great!! Update soon Peez!!!!!! ~Wanders away bouning Happily~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 09:51 EST
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I had a feeling Heero would be clocking G before the end of the explanation...hehe, Duo waking up and coming to the very reasonable conclusion that it was a dream was very funny. I guess that for story telling reasons they had to get over the shock fairly fast (you cleverly skipped a lot of the hysteria and shouting by making the baby the POV for a bit) but I hope they'll still be floored by this regularly. It wouldn't be normal for them to come over all 'happy family' immediately. Delayed shock is powerful and treacherous, and this has to be the biggest knock of all and won't go away with just one explanation, even if they think it's all okay for now...Looking forward to the next chapter! How they gonna keep this from the press...
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Title: Marvelous
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: March 06, 2004 03:02 EST
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jajajajajaja Heero fainted.... wow at least they both know now worderfull as always and congratulations for your granddaugther
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 22:42 EST
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Congrats on your new granddaughter!! WOW!! This was a GREAT chapter. Duo's reaction was perfectly in character. As for Heero's . . . why is it dat all new daddies do that? lol!! Can't WAIT for ur next update!! ~Wanders over to 1x2 and Squeezes life outta them. Hee! Hee! ^_____^ ~
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Reviewed By: Devina On: March 03, 2004 10:37 EST
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congrats on the baby and i like the name ^^, i also want to tell you that i really loved the chap! and good luck with your grandchild send the little one my greetings ^^
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 09:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL ^-^ CHAPTER 34 WAS FUNNY, I LOVED IT. UPDATE SOON. THANKS CHIBI
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 02, 2004 18:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It"s about time we got to this part.. I can't wait till the next chapter..Thank you so much for updating so soon ..I'm really enjoying reading this story..beleave me when i tell you this is a great story and I want to read more to... So Please update again soon so I can read more...TTFN
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