| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 23:43 EST
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**WAILS** NOT AGAIN!!!!!! You and cliffhangers!! Jeez!! Nice lemon. ^.^ Please, please, please update!! And address the chat with Sally from before!! ~Wanders off to find Midol for poor Duo-chan~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 03, 2004 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait until your next update so please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 19:50 EST
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oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh*drool*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 31, 2003 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till Duo gets pregnet.. What will Heero do or say? this chapter was great really look forward to reading more please update again soon TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 10:27 EST
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The 'iron' thing was a well-thought out piece of suspence; it looks like Duo's 'real' condition is still unknown, which means...an eventual surprise! *evil snicker* Excellent so far, and I'm still addicted. And I loved Heero's mother hen streak :D
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 02:00 EST
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Dang you leaving us with aother clify...*threttens you with a baseball bat* btw the flu sucks...update quickly while i'm sick at home and can read it!
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Title: Too lazy to log on, so sue me!
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny (FB for short) On: December 26, 2003 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started to read this, it was a bit slow in pace... And I thought, oh no, a detail freak has arrived in my midst. Then, the details any Gundam fan (except a few manga only maniacs.) would know. Though, I didn't skip the added details. Then, things picked up a bit. You left me hanging at the end more than once (this is a method I use to catch attention of the reader, you do too, obviously.) But, leaving us here of all spots was just a little bit... Too much because right now I'm bouncing on the edge of my seat, wide awake at 2:10 in the morning! Jesus tap-dancing Christ (Sorry if it offends you do to religion, I prefer just studing the Bible without being told what to read out of it thus not going to church), I'll be up until four still with the near to caffine rush bliss you brought me to! (Adrenaline, the body's natural coffee!)Sorry it's so long, but my ratings speak for themselves (Except Spelling&Grammer cause I suck at it and I know humans make mistakes, even best-sellers.)
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Title: Too lazy to log on, so sue me!
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny (FB for short) On: December 26, 2003 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started to read this, it was a bit slow in pace... And I thought, oh no, a detail freak has arrived in my midst. Then, the details any Gundam fan (except a few manga only maniacs.) would know. Though, I didn't skip the added details. Then, things picked up a bit. You left me hanging at the end more than once (this is a method I use to catch attention of the reader, you do too, obviously.) But, leaving us here of all spots was just a little bit... Too much because right now I'm bouncing on the edge of my seat, wide awake at 2:10 in the morning! Jesus tap-dancing Christ (Sorry if it offends you do to religion, I prefer just studing the Bible without being told what to read out of it thus not going to church), I'll be up until four still with the near to caffine rush bliss you brought me to! (Adrenaline, the body's natural coffee!)Sorry it's so long, but my ratings speak for themselves (Except Spelling&Grammer cause I suck at it and I know humans make mistakes, even best-sellers.)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 25, 2003 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Merry Christmas and thank you for updating.... I just love this story... Have I told you lately what a great writer you are ? If I haven't I should have..This story is the best and I hope you update again soon.. I really am awed by your talent and hope to read more of your stories... so until next time TTFN...
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 14:51 EST
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**Chews Nails Incessantly** O.o OMG! OMG! OMG! This is it! Oh Boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! ~Resists urge to wander and impatiently sits at pc waiting for an update~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 11:30 EST
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Wah! What a place to stop! YOu better update next week! Nice 2+5 interaction, I love the verbal sparring, I hope you give us more!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 22, 2003 02:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry this is so short but I'm not fealing well so I'm doing this in a hurry ... This chapter is great and I want to read more so please update soon .. Thanks for the update.. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 14:55 EST
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*pant pant drool drool* yummy..lemmony fresh@@ thankyou!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 13:28 EST
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Sorry I haven't reviewed this story yet, I've read all the chapters so far and I love them all, they're really great, i meant to put a review up last month but my computer kinda just went on me so yeah I'm writing my review right now, oh yeah you'll be hearing from me again when I read your next chapter after u put it up, ne ways... I love this story and it is a great one! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 21:08 EST
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^_____________^ HEEEE. Nice job. That was very sweet. Can't wait to see what Sally finds out. ~Wanders away skipping and humming~
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