| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 12:09 EST
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Aw sweet :) and hot :P but I wonder what the medical exam will turn up!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 18, 2003 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was great and so is this story... And I look forward to reading more...I can't wait until your next update so please update soon so I can read more.. Thanks for the update TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 17:55 EST
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O.o !!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!!! LOL! I know, I know! I'm a hentai, wat can I say? I throughly enjoyed this chapter. I can't WAIT too see wat'll happen after the medical exams. I hate to say it, cuz ur one of my fav authors, but it's just dat ya kinda struck a nerve this time. Maybe it's juts that I'm anal bout this. But, I was a tad disappointed in that one little aspect of this chapter. I dunno how to 'splain it. But anyway, overall it was another successful chapter. Sooooo, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! ^.^ AND FINISH WAT U START!! LOL! I think u know wat I mean . . . ^____^ Hee! Hee! ~Wanders away thinking Hentai 1x2 thoughts~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 12:42 EST
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Hahaha, still loving the interaction with Wufei, this is gonna be fun! It was interesting to see a realistic 'first day', it certainly rings true. Wonder what the medical will turn up though...Keep it up, still lovin' it, still readin' it!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 00:48 EST
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Yeay...lemmony fresh!! thankyou...keep going girlfriend
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 11, 2003 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was sweet ...Wufei will get revenge LOL... This story just keeps geting better and better and I can't wait till your next update.. so until then TTFN
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Title: Beautifull chapter
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: December 11, 2003 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love to read your fics... you way to write is so fluid... the plot is so original... ahhh it was so hot and sweet how they explore each other... let me tell you... i cant wait for the lemon... jejeje im hentai ne?... i love this fic... you are a great author
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 13:26 EST
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Ahh, the interaction with FeiFei is just as I thought it would be :) Pleeeease put more of that in, I love seeing him get teased! And finally getting a little serious! You sure like teasing us, ne? But that's okay, it's more believable to make them take their time, and we get to enjoy a longer fic!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 12:24 EST
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^.^ Hee! Hee! Good Chapter. I love the ending. That was so sweet. *Huggles G-boys* More action next time!! **Grins manically** Take it to da next level, u know? ^___^ I wanna see Duo with child!! Update soon!! ~Wanders off waiting for the big news~
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 11:37 EST
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AAAWWWWWW!! How adorable!! **Huggles Duo & Heero immensely** That was sooooo sweet. *Sniffles* Hee! Hee! Perfect portrayal of Fei-chan!! Update soon! ~Wanders quickly away from katana wielding Wufei~ ^.^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 05, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter ..It is great that there on earth... I hope things go good for them and I can't wait till Duo becomes a mom lol ... update soonplease until next time TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 08:42 EST
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I hope the guys work with Wufei a bit, that could be an amusing trio, their characters are so different.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 22:37 EST
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YAY!! My honnies are joining da Preventers!!! **GLOMPS DUO & HEERO** How wondeful. Dat was so sweet of Heero-- aww!! *squeals* Don't forget!! Heero has to pester Duo bout his "." ^_____^ Hee! Hee! Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Wanders after fleeing Duo and Heero~**GLOMP!!** ^.~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2003 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give you higher than a 10 I would .. Oh sure I can here you go 100% ..This story is that good !!! I love the was you present Heero being sweet and all... And the story line is a good one to so you got it going on ..So know all you need to do is update,update,update and I will be happy ... thanks for the update got to go TTFN
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Reviewed By: leemax^_^ On: December 02, 2003 15:28 EST
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Let me just say "Oh man are you doing real good." keep it up @_@ waiting while wanting sex seens. :)
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