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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 13, 2004 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is all good news...I can't wait till Heero & Duo find out about the baby ..Please update again soon!!!!!Hurry
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Reviewed By: Devona W. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Finally.... SOMEbody knows... but GEEZ can't it be at least Heero or Duo? ::sigh:: yes, I know, I'm inpatient, but at least I can take comfort in the fact that you're a relaible updater... Anyway, another great chapter to an excellent story, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 14:27 EST
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So, Sally and Nurse Brown know that Duo is pregnant, but what did Sally ask Howard? Just about if he knew anything about Duo's condition or did she tell him that Duo is pregnant? When is she going to tell Duo? Soon I hope, not that Duo is going on any missions again and getting in danger.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a fan of mpreg fics, but for some reason I started reading this one, and I must say I'm very impressed! You've obviously put a lot of effort into it so far; I like how you've kept the readers up-to-date with the development of the foetus. It's going to be interesting to see what happens now that Sally's made the discovery - that is what she discovered with the ultrasound, isn't it? What's Heero's reaction going to be? For that matter, what's Duo's reaction going to be? Thanks so much for giving Moran his just reward. He was a real ass. I also appreciate your update habits! It makes it difficult for me to get upset at you for leaving us at such a tense moment!!! : O
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Title: Okay that was evil
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 00:29 EST
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I have been really into this fic, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Unlike most MPREGs Duo is not acting totally OOC which is something that I like. I also like the time you took to explain how he became a Gundam Pilot even though he had 'deffects'. You just stopped it at the worst place ever though...and I will tell you that you are evil for that because I want to know what is happening! Please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:21 EST
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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The long awaited day has arrived!!!!!!! HEE! HEE! Great display of emotion on Heero's part. *huggles Fei-chan* What a good friend!! Absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep going!! ~Wanders off skipping happily~
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Reviewed By: Vay On: February 08, 2004 16:39 EST
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Please let the baby be a boy with dark hair and purple eyes! Good story so far.
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Reviewed By: Devona On: February 08, 2004 15:02 EST
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Kick ASS!!! Lovin' it! Can't wait until next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: February 08, 2004 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Uh oh. Seems like the cats out of the bag, now. ^^ Still addicted to this story, and cannot wait to see more!!
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Title: Chapter 28 was good
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero2 On: February 08, 2004 13:52 EST
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Chapter 28 was good n sad... I just wish u didn't stop there!! Ne ways update soon!! I wanna know what Sally says about her *little* discovery about Duo now. Ne ways ya. TTFN (ta ta for now >tiger
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Title: Chapter 28 was good
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero2 On: February 08, 2004 13:50 EST
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Chapter 28 was good n sad... I just wish u didn't stop there!! Ne ways update soon!! I wanna know what Sally says about her *little* discovery about Duo now. Ne ways ya. TTFN (ta ta for now >tiger
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 08, 2004 13:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is geting so good ..I hate that you stoper there...I want to here more ..Please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 09:58 EST
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I'm afraid Heero's not at the end of his shocks for today! Sally's going to have a surprise as well *chuckles* Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: coldsiren On: February 06, 2004 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! but shit shit i thought im going to die because of that cliffhanger.. but please? dont let anyone die snif specially the baby.. please? Arigatou! cant wait for the next chapter.. ahhh..
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:14 EST
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! **gasps for air** AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!*gasp* AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! ***HEAVES*** OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! *clears now sore throat* Ahem, on a more useful note. . . The organization of this chapter was absolutely BRILLIANT. It takes A LOT of talent and work in order to get a chapter, that keeps u hanging off every word like this one does. Had just a few details been in a different order it would of ruined the entire effect of the chapter. AWESOME JOB. Peez oh peez!! PEEZ update soooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!! ~Wanders off spazzing out from the adrenaline high brought on by the story~
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