| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 07:29 EDT
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Yay! no. 100! This is a wonderful fic. Very realistic and detailed with parenthood. Makes me *not* want children anytime soon. It seems so much more complicated when its formed into words. Good thing I never had to bathe a baby or use those clothed diapers. I (nor the baby)wouldn't have made it. UPdate soon and I look forward to what other torture...uh..I mean lessons Heero and Duo have to go through.
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Title: continuation of last review...
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:25 EDT
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Basically I thought of something to add after I pushed "submit" ....I agree with priscel, once it's a real baby I think it'll be a lot easier for them. I mean, they're not going to make as many dumb mistakes because they'll care about the baby so much ...yes that's about it....~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:22 EDT
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Yeah, it's the hundredth chapter!!! Yeah!!! LOL Maybe they really should invest in a nanny, it might make things a lot easier for them because then they wouldn't have to worry about things. Then again, I can't see Duo or Heero willing to leave their baby's life in someone else's hands so I don't think that may happen, not unless they were sure it was the only way to keep their baby from certain death (and I personally don't think that Duo and Heero are that bad!) Anyways update soon ^-^ I'll be waiting ~KIM~
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Title: 100!!!
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to congradulate you on your 100th chapter. What a funny chapter it is too. "Heero was wondering if it wouldn't be safer, not to mention cheaper, to simply put the child into a cage or restraints of sorts once it got to the mobility stage. Somehow though he thought his suggestion might offend the nurse so he kept his thoughts to himself." LOL my parents put me on a kiddie leash when we were in public.
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Reviewed By: priscel---- On: June 10, 2005 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch.98-9.... *huggles Shenlong* I sorry I just love this story!! *gives Shen a cookie* i thought the 'got milk' comment heero made was funny as hell but shoot I didn't expect for Duo to faint. So Sally's giving him pills to keep the hormone levels low but once he stops and the baby's born, whose to say that the levels won't drop off because of the pills? will she give him more pills to raise the levels so that he can fed their baby? Man heero broke the baby's ankle! maybe on their next training session duo should tell him that he should be as gentle with the baby as he is with him, but a bit more gentle. *did i use that word enough* It may also be that they aren't working on a real baby and that's why Heero is doing things too tightly because of the lack of response to his actions, he couldn't tell he was doing it right. When the baby is born, I think he do better. Can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 05, 2005 19:15 EDT
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Cute and funny! Keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:35 EDT
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Poor Heero isn't going to want to touch his kid when it's born if this keeps up. I mean, seriously, if he continues this way he's going to be terrified to touch his own kid. I mean, I know that I would be terrified anyways but already knowing that you might hurt it, that's gonna be bad. Heero's going to be that dad who just watches and refuses to hold the baby because he's scared, isn't he? *shakes her head* that sucks! oh well,how many more chapters before we get to see little sunshine? I can't wait hehehehe Update soon ^_^ ~KIM~
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Yukiko unlog On: June 04, 2005 14:22 EDT
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just a comments about diapers. It exist some re-usable with pression buttons on the sides. It's good for younger children who don't know how to 'pop' buttons yet. maybe they should use it, ne ?
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Title: this history has me stingy... :-P
Reviewed By: Pampers-KND On: June 02, 2005 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this history has me stingy... It is EXCELLENT!!! he had read it .. only the beginning in another part (fanfiction.net), but only the beginning ... and it could not have continued her, for not being able to connect oneself, but after almost I fell down.... XDD you were doing her it completes in another place of fanfiction. It continues. you're a very good writer...
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: May 27, 2005 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel****** On: May 18, 2005 14:28 EDT
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awwwwwww....that was such a sweet and sappy ending. *can't stop smiling then laughs* "A packet of condom..." Ahahaa I knew it!!!! *chuckles some more*
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Reviewed By: priscel- Morning!! On: May 18, 2005 11:50 EDT
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95-- gosh that was sweet. i can feel the toothache already
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Title: faster!
Reviewed By: cody-dark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet lord woman! to say this fic is excellent wud be the understatement of the year! but seriously! faster! i know your busy but think of us... your poor 'patient' adoring public! you need to wite a tleast a million chapters a week^^ but really, this fic just rox, ive never really kept to a long going fic without skimming over bits, authors sometimes get side tracked. but not with this, i keep chekin it everyday just incase theres slight chance you'd gotten to writing another chapter. so go you! cant wait for ch97! *waits patiently hugging duo plushy she wishes she had*
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 17:44 EDT
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awwwwwwwwwww the ending of the ceremony was so sweet and so was the song ^-^ I can't wait to see what's going to happen next ^-^ (though I can sort of guess since Heero and Duo are heading back to their bedroom) hehehe ...Update soon !!! ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 28, 2005 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I see this story updated I have to smile ! Because I know I have somthing good to read ..I just love this story...please update..
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