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Title: The Reader
Reviewed By: narutofan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it has sadly come to an end... :( Well all good things must I guess. I am soooooo looking forward to your next fic. As for the length of this fic.....no worries here. I can't speak for everyone but me personaly I LOVE long fic's. It alows the writer more room for plot development and details that may seem small when you first read it but in the end it becomes a very important part in the end. I can't waite till you write something eles and I have you on my fav list so I can read it as soon as it comes out.*if you do one that is* I hope it has drama, sex, angest and all the things we enjoy when we read about our fav G-Boys! Till then I will just have to waite.......latter :)
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Title: SOB!!
Reviewed By: white angel chi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH!!! *TEARS* I loved that story so much it gave me chills.I am devastated that it is over, and at the same time leaping for joy that Sunshine is a happy and healthy baby boy. I hope that some time in the future you will make a continuation of Chimaera or Equinity (another of my fav. fics) I look fore ward to every fic you write and applaud you every step of the way. I highly recamend you write something and get it published, (I would totaly be one of the first to buy it!)Your work inspired me to write a fic of my own and now I am happily working on my own fic. Hopefully I will be able to get my computer to work, because to my utter dismay I cant seem to read your new fic, Keeping secrets...Heck, the computer says it's not even in existance...sigh...Oh well, good luck with your new fics. (whatever they may be) and I happily await them. Cheers on finishing youre fic, and happy belated halloween. Your continuous fan, White angel Chi!
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Reviewed By: navigator [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muchas gracias Shen (Thank you so much) for the great, amazing novel wrote, it's was great to wait for each chapter and worthy all times. The final chapter was very sweet, the way i was hopping, make me feel good because someone there try their best for give others a good moment. Thank you again. Please no give up writting, shen you are a really good writer because you can do people want to read your material and you give them emotions, good ones. I can´t wait for your new story.
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Title: *crying* so beautiful...
Reviewed By: swordstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crying* i loved it... the whole thing... i decided to write one review at the end for some reason i'm still unsure of. i have followed this story since the beginning, and, let me tell you, i loved it. every word. and you, you are a great writer. a true inspiration. i don't think i'll ever be as good a writer as you are. you are the best writer i've seen ever in all of my four years of reading fanfics. with the inspiration that you have given me, i hope i can write stories worthy of reading. i will keep this and you other stories in my mind always as inspiration. thank you for writing such a masterpiece, a beautiful story such as this shall be cherished forever. thank you again.
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Title: (dont know if first time sent)
Reviewed By: Ryeka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic when you first started writing it on MM.org, I was fascinated the first chapter. For me it rarely happens and I know that I haven't written any reviews until now, and I should have I apologize for that. I find this fic the best I've read (and I read a lot of 1x2/2x1...heh) but I was also wondering if you were going to make a sequel to this, short or what not, you know of many year later after, with Keitaro a little older?
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Reviewed By: Ryeka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 09:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic when you first started writing it on MM.org, I was fascinated the first chapter. For me it rarely happens and I know that I haven't written any reviews until now, and I should have I apologize for that. I find this fic the best I've read (and I read a lot of 1x2/2x1...heh) but I was also wondering if you were going to make a sequel to this, short or what not, you know of many year later after, with Keitaro a little older?
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Title: *Sniff*
Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 08:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have to review for the last chapter. Even as I write this and then send it to my cousin to post I have to say that my office was giving me looks for the tears running down my face. I hope that maybe I will be able to see a small fic on their times being a parent. How would a Keitaro find school to his liking when he has two fathers and not a mother. How would he explain that to anyone? These questions would make a good fic, ne? Well, the sea is calling me for now. I hope you know I read all of your stories, but have no internet and am having to be sent everything by my deticated cousin Tado-chan. I will continue reading for you're a wonderful write I hope to be as good as one day. Hon no arigatou gozaimasu (Thank you for the story). Ja matta! (See you!) ~France
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: Joh Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:47 EDT
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This was the greatest story ever! I want to thank you for sparing with this, (and us, annoying fans) and finishing with your master piece! ^^ Like always we all be waiting for the Famous Shenlong to write one of these interesting pieces. Just hear me, I'm talking for everyone's behalf! I mean I will, I don't know you guys, but I want to tell you: SHE'S AWESOME! STAY WITH HER! ^^. In conclusion, I love the story and I wish you could write another one of these works... if you take requests: a 3x4, if you don't... well you don't.. heh-heh. ^^"
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Title: Owari T-T
Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it. I too have just finished a monster of a fic that took about two years to write. It's a relief, but it's also sad. I'm keeping an eye out for a sequel ^-~ Weissangel24
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Title: Epi
Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get 5 stars for this fic. I can hardly believe that it has been 2 years since the first chapter of this fic. Looking back I can hardly believe how far it has come. You are truly a great writer and you put alot of thought into this piece. Your novel was wonderful to put it mildly. I take my hat off to you. I know this must have taken a lot out of you, but maybe in the near future we (me and your fast amounts of fans) will see another work like this? j/k take your time as you did with this one and create another masterpiece.
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Reviewed By: navigator [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just keeps getting better and better. "Grand theft cell-phone" *snickers*.
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ I love this story. You know that, but I just have to keep telling you. ^-^
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 06:33 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter and Q-ball has been sedated! *snickers* gosh poor trowa...ewww... i knew that once Heero came in contact with the real thing that he wouldn't be so hard like he was with the doll because a living baby reacts, fills, and responds in a variety of ways that a automated doll can't. I'm also glad that you included a statement about Duo's condition and how he looked because for a little while it made it seem that after such a shock to his system He was back to normal, not tired or anything... and that just seemed weird. Even though he didn't have to do natural birth but the strain, the contractions, the pain... it seems it hasn't taken its toll yet. maybe it's because of the epidural... I definitely can't wait for the next chapter!!!! a Breast feeeding Duo is something i don't wanna miss.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
More waiting!!! *sigh* Well now that Sunshine is born I can have a little more patience.
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