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| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] | | Pages (33): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Chase65 (not signed in) On: April 06, 2009 16:25 PDT
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No, you are not horrible! You are an artist and the time you take in crafting your wonderful stories really shows! I just love, love, love 'Waiting'! I did start over at the beginning so I could flow right into Chapter 19, and it was a great week! Naraku really is a slimey modern day politician! I will patiently wait for more no matter how long it is!!
| Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 23, 2009 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was such a nice suprise to find this chapter to read. I really needed it too, after a really krappy week. You write so well, I say again, that I am ready to purchase your book, when ever you publish one! Glad ever so much to read you again. Stay with us. Your addicted (I mean adoring) fan, Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: taixi On: March 20, 2009 13:10 PDT
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I'd not come across this story previously (I only started reading fanfiction in the past year or so) but I'm pleased to have come across it now with your most recent update. This is really an engaging story with an interesting premise (and one which hasn't yet been fully revealed to the readers, which keeps an element of detective work involved on the reader's part). And as a stickler for grammar/spelling/punctuation, I'm pleased to note that you don't make many of the basic mistakes that a lot of other stories have. In short, it's a pleasure to read each chapter and I very much hope to see more! I'm esp. curious to find out exactly what relationship Inuyasha and Kikyo had (esp. given the timeline - she died 50 years ago, and wasn't he born after that? He must have been if he grew up alongside Miroku, since Miroku's human...thus the hanyou/youkai longer childhood doesn't seem to apply in this story), exactly what Inu did 11 years ago which was related to Kag going into a coma for a year, as well as the ways in which Inuyasha has been receiving visions (nightmares) presumably about the prior world (pre-wish on the jewel?) and how those visions will be useful. Thanks for sharing your great imagination with the rest of us...
| Reviewed By: ganzil On: March 13, 2009 17:35 PDT
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I'm so glad that you are still working on this story--it's one of my favorites!! Glad Kaede and Inuyasha finally talked (and I hope that Kagome finds out what's going on soon). Thanks for sharing your stories with us!
| Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in! Too lazy!) On: March 11, 2009 17:32 PDT
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If only I had realized there was an update sooner! I have been terrible about checking my e-mail, though, and did not find the update notice until a little while ago when I was cleaning out my packed inbox. I should have been working on my COBOL project instead of cleaning out e-mails, and I REALLY should have been doing my project instead of reading this chapter. I couldn't help it, though! The temptation was far too much for my burned out brain to bear! LOL I enjoyed the chapter. It was a nice mix of plot advancement and Kagome/Inuyasha interaction. I absolutely love the way you write their characters! Any interaction between them feels very natural and comfortable no matter the situation. Not a lot of authors can pull that off and I think that is part of what makes your stories so attractive and keep me coming back even when I read nothing else. Anyway, it was great getting a new chapter, even if it has been a long time. I can't complain, because I'm as bad if not worse. But I can still bug you for another chapter, right? I hope to see more soon, and I swear, even if we are old and gray by the time you finish it, I'll have continued reading it!
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 19:19 PST
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It took me a while to chatch up, mostly because I havent had any solid amount of time to devote to reading lately... But I really enjoy it. I think perhaps you had their sexual life move too quickly, and Kagome is very OCC but I still like it... I actually prefer her OCC, her personality in the anime/manga never quite fits her persona in the fanfics...
| Reviewed By: morwen_re not logged in On: February 28, 2009 19:21 PST
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Yay! You've updated! I remembered reading this when you were first working on it, but I had to go back and reread to clarify what I had forgotten... Good job, and the flow of the story hasn't been interrupted by a long absence. Keep it up! I want to finish reading this story!
| Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 19:16 PST
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Most eloquent as usual. Very descriptive, enchanting and gripping. It's been a long time and it's good to hear your voice in the literature world once more. Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and I hope the "completed" status for the story is false because, dare I say it, I would have been waiting far too long on this fic lol. Hope to read more of you. Update soon please.
| Title: New Reader
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 10:52 PST
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Hi there, just dropping by to say that you have a very good fic on your hands! I just started reading it a few days ago and I have to say that I am fairly hooked. I am really interested in how much Inuyasha and Kaede really know about what is really going on! Oh! and just a quick segue lol- can you give us more Rin Sesshomaru?! I sense a slight jealousy between Sess and Kohaku, and Rin and Kagura...I'm personally a Rin Sess fan...and she is older...so...is that even a possibility?? Pls think about it! lol. Good luck writing, can't wait to hear (read?) from you again!
| Title: New Reader
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 10:52 PST
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Hi there, just dropping by to say that you have a very good fic on your hands! I just started reading it a few days ago and I have to say that I am fairly hooked. I am really interested in how much Inuyasha and Kaede really know about what is really going on! Oh! and just a quick segue lol- can you give us more Rin Sesshomaru?! I sense a slight jealousy between Sess and Kohaku, and Rin and Kagura...I'm personally a Rin Sess fan...and she is older...so...is that even a possibility?? Pls think about it! lol. Good luck writing, can't wait to hear (read?) from you again!
| Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 00:48 PST
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Thank you so much for updating. I LOVE THIS STORY. I also love and adore Sachi. Well, I love pretty much anything you write. I always eagerly await any new prose you create. But more than anything I hope that you finish this story and Sachi. So please, don't start anything new. Just work on the stories you already have started. And I know from reading your work that you are a perfectionist. But give yourself a little slack, you don't have to redo old chapters. They were lovely, really! :-) Just work on the new stuff. Your faithful reader, Ai.
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 *not signed in* On: February 24, 2009 09:50 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how much I love you right now! :) I'm so glad you haven't fallin' off the face of the web and are going to continue with this story. It has been I long time but there is no need to apologize. Real life, lack of plot bunnies, and an array of other things do get in the way of updating regularly. But your here and writing again and that's all that matters. I've always adored this story and your newest chapter reminded me of that. I can't wait for everything to come to light.
| Reviewed By: mysteriousmaho On: February 24, 2009 09:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its gud 2 know dat u've finally updated.like da other i've re-read da story many a times n am extremely happy 2 know dat even after such a long time u were able 2 reconnect 2 da characters n story n plot.it is a wonderful story, well re-creAted from da anime with a better plot and maturity in da character as well. da emotios r well depicted,without deivating much from the original characters.u may have understood by now dat this is my 1st review 2 u,as a matter of fact it is also my 1st review 2 any author.i would like 2 tell dat i will not wait another 2 yrs for da next update,i have waited long enough as it is.i am not asking u to update every single day,but as a author make it ur point 2 update within a limited period of time ,like once in a week or once in 2 weeks or once in a month .it would b greatly appreciated by us readers
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 18:58 PST
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i love this story so two years or not i'm still with you! what a great update!
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 18:04 PST
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Oh wow! Two years really does fly by fast. Glad to see you back and updating again. Oh, the intrigue in this chapter. And to think, Kaiede is all mixed up in it. That is too cool. I wonder what that politician did to Kagome. Can't remember his name (I have a migraine). Whatever it was, it was bad and I bet it ain't over. Poor Inuyasha is stuck between a rock and a hard place. Can't wait to see what surprises you have in store for us next. Thanks for updating! Snow
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