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| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] | | Pages (33): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Title: Just I Expected It To Be
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gives you standing ovation along with enthusiastic applause*. You never cease to amaze me Quillwing and you certainly never disappoint. The chapter was so funny and I like that, with you, I can never predict what you are going to write in the next one. The sense of mystery found in your fics is wonderful and it gives them an addictive appeal. Once again, your fic was entertaining and kept me hoping there was more. I'm glad that you updated and I hope that whatever is going on with you now works out in the end. I can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling that you have something very special planned for us. As always Quillwing, I love you, and your stories, keep writing fics, always be optimistic, NEVER lose your inspiration and update WHENEVER YOU GET THE CHANCE!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, I almost forgot. Thank you to your beta/editor as none of your wonderful stories would be what they are wihout her.
| Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 08:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a first time lemon that was incredible! The lemon is probably in my top 5, and most of those others are repeat offenders for such things, not that I'D concider them offences of course. Your story truly is unique, I've never seen a story QUITE like it... The closest I've seen is Em-an-lilac's story For All We Know, but that story is slightly different where it's Kagome who wakes up with all her memories of going to the Sengoku Jidai (Warring States Period, InuYasha's time) only to wake up to a different life where she's 10 years older, married to InuYasha, a civil rights LAWYER, and the world's turned on it's end. Your story is quite unique though, it STARTS at the end and goes from there, and not in the usual 'this is the first chapter, don't worry, you'll see it at the end too' sort of starting at the end. No, your story starts with the death of Naraku, and then the Shikon no Tama shifting the world. of course being the AVID fanfiction reader I can probably deduce the greatest plot twist is that InuYasha dreamt of their journeys in the Sengoku Jidai as a child, and 'remembers' Kagome from them, hence why Kaede mentioned that, and Miroku seems to know something as well. It also explains why he checked to make sure he was still naked after Kagome told him to 'osuwari' which translates closer to 'sit dog' then the VIZ 'sit boy' (hmm, that would have been a reasonable translation actually... too bad nobody thought of that when they were working on the actual dub...) Kagome of course still has the Shikon no Tama in her side, since it wasn't removed by the Centipede Demon (as it was in the first episode when Kagome fell through the well) which is another reason she's such a big target. InuYasha suspects that, but isn't 100% sure. Cute Rin by the way, and another thing that's unique about your story that she's grown up at the start of the piece and encouraging Sesshoumaru and Kagura, despite their obvious differences in the current situation. Normally she's still a young child when she encourages those two, or she's an older child and Sesshoumaru's relationships aren't even considered in the story. (Unless you consider his fatherly relationship with Rin) All in all a great piece, and I hope you continue with both this and your other work Sachi (which I read first and declined to review, your comment about this being your first Lemon and the fact that I had to encourage you to write more meant I could vent all my ramblings) Oh, and if you want to honor your reviewers without making your ANs too long, just take a page from one of my other authors and stick "Thanks to my reviewers" and a list of their names at the end. It's quick, doesn't take too much space, and makes people feel happy since you're acknowledging that they've at least been heard, even if you wont deign them with a response in the story. But what do I know, I don't write FFs, I just read them... lots of them... ^^;; even too many of them, or so some would say!
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 22, 2006 12:15 PDT
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Just hoping that this wonderful story might be continued sometime soon. I really like this story and your other one also. I know . . . real life first. Check in later. Cynbad146
| Title: excellent
Reviewed By: angelion On: July 19, 2006 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! All of the characters are well-developed and compliment the new plot while still being true to the originals. Can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 16:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
pleeeeeaaaaaaaassse update!
| Reviewed By: oohgigooh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 08:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
next chapter
| Title: Teddy Bear
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 17:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey quillwing, this is teddy bear, one of your biggest fans and I will stay that way even when you're NOT UPDATING *hint hint*. I don't know your business, or more specifically, what is going on in your life right now. I don't want to sound pushy or anything like that, but I know that it would really mean a lot to your readers (especially me) if you updated. I live for your stories and I think that they are excellently written, as you can clearly see from the scores I gave you. I don't mean for this to come off as impatient, needy, or totally frustrated but I am begging (somehting that I don't do often) to please find the time to update those two incredible stories that you started. Trust me it would be greatly appreciated.
| Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! Very few spelling mistakes through out and a captivating story line. I think I'm hooked. I hope you update soon.
| Title: ::Cheers::
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: May 22, 2006 17:39 PDT
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Yay! I thought that you had forgotten all about this fic and were concentrating on Sachi. Every once in a while I reread the chapter when Mama H. decides to visit Kags at inopportune time - so funny! Thanks for continuing this!
| Title: is it comfy under there?
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story its so intruiging and im glad that u were able to post up a new chap. but take ur time cause i no how important work is and u probably are really busy. (like me 2) nut im really grateful that u posted up a new chap. and i love it ..its totally cool..sweet like ice crea,.**drool***. well neways i love ur work and im glad.. i knew u never abandoned it in the first place..i just that hey maybe Quill is just too busy..hehe . neways thank a ton.. and i hope u are able to find some spare time in which u can post up a new chap. thanks again and ill be cheking up on ur work...thankx.
| Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mean to be rude, but finally you have updated!!! I'd just like to give you your props for being an excellent writer. You have to be the first of at most 10 authors who can make me actually feel the story. I know this is kind of straying from the point, but I would just like to tell you that even peole in Jamaica(my beautiful country) read your wonderful stories. Your lemon in Chapter 12 was far from disappointing. Overall I hope that you update soon in BOTH of your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 16, 2006 16:01 PDT
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i had just about given up until i saw it this morning! yay! you updated! please, please update again soon! i'll give you some cookies if you do!
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 15, 2006 08:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Q, You need to quit your two jobs and get a new job in the writing field. Are you sure that you do not do this for a living? I can imagine that the talented Blackberry might agree with me. The chapter was well written, as always, and I was sooooo glad to see an update. It was heartening to see Sesshoumaru and Rin, ever protecting each other; and Sesshoumaru becoming indebted to InuYasha, to boot. The head of the council is a cool and calculating character that rivals the character of Sesshoumaru, but more manipulative. My brain is now specutlating what Naraku is after, and Kagome's feelings of past familiarity and/or ravenous appetite. Where do we go next, oh talented one? (Bows) Cynbad146
| Title: i love it!
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 08:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story! Please update soon!!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Oi, love the chapter. And am soo glad it wasn't abadoned. So I was excited as hell when I saw it was updated :D It just keeps gettin better as you're able to put the chapters out. Now let's see what inuYasha can figure out on his own. Cause his brother doesnt want bothered, or so it would seem. Great chapter. Excellent story. Update when you can....soon hopefully. > :D
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