| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: die4InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice lemon and it was very funny of how kagome was trying to hide inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 11, 2005 13:21 PDT
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OMG LMAO!! The last part with Kag's mom was hysterical!! Bet she was wishing the floor would just swallow her up. Can't wait for the next chapter. It seems that Inu has either been waiting 500 years for Kagome or he knows that she's got the Shikon inside her. I'm confused as to which it is. I know that with his wish he somehow changed history, is he aware of that fact? Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 05:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN HOT ITS NOT FUNNY
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Reviewed By: Evangeline_Lily On: August 10, 2005 02:19 PDT
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Very good lemon for it being your first try. Pretty good chapter over all. Really funny. (Well in some parts. I'm too evil to say which ones, though.) Well, have a nice time writing the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 19:50 PDT
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Okay, let's see...you said this was your first time writing a lemon...and I say I don't believe you *g* because that was awesomely HAWT and well-written to boot! As for the whole story, it's fast become a favorite. You have great descriptive ability (I feel like I'm watching events unfold, not just reading about them) and have created a wonderfully believable AU. And of course I love the chemistry and tension between Inuyasha and Kagome (the lemon notwithstanding!). Kudos to you and to your beta for a job well done! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Btw, the scene with Kagome's mom in this chapter had me rolling!! Kagome's and Inuyasha's reactions to the situation were priceless.
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Reviewed By: Amie On: August 09, 2005 17:41 PDT
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I can only reiterate previous compliments - very good fic, I like the Hunter/Alliance set-up, the flashes of humor (Mrs. Kagome's Mom and the sword - heh heh), and also the complications of the Sango/Miroku secondary romance. The lemon was...commanding! You're a natural! ;-D Actually, your writing is skilled in all scenarios, so a lemon would be no different. Glad I stumbled into your world. I'm looking forward to updates. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I think that has got to be one of the best lemons I have ever read...you did a marvelous job on it! ^_^ It was wonderful, so you don't need to worry about how good it was...you wouldn't even be able to tell the difference between your lemon and someone who has written many of them! Anyway, great job on the chapter! I thought it was halariously funny how you made Kagome's mother pop her head back in and tell her daughter she picked up her clothes. That was halarious! :D And as always, your description and wording is done wonderfully! You never cease to amaze me with you vast amount of talent! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-nsi On: August 09, 2005 13:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME lemon! One of the best I've ever read cuz it was so detailed and seemed like I was experiencing it. I love you story and hope you have another amazing chapter soon.
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Title: LadyBarrista
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 10:03 PDT
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It is my humble opinion that you did a very good job writing your first lemon **fans self vigorously**. The chapter was (as with the entire story to date) clear, well written and highly entertaining. My favorite part is the little exchange between Kagome and Mrs. Higurashi about the shredded clothes and the sword. Looking forward to reading more of this story.
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Title: .
Reviewed By: ashley. On: August 09, 2005 00:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGRRReeeaaatttt, hehehehe dont worry that was even better than frosted flakes, it suprized me that this was your first lemon, by the way you wrote it i was sure you were an expert, hehehe i had to laugh when kags said she fell in bed, she fell into some sex's what she fell into,-.^ i gave you tens for writing and grammer cause i dont know what it means, smiles ashley
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Title: Waiting on a Wish
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:54 PDT
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She stuck him in the closet. OHMYGOD, I haven't laughed that hard in a long time. In the closet, does this make him a closet hanyou? This fic is just priceless, I'm enjoying it so much. It was an excellent first lemon, and a wonderful first time for them. It made me smile and heave a BIG sigh. I just love a good lemon. Now, where the hell did I put my cigarettes.
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Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic.. Can't wait on the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 00:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're there WONDERING if that lemon was any good...holy ::gets out a fan:: the best and most accurate that i have ever read made me wish i still had a boyfriend to go to for things like that!
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Reviewed By: Kay4852 On: August 07, 2005 23:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Your lemon was perfeccttt, i couldnt ask for any better =D. Hope you update soon!
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Title: i've been waiting for this one
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your first lemon definitely read as though you had experience in writing one. the feel of it was very much what i would have expected it to be between the two. the emotion was perfect and i was laughing out loud (and also cringing) when kags mom discreetly admitted she knew about the way kag spent her night. ha! yikes!! keep up with the updates. each new chap is better than the last. and i'm not just saying that cuz the last one had a lemon. ;p
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