| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 25, 2004 07:20 PDT
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That was both cute and hot. Its so hard to find both of those things in one chapter. I Think Jinenji's mom should be one of the people in charge of the orphanage. It would expalin the garden, right? Also, I was wondering how old Inu is. He seems much older than in the series, but so do all the other characters. I imagine taiyoukai reach cognitave maturity more slowly than humans, so I always figured that he was physically older than he looked or acted.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 25, 2004 03:40 PDT
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i think the citrus was completely plausible...first off inu is sex on two legs n second of all its not like she didnt stop him. n e how great chapter. this is turning out great and is definitely one of my favorite inuyasha stories. i can't wait to read more. thanks for sharing this with us
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 00:25 PDT
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Yes! Thank you for the update! I really like this so far and I hope to read more from you soon! This chapter was great!
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 23:00 PDT
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*sits patiently and waits*
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Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! It's beautiful! I had to laugh at Kagome when she woke up in his bed. And of crouse it's the ears! Who doesn't love them! I can wait to read more! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: October 24, 2004 03:25 PDT
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you've got to cotinue the story! please update soon! pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaassssse?!
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Reviewed By: Janine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 01:53 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one so far. It's interesting and it's well written- big plus! I look foward to reading more. :)
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 21:21 PDT
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Am thoroughly enjoying this fic. Your writing is straightforward but still conveys so much. I *adored* Inu and Kag's reactions to one another...Inu seems to be a little further along in the realization that kagome is going to be an important part of his life whereas Kags is still beating herself up for lapse in professionalism :) Well, I'll admit from the medico-ethical point of view, it's a no no to fall for a patient..but hey, this is Inuyasha we're talking about! ;) Joking aside, I really am enjoying your writing. The amount of time and effort you invest in it is evident. Am looking forward to an update :)
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: October 22, 2004 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You would laugh if you knew how thrilled I was to find this update! I keep track of a LOT of stories (hated hate to count and see exactly how many), but right now, I can honestly say that this is the story that has my attention. I am VERY intrigued, and I'm pretty sure I will continue to be if the first chapters are any indication. This third part did nothing to discourage my interest, that is for sure! ^_^ And suprisingly, I do tend to be a nitpicker, but I couldn't find any typos to point out! So you are doing a really great job in that department! Your writing flows smoothly, easy to read, you do a great job detailing character viewpoints and emotions, and you obviously do a good job in double checking and editing your work. Great job! I can't wait to see to see the next chapter, and I hope you manage to post it soon. I'll be eagerly waiting for it!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:50 PDT
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Absolutely fantastic! I went into this with low hopes, and came out like this: begging for more!I understand life is difficult to work around, so I wait patiently for word of new updates to this unique twist on the I/K romance!
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Reviewed By: clavira On: October 22, 2004 09:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, come on... you know we really like your story, (well, everyone, who reads it ;p) so just update, ´kay?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 22, 2004 03:39 PDT
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i love it! i dont think i've read anything like this before. you are a very good author and i dont care how long i need to wait for you to post another chapter in this fascinating story.
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Reviewed By: yourbaba On: October 22, 2004 00:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! It's so sweet so far, and I'm interested in finding out about inuyasha's past. This is a totally original plot and I must give you props simply for not doing the same plot as most AU stories. Keep up the awesome work, I really can't think of anything that could improve this story. I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter. Again, keep up the awesome work! you're a great writer!
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 23:05 PDT
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Wonderful! I cant wait for more!
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:08 PDT
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Excellent! And so it begins... Kagome and InuYasha smitten... Sango and Miroku already together. Nice. Great work! I am really, really, really (did I say really?!) looking forward to the next chapter! :) Joy
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