| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..this is an excellent story! I must say that your abilities at writing are wonderful! You have a wonderful sense of how much description to use, its just the right amount. It gives the reader insite to the characters, while still leaving a little bit to their own imagination! :D Your wording is wonderful, and I must say that the characterization of the characters in this story is wonderful. You adjusted everyone's personality and mannerisms to the point where it fits well with the new surrounding, while still keeping true with the anime/manga. I'm just totally in awe at how wonderful this is, really, I never suspected it to be so wonderful. I have to admit, I was very reluctant to read this story...the summary describing the plot really didn't appeal to me or sound remotely interesting...but I'm glad I gave you and this writing a chance. I should slap myself for doubting it, because now that I've read it, I can honestly say that it is wonderful, mind-blowing, fantastic, fabulous, excellent, intriguing, and definately quality above all. Its very nice the length of your chapters, but I love most of all the fact that quality seems to be considered over quantity. Thank you! :D And please, don't doubt your own writing and need to correct things, because anything you could possibly produce will be wonderful, is wonderful! ^_^ Sorry about this long review...I'm just so enthusiastic about your writing skills and this story in general! Please update again when you can! Bye! |
Reviewed By: That which is Inuyasha On: July 23, 2005 04:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is really great. How'd u come up with the idea of an alliance between humans and youkai? Please keep updating and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 18:14 PDT
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No sorry is needed especially with all the fluff in that chapter. Really sweet Inuyasha/Kagome I enjoy how you write the charactors this is true a great story.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 22:29 PDT
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All is forgiven. Adorable chapter. I be grinnin' like a fool. Can't think of anything remotely constructive to say. Crap.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: July 17, 2005 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 00:37 PDT
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You are horribly evil. Six new chapter notifications in my mailbox. I hoped against hope that maybe it was real, maybe you'd gone nuts and actually added six chapters at once. But no. Not even one new chapter. If I wasn't so desperate for more of this story I'd kill you and make furniture from your bones. Of course assuming I actually knew where you lived and was mentally capable of taking a life and had any clue how to make furniture, out of anything really, let alone human bones. Guess I'll just have to shake my fist, then. But a mean fist shakin' it'll be!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 0 On: July 17, 2005 00:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. I really love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update. :)
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Reviewed By: Sango160 On: June 24, 2005 14:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! You are the best at writing lemons! How did you get such a creative idea?
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami!! This fanfic is just great! You have me really hooked in here. There are so many questions, mysteries, like those dreams and flashes of pain that Inuyasha suffers. I love the scenes when they let their instincts sweep them off their feet. They are so... hot! You have a great style, I can't wait to read more of this fic.
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Reviewed By: northduff On: June 16, 2005 23:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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this fic makes me want to smile :D oh heck. i love sesshoumaru and i think sess/kag is just sexy and adorable but in this fic he seems to be such an unfanthomable prick. hahahaha...good job by the way ;)
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:23 PDT
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Hooray! You updated, I was starting to worry…but then you go and knock my socks off!! I am so on the edge of my seat….don't let me fall!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 23:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have finally caught up with your fic and i want more! i tell you, occasionally i just scan over lines and even paragraphs because a story gets so boring or overly detailed. i have yet to do that while reading your work. it's too good. please update when you can. i'm hopelessly addicted. i wonder tho, how exactly is naraku going to #@$! everything up for our fav couple. can't wait to see. ja.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: June 14, 2005 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Hiya! (pt. II)
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: June 14, 2005 07:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job! I knew that you were a good read. Im glad I wrote a review before... it makes this one a little bit less of a surprise. Anyways... Thanx so very much for the update. Wouldnt mind another soon... Hey! What can I say? Im a greedy! lol Anyways... hope to hear that everythings good! Ill bee seeing ya soon I hope! BUY!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon (not signed in) On: June 14, 2005 05:44 PDT
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I am SO glad that you updated! So much so that I copied the chapter and forwarded it to work so that I could read it on my lunch break today. (I have the net at work but they track our surfing so I have to behave) But since I won't be able to review then, I'm dropping you a review now to at least say thank you for updating, and I hope you update again soon! ^_^
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