| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: June 12, 2005 05:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im one of those lazy read 'em and never review 'em types... so when I write something either Im giving you some good and VERY MUCH NEEDED advice, or, Im telling you what an awesome story it is Im reading. Well luckily for you its the later and Im here for only two reasons: 1) To tell you what a good story this is. 2) To demand an update. Well there you have it. Its a good fic and I need an update. Afterall I wouldnt be doing my civic duty for all other Inu Yasha fanfic fans if I didnt ask for one, know would I? Well thanx for the story, hope life's all good, and I hope I get an update. See Ya soon, I HOPE!
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Reviewed By: Some Dude1234567890 On: June 05, 2005 22:24 PDT
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GREAT FANFIC!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!
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Reviewed By: leilachan (nsi) On: June 05, 2005 00:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's really late so i will have to finish reading the last posted chapter tomorrow. but, i thought that i would go ahead and review before i shut down. i can't believe how well written this fic is. i am *also* Very anal(not in that way @'@) in regards to absolutely perfect spelling and grammar. i mean, if you speak the language, you should be able to write it and express it properly. good job. but, besides all of that, you could have mispelled every word in this story and i would have read it to the finish and stayed interested. you have a unique storyline that i haven't already run across. that, i think, is the best part of any great fic. please keep writing and update when you can. you've made me so happy. i love that fuzzy feeling you get when you stumble across a new fav. story! ^_* ...of course after writing about how i'm anal 'bout spelling, i probably mispelled a crapload since i'm so tired. oh well.
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Reviewed By: glass thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 18:41 PDT
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wow, you know i've been looking for a story to become my new obession, my other ones have resently ended, and i think i have found it in your story. it's intreging, well thought out and has a great new universe that i can't wait to become aquainted with. great job so far. i like the way you are doing inuyasha's character, he seems to remember the past adventure yet not at the same time it's a interesting mix. update soon please i'll be waiting in anticipation.
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Title: Kawaii!!
Reviewed By: PhoenixBright [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 13:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loveded it. Hey! Now you have 100 reviews! That's 100 times more than I have! Lol. Well, umm...byes!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 02, 2005 12:53 PDT
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i was getting my hopes up that you uploaded a new chapter but alas. *pout* looking forward to another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 11:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No reviews since April? That's just not right. This is very good. It's almost cruel, the way all the tiny half-details slowly fill in the story, making us want to know the whole thing all the more desperately. A sweet torment, keep it up ;) Oh, and Kagome and Inuyasha are hot stuff :)
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Reviewed By: black girl 06 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You had my undivided attention the entire time I read your first chapter. It was really moving and the imagery was awesome.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, wow! I started reading your story because of the Fanguild and I cannot believe I had missed something so extraordinary! This is truly an original story. Your characterization of Kagome and Inuyasha along with Sango and Miroku are incredible! I have even enjoyed your author notes about being OCD about editing! I know what you mean, I am totally like that! But your OCD is defiantly paying off, your fic is spotless. I have yet to find a spelling error (which I search for in everything I read for some unknown reason!) and your writing is so smooth. I never trip over your words or have to reread because of confusion (you are the only writer I have given all 10's to). You are defiantly an excellent writer. I was sorry to hear about your recent spot of bad luck. I hope everything is getting better for you! Take your time with writing and know you have some eager readers here to support you!
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Reviewed By: Time and Again On: April 18, 2005 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to congradulate you. This is one of the most original and intriguing stories I've ever read. I'm truely enjoying reading it and I can't wait to see where you take it in the end. I'm sorry you've been having such a rough time of it lately and I hope your life comes back together for you without too much pain. Keep up your writing, when you can. You're wonderful to read and your story is a delight. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work! ~Time and Again
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 22:16 PDT
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Oh my! Wow. That is an amazing story! You have a unique and refreshing way of having an interesting story line and beautifully written text.Please update soon I look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Cookie15 On: April 11, 2005 20:09 PDT
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I can't tell you how excited I was to see that you'd updated. Sorry to hear about your family/school/burglary setbacks. They say it comes in 3's though, so hopefully that'll be the last of it. Story-wise, I like that you've incorporated nearly all of the characters in this chapter...even Rin and Kohaku (kind of.) I also love your description of some of the other Alliance members like Akadansha. Keep up the great writing...I'll be looking forward to chapter 9.
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Reviewed By: allegroassai's too lazy to log in On: April 05, 2005 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i walked in on this story and wish i'd found it sooner. 'fun to read' sums it all up nicely. you created a colourful universe with lifelike and likeable characters. good job! i'll be following this story. do you have a notify-list (that would make things remarkably easier as i'm not what you would call an internet whore;-)? good luck on your next chapter! cheers, akari
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work i really like it!!!
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Reviewed By: SharaJean On: April 02, 2005 23:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story. I think it is entertaining and interesting. It held my attention and I can't wait for more.
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