| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: April 02, 2005 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an Awesome story so far!! I've been completely glued to my chair and computer reading this. I love seeing a new twist to a great story line like InuYasha, and you have done that completely. Thanks for sharing and hope to see an update soon. cherylv@seward.net
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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thats hot and I love the way u write. Keep up the good work and hope you can post soon.
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Reviewed By: morwen_re not logged in On: March 29, 2005 20:00 PST
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great job keeping everyone in character! i lovew the older rin, too, as she is one of my favorite characters in the anime. i hope you update again soon, as i had almost thought that you had given up on this story. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 28, 2005 18:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAY!!! omg a burglary? thats terrible. im glad you had time to update tho. thanks so much =D
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! AHHH! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon (not signed in) On: March 28, 2005 17:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful story. I love the world you've created with the Alliance, hunters, and everything. Is everyone a reincarnation or something? Is that why Inuyasha gets those flashes of pain? Will there be flashbacks to previous lives? I like how everyone is in character. The whole confrontation with Inuyasha and the Alliance was wonderful. The questioning makes you wonder how much they know about the attacks. And Naraku will be behind it all again. Will the Shikon no Tama make an appearance? I hope there will be more Inuyasha and Kagome next chapter! Take care! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: March 28, 2005 16:41 PST
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Thank you so, so, sooooo much for updating! LOL, you know I love this story if I go out of my way to read a new chapter when I haven't read any fanfiction in I don't know how long (my seasonal job keeps me busy this time of year). ^^;; But when I saw you updated this story, I just had to come read! It was a great chapter, though I missed it not having any Kagome/Inuyasha interaction. ^^ But I'm sure the next chapter will have some, so I'll just have to wait for it! Update again soon, okay? *puppy dog eyes* MIT 0,15
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead... not signed in On: March 28, 2005 08:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I see my email telling me you have another chapter posted I get so excited! Your story is so well written, and even though a lot of the time I don't like reading AU's, this one is so well done that it's believable with the characters. I also love the bigger role that Miroku and Sango take in this fic (and their relationship in it!) since too often they are left out and forgotten. I'm sorry that you had so many issues to deal with, but good that everything is back in order. I have some speculations over what is going on with InuYasha's head, but I think I'll spare you the guesses until I read the next chapter. Great update!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: February 02, 2005 12:47 PST
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waah! update soon! i want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: akarikou On: January 28, 2005 14:59 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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nice one! i've gotten a bit tired of all those inuyasha's reincarnation meets kagome / inuyasha waiting for kagome - plots ... before i walked in on your story, that is. yours is the best proof that even a very popular plot line can be presented in a way as to make readers think they read it for the first time. i like the way you describe the main characters, but what i love even more is the way you handle your side charas. miroku and sango, what a couple! i'll be watching this, and since i know it can be hard to find time for writing, i'm wishing you good luck for your next installment. cheers, akari
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Reviewed By: walkingcontradiction On: January 16, 2005 02:59 PST
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Regarding the revisions to the earlier chapters-- I read them before and after and they seem to have developed better in the sense of their flow, the story and plot come more smoothly and seemed less forced. I am not certain exactly what you changed or if you added any components, but it seems to be an improvement to me. I enjoyed the story greatly before and even more so now. I like that it has a detailed plot and that there is more depth in the characters and their interactions than is seen in other fictions. I can't really think of much in the way of constructive criticism which I know is helpful and wanted by serious authors, next time I review I'll try to leave some more feedback.
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Reviewed By: Prinsess_serentiy29*not logged in* On: January 13, 2005 13:25 PST
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Hey that is one great story there youve made my favorite list dont rush but dont for get to update ¢¾lurv¢¾ ~Randi~
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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 07:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am I think reviewing for the first time. I would have sooner but well i could never review. You have written a beautiful story and I can,t wait for the next chapter so please update soon! Wonderful job!!!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 18:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic!!! It's awesome! Well-written, thought-out, substantial plot. Great! Can't wait for another update!!!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: December 12, 2004 22:54 PST
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You've made me happy! ^_~ Ah, lovely chapter...Inuyasha and Kouga posturing, fluff, humor, information, and sexual innuendos all rolled up in one little chapter! Could it get any better than that? ... Well, yes it could. With a lemon! LOL I can't wait for the next update!
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