| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: ktakn On: August 07, 2005 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooooooooooo that was absolutely awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i congratulate you!!!! for your first lemon it was amazing!!!! keep going!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 07, 2005 12:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can not believe that was your first lemon. Bravo! You seem to have a lot of sensitivity in your writing. I really love the Inu/Kag relationship and how it is progressing. You are on a roll so do not hold back now! Thank you for sharing your talent, Cynbad146.
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Title: Great Chap!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 05:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story & it was a good lemon. Very descriptive. But the best part was Kag's mom, i laughed my head off :P Very nice way to ease the "pent up" tension, lol.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 21:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, Now I know I reveiwed here...I think...anyways, I like the story, alot. Like the whole concept of it actually. Being thats it a really good story, I only have one complaint...whens the next update? ( hehehe)
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Title: .
Reviewed By: ashley. On: August 04, 2005 00:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah good fic, i'm tryna write a fic too, its at adultfan.net if you wanna see it, its real short though, anyways i like this one keep on writin for us loyal fans. toodles ^.~
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loven your story. keep up the good work. i cant wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Holy Trin On: August 03, 2005 07:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! I enjoyed it so much that I went back and read it again as soon as I finished it. It's original, with a great style of writing and has the ability to catch you up with trhe charecters. I am completely and utterly in love with this story and if you have an update list, I'm begging you , please add me! xx Didar
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 01:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this chapter was phenominal! But man, it was so dramatic and emotional toward the end there! I loved the action and the drama rolled into one, it made for a very exciting, action-packed chapter! But...man...that ending! *Pulls out hair* You're so evil for leaving it off there...but I still love you for writing this, just the same, even with that horrible cliff-hanger. Anyway, keep up the great work and please update again soon! :D I'll be waiting patiently!
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Title: I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Care120 On: August 02, 2005 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly adore and love your story. Your writing is absolutly the best I've ever read. i love Inuyasha and Kagome in your story and how you've depicted them. The discriptions of what they look like or what their wearing is great and really helps. The plot and story line is great and original. This chapter had me at the edge of my seat. Thank you for geeting it out so fast. I can't wait for the next chapter. I just wanted to say again how much I love your story and I enjoy reading it. Thank you so much for continuing to write and update it and please update as soon as you can 'cause I can't wait for the next chap.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS a really Great story. OK, next question...whens the next update????????
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Title: Wow!!!
Reviewed By: KenYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 10:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! That is not just a cliffy ... that is a mile high cliffhanger. Wow! I love it! I am so happy to see that you updated. Did I already tell you that I love your story? No? Oh well, now you know ... this is one of the best fanfiction I ever read. I think I will read the new chapter again ... since I like it so much ... bye!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 31, 2005 00:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. It seems very well written. I think I read some of this story along time ago. Is that a possibility? If so, I think that it is even better the second time around. Just the right mix. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so happy you updated. and yes, that was a good first cliffie. i hope everyone is okay. it is naraku behind all the attacks, right? did he throw a tittie fit because sess said, "no"? hmmm. i love all the s3xual tension between inu and kag. nice touch. ;p please post the next chap when you get the chance. i cant wait.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 00:38 PDT
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great chapter! I really love this story!! I don't get to review often because my computer seems to dislike MM.org, but I really love your story and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 16:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww. shippo is too cute. i am glad that inu has decided to open up a bit more with kag. this fic is really getting good. i cant wait to see where you go with naraku. hopefully you can post those other two chaps for us real soon.
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