| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:45 PDT
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just so you know inuyasha has black eyebrows.......but good work. keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 12:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was every so much worth the wait, so many little pieces seem to be starting to fall into place. How very in character for Kouga to 'allow' InuYasha to be with Kagome... 'for now'. The angst and pain of InuYasha's memories yanked at my heart. The incorporation of the physical sensations around the 'memories' adds just the right amount of realism. Kagome's sense of familiarity and 'rightness' as they shared that moment in her room was beautiful. I really enjoyed the 'mother/daughter talk' in the kitchen, that just felt so right-on and had me laughing to boot. Yes the chapter was very long, and I was transfixed through the whole thing. The premise of this fic is brilliant. I have been following it for a 'very long time' so you take as long as you need, dear. Genius should never be rushed. This story is absolutely wonderful. Kudos on another marvelous chapter!
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Title: Whooopie
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 09:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated!!!!! great stuff just one request stop taking so stinkin' long. your humble fan
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURAY! You put in fluff in the very beginning! My favorite way to start a story! And I havn't gotten there yet (not even close) but please udate soon! This story is really really good!
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Reviewed By: clavira89 On: June 15, 2007 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really mind that it took you a bit longer - as long as you do update. I loved the chapter and I'm really looking forward to find out what Inuyasha has to do with Kagomes coma-year! Keep up the good work (as if you wouldn't ;)) and update as soon as possible!!!
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Reviewed By: foxonfire On: June 14, 2007 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great fic here, whatever you do, do NOT stop! I keep checking all the time for new chaps.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 02:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You leave us with soooo many questions! How much does Inuyasha remember? Is this really the future? Is Naraku going to take advantage of Inuyasha securing Sesshoumaru's release? Is Kagome preggers? Why was Kagome in a coma and what did Urasuei hav to do with it? Will Souta's website help Inuyasha? How are the time frames in their lives so connected? Does the Shikon still exist? If it does, was Inuyasha's wish selfish and will he have to pay a price? Will he have to sacrifice himself and, if so, will Sesshoumaru at least attempt to bring him back? Is Nakamura Naraku? If Naraku was able to birth Kagura, does he have the jewel or a part of it? What is in the councils records that is so important? Are there documents that will reveal the past adventure. Who is Akadansha...really? And what is she? Will Kohaku have to suffer the same fate as before? Will Miroku's windtunnel come back? Will Inuyasha end up with another rosary since Kagome seems to subconsciously remember it? Does Kaiede remember what had happened before. How much does Sesshoumaru remember? You have left us with so many questions! Such a wonderuful mystery. I am dancing in place waiting for the next installment! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 23:07 PDT
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Thank you Darnit for finally updating one of my stories, I was so missing you. Sorry about the harshness but I get a little edgy when my favorites go M.I.A. I see doors are being opened and what they're experiencing is just the beginning. I wonder how Kagome will take it when she finds out what Inuyasha is keeping secret from her. Kagome's fam is cool, her mom is funny and her brother is just what you expect a little brother to be. Well pleeeeaaassse don't keep me waiting too long for another update, wishing ya the best, happy writing.
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words can't even begin to describe how happy I am that you UPDATED!!!! Just writing that word gives me chills. I have been craving for a chapter from either one of your stories (Waiting on a Wish and Sachi) because I've been going out of my mind with boredom on this site. I can never seem to find a one-shot that has a decent plot and let's face it, incredible sex. It's one or the other with these other writers, but you are the complete package. I liked the chapter, it was sort of a reprieve from all the hustle and bustle of their love life and I got to see a little more into the deeper plot of the story with their past and all. The accident and coma were a good touch by the way. I wasn't disappointed. I hope that you update really soon on either Waiting on a Wish or Sachi. It's good to see that you are alive and well. God Bless You and continue write such amazing stories, and let no one tell you can't make it. You are an excellent writer.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 13, 2007 09:53 PDT
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So happy to get an update -doesn't really matter how long it takes, I'm just happy that you are sticking with it.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 07:27 PDT
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You, my dear Q, are always worth the wait! So InuYasha retained his memories after he made the wish on the Shikon no Tama? It appears his wish was to have a 2nd chance with Kagome ("Don't Fail. Not this time"). The "accident" is reminiscent of the old witch that resurrected Kikyo with a part of Kagome's soul in the manga. I LOVE your story!!! I know you will update when you can :D
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: June 13, 2007 00:36 PDT
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hmm I'm not quite sure how the coma and Inuyasha fit together yet..but I'm pondering. kagome's gonna be upset about what he did to her clothes ha. great chapter! can't wait for the next one though they're always worth the wait
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: June 12, 2007 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you!!! Your story rocks. I'm so glad your writing again. And we understand...at least I do, real life can put a hold to any and all things with the internet. I hope you'll clear up all of the questions in the next chapter. I love the Inu/Kag interaction too. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: June 12, 2007 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Triple backflips! Waving of banners! Happiness reigns! I was so glad to see you update this story. It is one of my favorites and I intend to be here for the long haul. Your stories are fantastic. The over abundance of new cheer cells in my brain has made it hard for me to comment on the chapter, except to say that it was great. I really love how you are writing InuYasha and Kagome's character. Their connection seems electric. I can not wait to see where this information, that InuYasha is mulling over, will take us. What a ride! Thank you for coming back, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: June 12, 2007 17:57 PDT
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I am so ecstatically happy that you've updated!!! You have NO IDEA how this made my day -- great installment, as usual -- and a few more pieces to the puzzle -- very intriging.... I SO wish there could be a few more IY stories as well-written with great characterizations and INTERESTING as this one. Again THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! ....*as she stumbles out of the oasis and off to wander in the desert that is IY fanfiction....*
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