| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jarzy On: August 01, 2006 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, i was begining to loose hope in fan fiction authors. your story has blown my socks off. not only is each chapter over twenty pages long, your grammar and spelling is perfect, you've got the characters personality down to a t. the story itself rocks the cazba and you seem to be pretty constant with you updates (i just started reading it) anyway, i've built a miny shrine in your honor and i think this story is great. thankyou
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Reviewed By: koty On: July 29, 2006 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. i have read it in fanfiction.net but never finished it because i couldn't find it. i hope i can finish reading it this time. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: July 27, 2006 20:57 PDT
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Hey, life happens. It's so good to see you writing again. I hope Inuyasha tells Kagome about everything soon. It'd be just his luck to have Naraku spill the beans. If Naraku knows anything, that is. Hope to see you posting more frequently.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (not signed in) On: July 27, 2006 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~runs around in circles~ You updated! I love this chapter! It took me a minute to figure out who they were going to see before they actually got there. I hope you know that you can write, waaayyy better than most people who have like 500 reviews(for which I do not understand). Now how about that next chapter?
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: July 26, 2006 23:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! Your back!! I'm soooo excited, I absolutely love this story!!! Hope you stay and grace us with another brillent chapter soon. I also love Sachi as well so keep up the great work and I'll be waiting. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 19:52 PDT
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Thank you so much for updating! I love this story, and I continually check to see if any new chapters have been added. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: rinlover(offline) On: July 26, 2006 17:15 PDT
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*paws* Update! Pleaaase! You must update! *dies*
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in) On: July 26, 2006 16:54 PDT
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I'm not sure if I should be thrilled that you updated, or upset that you left off where you did! Gah! And I was all set to see Inuyasha flip out and then make up with Kagome...ah well, I guess that just means you have to get the next chapter up sooner! Like, say, tomorrow? I know, I know, far too much to hope for...but you know that no matter how long it takes you, I'll eagerly be awaiting that chapter! So post as soon as you can, okay? ^_^ Anyway, as for comments about the chapter, I loved the inclusion of two such rarely used characters. When Miroku was talking to the mysterious voice, I was trying so hard to guess what old woman from the series it could be. And I did guess correctly just before the comments about the herb gardens, which would have given it away if I hadn't already figured it out. But it is an interesting set up you've got, with the hanyou apartment building! Now if we can only get Kagome in there without any major mishaps, hmm? LOL
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 14:49 PDT
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Ah, man!!!! So evil, leaving the confrontation to the next chapter! I really enjoyed the part at the beginning where Miroku and Sango walk right by Kagome.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 10:52 PDT
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Welcome back! I don't think that I have reviewed this story yet... oops? I love the characterizations of each of the characters. They stay true to the characterizations of each in the canon story. Your beginning was haunting, and I see the build-up to where the tragic consequences took place. I look forward to seeing how you 'save' them in this go-round. I'm a real Miroku fan, so nice job of 'torturing' him in this chapter - you could just see the looks on his face as he tried to make the best of a series of bad choices. Great job! Of course - I really look forward to the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan nsi On: July 26, 2006 05:33 PDT
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I just got home from work at 4 in the morning dead tired checked my email and was just THRILLEd to see an update on this and well I of course stayed up tpo read it. I so adore this story but right now I am too tired for a coherant thought other then I can't wait for the next chapte I really really can't wait I am soooo excited!!!! and now I must sleep!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 26, 2006 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so "tickled" that the chapter was up when I was checking in with you! You never disappoint us with your writing talents. It was straight forward that Kagome realized that it was InuYasha's human night. Great introduction of Jinenji and his raspy mom. If you had writer's block, then I certainly could not tell from this chapter. Well written! Loved it! Bravo! Cynbad146 (Also gives standing ovation and yells "More!" "More!")
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Title: Chap. 15
Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating!! I just love this story so much! I am so anxious to find out how Kagome is received, just walking in and all ;) Wonderful chapter, Quill.
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Title: w00t! Update!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 23:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am so much glad you were FINALLY able to update this wonderful story. Very surprising and informative as well....bringing in Jinenji and his Ma like that...and the whole situation was really funny as well...wonder if Inu will try and kill Miroku anyways, lol...Now...what awaits Kagome in that other building....only the author knows for sure know...lmao... Update when you can.... :P
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 25, 2006 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo! Why'd you stop there?! Oh well. I had a funny feeling it was that old woman or that 'lady exorcist' that was on the intercom. Really liked it though. I hope we don't have to much of a wait before the other one comes out. Nice going! :)
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