| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! i want to know whats going to happen sooooo badly!!i wont be able to sleep!! whats inuyasha been dreamin bout and it has to do with the past (first chapter) what did he wish for i kind of know but it cumpuzzles me!! do the remember at all what happened before? will they? omg i need to know i love this story officially!!!! update as soon as possible!!!!
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! that lemon was actually alot, and i mean alot, better than the majority of lemons that i have read, that was extremly good for a first time, anyway you have an awsome fic goin on here, i really love it. im also a big fan of your other fic, Sachi, it's really good too. I honestly love your fics right now because they're like a breath of fresh air compared to alot of fics i've been reading. anyways, great fic, i loved it, KEEP WRITING!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 17:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I hope this story wasnt abandoned. Please say it isnt so.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I keep checking my favorites list to see if you might have updated your story...but alas, I've experienced disappointment again. I hope RL gives you a break soon so your other reader's and I can read more chapters of your wonderful story
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Reviewed By: Wren On: September 03, 2005 12:19 PDT
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I'm impressed. That was your first lemon and it was one of the best I had ever read. It was actually the characters in bed (or against the wall) instead of two random bodies. Plus the arrival of Kagome's mother was absolutely hilarious. As the author alerts aren't working, I have bookmarked your profile and keep checking back for updates! Wren
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyasaloverr1956 On: September 01, 2005 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was good!!!I kept looking for an update, couldnt find one till I saw someone review on chapter 12. Damn its hard trying to get this to refresh sometimes. First lemon, huh? Well, that was one of the best ones Ive come across. If I smoked, I wouldve lite a cigerette. lol. But damn, I really love this story, so now, whens the next update, lol???
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 17:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update??????????
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Reviewed By: godess94523 On: August 31, 2005 19:40 PDT
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chapter 12: Oh my that was hot! What an awesome first lemon for you. I never would have guessed it was your first; you portrayed it so well and with so much detail. I enjoyed it. And too funny with Kags mom!! She is such a great character and you really picked up on her perception. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha "gets" it out of her about Kouga. Thanks for the awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: August 26, 2005 10:37 PDT
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Only on chapter three and all I can say is I love you! *hugs* I'll post another when I'm caught up ^^
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 20:39 PDT
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Bahaha, Mrs. Higurashi is evil. That was fantastic.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
QUOTE: A/N: My first lemon, everybody! (Party at my place.) Drinks are on me. Congrats. It was a good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 03:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My eyes are feel a little dead at the moment because I just spend straight six hours behind my computer reading you fic. I really liked it had a couple of good laughs and ofcourse want more (we readers are so selfish). I didn't find any dislikes ore someting to comment on. I do hope there will be more Sesshomaru/ Rin chapters.
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Title: Lemon Virgin
Reviewed By: Rachel Lewis On: August 13, 2005 14:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well for your first foray into the citrus world I have to say that you did a wonderful job....it was romantic with the healthy eroticism that only comes from an author who understands the plot needs to properly develop for it to fit. WELL DONE....and I like where this story is going......my only advice...and take it with a grain of salt since I have yet to get my fic anywhere near posting quality......give youself time to do everything you want to do with this plot....it looks like its gonna be kick ass and brillianlty original...it can be furstarting when reviewers and flamers rag on your story becuase its not going as fast or where THEY want it to go....its your story and your doing an awesome job. In the world of Inufandom, theres aLOT of crap.....your writing is something can add to this list of writers (thats would be 2: Sueric and Terri Botta) that I am in complete awe of. I shall sit in breathless anticapation for your next installment...BTW I didnt rate your spelling/grammer b/c I felt it would be hypocritical since I have the proofreading skills of a lobotomized Donkey!! :) Barachan22@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 21:13 PDT
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Chapter 12: Oh my that was hot! What an awesome first lemon for you. I never would have guessed it was your first; you portrayed it so well and with so much detail. I enjoyed it. And too funny with Kags mom!! She is such a great character and you really picked up on her perception. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha "gets" it out of her about Kouga. Thanks for the awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 21:09 PDT
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Alright first chapter 11: Your portrayal of Shippou is just hilarious! I can totally see him doing that! So, Kags and Inu are getting close huh... Great chapter, now on to chapter 12.
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