| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 12:07 PST
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Opps forgot to mention I apologise for being so late commenting on this chapter I just moved this past monthe from one coast to the other and today I finally got my internet hooked up in the new place. Of course the first thing I did was catch up on ear-tweak the second was to go looking to see if you had made any updates!
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 12:04 PST
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Incredible chapter I have been looking forward to this chapter and it was every bit as good as I expected it to be. I enjoy the little nod to the manga with the tied together snake brothers I am not even gonna try to rember their names! And Sessh has gotten himself into some trouble eh? Interesting turn of events. I love all the hints you hand us drives me nuts too I am soooo curious about inuyasha's dreams and what happened that miroku saw years ago. Curious curious.... And DAMNIT! What wish ARE we waiting on LOL! Great chapter incredible really this is my absolute favorite fan fic that I am following currently it has such a great combination of polotics, intrigue, action and romance. Good good stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 21:02 PST
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So first off, Congrads! Your first lemon won Best Lemon from the Fanguild! It was awesome. I enjoyed this chapter and I am interested in finding out what is going on with Sesshy. Sounds like things are getting sticky! I am also curious about what Miroku was talking about when Inuyasha had something going on at age 7. Did I miss something or is this a set up for more to come? I will have to go back and read it again. Thanks for the great chapter and I hope that all your problems work out to your advantage soon!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 13:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm thrilled to see that you have a new chap up. yes, you can definitely still write. and hopefully more new chaps will follow. i wonder what will happen with sess since he commited a major crime against the alliance. also, will naraku be sprouting his head out in the open any time soon? man i hate him. keep it up. loved the bet thing going at the clinic with kag and inu. funny!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 12:13 PST
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Another wonderful chapter! One wonders what is up with Sesshoumaru and what they will try to do to him. I love the interaction between Inu and Miroku. Both are such wonderful characters and you set them off against each other so well. You also do a great job of making Mir a pervert without it seeming forced. Thanks for writing Caitriona
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Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 01:28 PST
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Congratulations on winning Best Lemon in the IY Fanguild awards! You deserved it!
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Reviewed By: Amie (not logged in) On: November 27, 2005 05:58 PST
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A long wait, but very much worth it. Your writing is so fine, so precise...just a joy to read. Your plot is complex, but I never get the feeling that you're flailing around trying to see your way to the end. This may be true, as far as I know, but you present a sure and steady hand as the story progresses. As always, thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: November 22, 2005 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first lemon? no way! it was great!
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: tobinthenibot On: November 21, 2005 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOO much for updateing! i'm so excited i thought that you had completely abandoned the storie, glad to see that you havent! much praise! tobs
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really missed this story, it is so good!. I can't believe Kagome could stand after such relaxing day off hehe It's great that their relationship is developing so fast, I'm glad for them. So what now?? Is Naraku going to appear soon? What is Rin doing while Sessh is 'jailed'? You have a great style! I'm glad you are back! By the way, in your settings you are not accepting anonymous reviews. Just let you know because it happened to me without my knowledge and I might have missed some good comments.. Bye!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 05:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! It's always fun to see Kagome flustered and I love your Miroku/Inuyasha interactions. Sounds like we're going to learn some backstory pretty soon - I look forward to it. (One little type nitpick [because your story is so good that it shows up as a distraction] right after Miso 'discovers' the news, Kagome should turn on her 'heel', not her 'heal'.) Nitpick over - on with the story!
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Title: Ladyblade (nsi)
Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 22:45 PST
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Wheeee! Good chapter... and i know the manga reference. The snake boys are...ack! I know the names start with "K" and "G" and rhyme! gah! I hate when this happens. Kenki and Genki? probably not it, but I know what you were refering to. "G" boy 'sacrificed' himself to improve Tessaiga while "K" boy got 'eaten' by Mou..however the heck ya spell his name! LOL Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 08:25 PST
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huh? nothing new lately? That's okay - life gets in the way - I know this. I found the story off the IYGuild listing for 3rd quarter 2005 - and I'm enjoying it very much - Kagome's mom - that was priceless! Hope you can come back continue the story - development of her powers, the risk to her, the reaction of their friends - Who won the bet? LOL all that stuff.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 19:51 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok " Waiting On A Wish ", Im sitting here "Waiting On An Update Dammit", lmao. Ah man, chapter 12, dated in August? UUGGHH!!! Damn fine lemon tho. Update soon. Pleeze?
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 17:24 PST
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I can't believe you've posted several chapters that I didn't know about! For some reason the last two or three chapters hasn't triggered the site to send me any notification updates. I only realized they were there when I stumbled upon your story on aff and was like 'Ack! Why are there so many chapters on here?!?' LOL But I'm really, really glad I found them because I do love this story. And you can only imagine my happiness when I realized one of them was the lemon chapter...you did a very good job with it! One of the more well written ones I've seen in a while. So I'm not unhappy with it! But now I'm interested to see where they go with their relationship from here on in. I do love the way you've written those two - and the plot! It's great and it's really got me intrigued. I can't wait to see more from you...hopefully soon? *puppy dog eyes*
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