| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 15:11 PST
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I love it! Please write more as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon (not signed in) On: November 18, 2004 15:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How many times did you revise this chapter? I must have gotten 8 notices that chapter 6 had been revised. But then, mayby MM.org is just being wonky. I love this story so far! It is wonderful and you've already given us a couple of rather intense scenes between Kagome and Inuyasha. The story doesn't seem to quite fit with the prologue you gave us. It seems more AU instead of canon. Are you going to pull the events outlined in the prologue into the story more as you go along? The story is quite enjoyable and a good read. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Try not to kill yourself with finals because then we'd never hear more of the story and I would be very disappointed. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 12:52 PST
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longest chapter yet! it was great! I can't wait to read more! I really love this story so far, it's very interesting. Nice twist. :-D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSi) On: November 18, 2004 12:45 PST
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ive had a really terrible week on top of my computers hard drive crashin that contained all of my stories so here i am on the computer in my office reading ur story and my day is so much brighter =D
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Reviewed By: clavira1 On: November 18, 2004 07:37 PST
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UPDATE!!! what else should I say?
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Title: Very entertaining story so far
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 20:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this recommended over on Green Tea forums, and I really enjoyed it. You're doing a great job setting up the romance between Inuyasha and Kagome (and an excellent job with the sexual tension between the two of them), and I'm also intrigued at how the events in the prologue are going to play out in the story. It sounds like Inuyasha's wish on the Shikon-no-Tama created an alternate reality where he and his friends would have a second chance at life and love, but of course things won't go quite that smoothly, will they? Can't wait to read more of this--great job so far!
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Reviewed By: Jurei On: November 13, 2004 19:48 PST
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Hehe!^^ DEFINITELY managed to hook me in on this one!*grins* I'm actually pretty interested in seeing where this is going...keep it up!^^ Please update as soon as you get the chance! I know real life is an evil from which none of us can escape for very long, but I really can't wait to see what happens next!^^ Best of luck! ~Jurei^6
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Title: All Five
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 18:00 PST
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When was the last time I read a 'fic from beginning to current in one sitting? I cannot recall. This is lovely. I can see the sunlight in the city. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In chapter three, I can't help but think that Kagome should scold Shippo for saying "just a hanyou," especially given the atmosphere that Inuyasha observes later on. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If Shippo had already told Kagome that Kina was sick, then why didn't she see Kina first instead of giving individualized checkups to the other kids? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "the revolting aroma penetrated everything, and his eyes immediately watered in agony." ~~~ Do the swirly eyes!! Do the swirly eyes!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "had never been his strong suite." ~~~ strong suit ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "before something got in the way" ~~~ Oho, this is gonna be fun once Kouga shows up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "He'd stolen her mind and demanded her body as ransom." ~~~ Ooooooo... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "inevitableness" inevitability
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Reviewed By: BlueOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 14:43 PST
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Impressive. You've got a nice story coming along - I'm looking forward to your next update. --BLUE
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Title: u did it
Reviewed By: lilbro On: November 12, 2004 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
for you die hard fans who now hate me for giving her all 1's please don't hate me it's just a joke!
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Reviewed By: SakuraWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 22:48 PST
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I really like where this story is going. :)
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 21:53 PST
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HEY!! GREAT STORY SO FAR!! keep it up. i cant wait till the next chapter. update soona dn keep up the great work!! ViciousVamp
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Reviewed By: ladymiaka-unsigned On: November 03, 2004 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. The limey parts are very good, especially for it being your first writing with it. Good luck with your papers... if this story is any indication, I know you'll do great! Take your time with the next chapter, I'll be here waiting a month from now!
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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 17:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter and I cannot wait til you do! I understand about it being a while because I am also in college. So good luck with all your work. Great Job!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: October 31, 2004 21:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really happy for the update. And don't worry. I know how much of a bitch school can be. I can't wait to see more. I really love this story. Keep up your great writing.
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