| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 14, 2006 21:01 PDT
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Another excellent chapter. I like how you forced Inuyasha to vouch for Sesshoumaru. Their lives depend on each other now. Good job! Can't wait for more. :)
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: May 14, 2006 20:28 PDT
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Whoot!! An update after forever!! Inu needs to have a huge flashback of the past and remember something he did. When will the Shikon appear? Hope the next update is sooner.
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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have missed this story so much and i never gave up hope that you would update. As all readers know life gets in the way and has to come first a lot of the time. I am just glad that you are back. I loved this chapter because it seems that a lot more clues and and foreshadowing are being reveiled within the story. I cannot wait until the next chapter. So til the next update! MR
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Title: Waiting On A Wish
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dharlin, Dharlin, don't be sorry for life interfering, it happens to everyone sooner or later. It HAS been a long time since you updated, but we were waiting for you to have time and the willingness to get back to the story and us. It's great to see your voice again, next time I hope it's not so long.
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Title: NoooOOOOOoooo
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did u stop ...why? this story is .... not good cause thats a not effective word..but superb beyond all reason. i read the first chap and then it was like a drug..has to read the rest! had to read the rest! had to read the rest! its so koool it makes me all tingly on the inside and i loved the lemon. whoay!! that was a major(blush) i am still red in the face from reading it. u hafta update soon this story is on the brink of suspension and i need TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! PPPPPPLEEASSE!!!!! u mustnt stop nooo its too good. [huge swarm of security guards come after lil me...stop her she's insane ,,get her] babydragon213 rushes after author of the story "keep writing dont stop please u must post next chapter!!!" *author runs away frightened hehehe !!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 15:15 PDT
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Great lemon! Great Mrs. Higurashi! I have my guess as to where Maraku has been hiding and I'm looking forward to reading more in order to find out if I'm right.
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 19:48 PST
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Your fic is so captivating! I don't know how you do it, but every time I start it I am just pulled into the story. It's well worth the wait for the updates. You're writing style is very good. Overall this fic is just fantastic!
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Reviewed By: jenbater On: February 26, 2006 07:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! This is so sweet! the prologue almost had me crying too!
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Reviewed By: jenbater On: February 26, 2006 07:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! This is so sweet! the prologue almost had me crying too!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 23:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeease update soon. I love this story and can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Kierra On: February 24, 2006 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just...Wow. I'm loving your story! You're an excelent writer, I can visualize everything just like if it was the actual Anime--you've got the characters down perfectly! This is my new favorite Inuyasha fic, hands down! Please continue writing! I'm hooked, and I'm sure I'll be checking every day to see if you've updated. I noticed you chose to age Rin a bit.... I'm hoping that means a bit of Rin/Sess? =^-^= And Inu/kagome's lemon scene had to be one of the best lemon scenes I've read. Encore! ;) ~Kia
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Reviewed By: GinaCat On: February 22, 2006 16:57 PST
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I love this story please update soon
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Title: Please update when you get the time.
Reviewed By: bohyoung [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 20:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome! I've actually been a silent reader for a while. I was waiting for you to update since last August! I'm so happy that I'm actually replying. I don't normally leave replies. I just wanted to thank you for updating, and hope you continue to do so. Hopefully whatever has been troubling you will be figured out soon. I love the characters, the plot and everything!
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Reviewed By: Calera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 11:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic. You pay a lot of attention to detail so the reader can actually piture it in their head. I also love the fact that you're always moving the story along and not just putting in fillers to take up space. hope you update soon, i cant wait ^-^
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Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how your story is progressing. It is a joy to read and it wheels you in right away. I did find a little mistake though, you wrote "He parents won't let her out of bed," instead of 'Her' at the end of the chapter. Can't wait for the next update. Kendra
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