| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freakin Fab lemon, I got the tingleys just reading it. Keep up the good work, glad that Kagome got the guts to go get her man.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 10:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was beautiful, definitely worth waiting for!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 09:41 PDT
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Okay I haven't finished reading yet but I just want to say that my dream kitchen has an island in it. I want to move in with Inuyasha right now. I'll go finish the chapter now.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: October 14, 2006 08:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent chapter and I really do love this story. ^.^ I have completely forgiven you for the excruciatingly long wait I had to endure for chapter 14. It was well worth it. Anyway the next chapter sounds like it will be very interesting I can't wait to see what happens between Inu and Kag's grandpa, I bet it will be very funny. That light had something to do with Kag's miko powers didn't it, some foreshadowing for the future huh? Now this is all the result of Inuyasha wishing he could get a second chance right? Because Kag died in the fight against Naraku and he never got to tell her how he felt. So then are the flashes of pain and images his memories from before coming back? *sigh* oh well update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 23:21 PDT
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I can finally review again!!! I think it has something to do with the new laptop... But I love this story! And the lemon was great! Good chapter, solid writing, kept me entertained. And I'm quite patient if the story is worth it. and I feel this one is. Good luck with gettting more written soon. May the muses grant you their favor...
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: October 13, 2006 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I would give you more than a ten, if the system would let me. I was worried that you might have put this story on a shelf. The chapter was worth the wait! Your writing is fantastic and kudos to Blackberry for the super job of beta-ing. I am a very happy fan right now. Good Kagome and InuYasha stories (always my favorites) are really hard to find, now, and great ones (like yours) are really rare. There seems to be a rash of Kagome and Sesshoumaru stories lately (some good). However, they do not seem to carry the same intense atmosphere and emotions, as your works of art. A most sincere thank you for sharing your talent with us. Cynbad146 (Fan of SACHI too!)
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It turned out perfect! I can't wait for more. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ganzil On: October 05, 2006 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to let you know how much I have been enjoying this story (as well as your other one). The fanfiction world is littered with many movie ripoffs, poor characterizations, incomprehensible plots, atrocious grammar and spelling, and just poor writing, so a well-conceived story like yours really stands out. You obviously put a lot of effort into creating a fanfiction that is a pleasure to read (and even reread). The plot is intriguing and complex, the characters are well-developed, and the story is quite well-written. Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story!
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Reviewed By: Amazona dos Elementos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 17:50 PDT
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Wow... Excelet story... Update soon?
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Title: love the story...need more!
Reviewed By: Angelion On: September 20, 2006 00:18 PDT
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This is one of my favorite fanfics online. I can't wait to read more. I know life comes first, and I hate pushy "Update now!" people. But just letting you know that there is still interest in this one.
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 14:40 PDT
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That was a very good way to put Jineji into the story, everything seemed to fit so well. I can't wait for kagome to see Inuyasha at his apartment, what would he say?? Oh my.. this is so exciting!!!! Great fic!! So far so good!
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It is the most recent addition to my favorite stories folder and I'm a little bit embarressed to say that I check every day to see if there is a new chapter. It's very unique and I love the imagery you give. The only thing that confuses me is that I can't figure out the connection between the prologue and the rest of the story (although I have a bunch of little theories rolling around in my head). I'm figuring, though, that from the title of the story that [alas] I'm just going to have to wait to see. Anxiously awaiting another chapter :)
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Title: Chapters 1-15
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 22:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! ^^ Every chapter I was anxiously awaiting the next, hehe. I love how you've introduced so many mysteries and used so many plot devices to keep everything interesting. I knwo everything will be explained eventually and you've woven such an intricate, wonderful story that it's hard to stop reading. I enjoy your style of writing and everything is formatting wonderfully, with minimal spelling and grammar errors. Thanks be to your beta! ^^ I understand that life has been busy for you and I'm sure everyone's willing to wait for you to release your chapters at your own pace. :) Btw, I felt the whole story was very original and the addition of the prologue at the beginning was perfect! It still leaves us wondering just exactly what the side effects were, if any, from the wish on the shikon jewel and even if it still exists. Speaking of which, Inuyasha and his headaches are another mystery. ;) So many wonderful things to read about in future chapters! You'll probably never have a shortage of ideas to write about considering how well your story is laid out. As you can tell, I enjoy reading this story very much and I wish I could think of ways to improve it even more. It's really hard considering how great of a job you do. The only thing I could ask for would be more of it. :P hehe Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of it in the future! ^^
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: August 21, 2006 21:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww. Please update soon. I can't wait to see Inu's reaction when he see's her, I'm glad you also didn't give up on this story. I has such a great plot and I enjoyed reading it so far.
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Title: kick arse!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one story i would have to say is better than awsome. we got the drama. the comedy and better yet the tension. heheh ur one superb writer with the creativity of a genius...(are u sure ur not related to albert einstien?) i hope u update this story soon. its getting way to good .+++++... ur so good and i can just imagine all the lanscape and vivid details u put in ur story. awaome job keep up the amazing work. bless!!
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