| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 11:54 PDT
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aww poor confused Inuyasha lol. And I'm pretty sure I know what Inuyasha told Miroku. ;) But wow what a cliffie! I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the awesome work like always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 06:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter!!!!!!!!!! I love this story...
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Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 21:35 PDT
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I love this story, it's so amazing and original. You've got a great balance between the mysterious and romance here, which makes it work so much better to me. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 18:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Ai Kisugi, I want to see Kagome grab a bow and arrow (which you already slipped in were at the festival at that game booth) and totally annihilate the rouge youkai. Of course, she'll probably pass out or something from exerting so much energy, but she'll be okay. Maybe a cute scene of waking up with Inuyasha hovering over her, and she'll see in his eyes in that moment that she means FAR more to him than a mere obligation. Listen to me, writing your story for you. You know what you're doing, which is obvious considering how awesome this chapter was! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 18:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea!! I'm so glad your back. Great chapter as always. Looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: July 16, 2009 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get so excited when I see one of your updates! I really needed something to perk me up since I broke my foot in a couple of places and I have to wear a heavy cast for almost 12 weeks. There's not much that I can do but read. I have been sitting and laying (mostly) for 6 weeks now, so a big thankyou for the update. What is going to happen now with Kagome and Sango and two rogues. InuYasha really struggles with communications with people he cares about. Adds to the story. Loved it as usual, Cynbad146
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Title: A great chapter
Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 16:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Sango is pregnant, right? I can't think of anything else that Inuyasha would figure out and that would make Miroku so happy. Of course, if Sango isn't careful, she might lose the child or children, in the rogue youkai attack. I understand why Kagome feels the way she does but she should think of Inuyasha's obligation to protect her like this. He feels he is obligated to protect her and if that was the extent of his feelings to her, he would simply protect her and nothing else. Instead he is trying, not very well, but trying to enter into a relationship with her and from his actions of introducing Kagome to the significant people of his life, he is trying to enter into a serious relationship with Kagome. So hopefully she will understand this and not feel as unsure. Either that or Inuyasha will enlighten her and us! Also, was the rogue attack instituted by Naraku? If so, did he purposely try to separate Inuyasha from Kagome? And is he targeting Rin to get to Sesshomaru or is it coincidence that Rin's school is being attacked. Well thank you for another great update and I hope you are having a wonderful summer. Sincerely, Zach
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Title: Nooooooooooooooo!!!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo!! Not a cliffhanger!! Not like that!!! I knew something was up when Sango got the call, and I figured it was going to be most likely a distraction to get to Kagome, but never in a million years would I have though that things would get so awful!! +++ +++ They don't have any weapons, Sango is obviously not completely recovered and in no state to fight and Kagome is at this point just defenseless!! This is not fair!! how could you do this to us?? How could you leave us hanging here biting our nails?? Aaarrrggghh!!! Please, please, pretty, pretty please update soon!! Ah! and CONGRATULATIONS on your well deserved award from the Feudal Association!! (from which I am a proud member!) You see?? We the fans love you, so please love us back and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 05:01 PDT
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yikes. i say those rogues that inu and roku are fighting are just distraction. i say the rogues at the skool are the ones who are instructed to take sango and kags maybe? lol just a hunch ;D GREAT CHAPTER! tension between kags and inu, me no like. :[ buh i guess every great story should have a little misunderstanding/miscommunication eh? lol update soon! kimiko
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Reviewed By: merrellia On: July 16, 2009 03:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another lovely chapter! I enjoyed seeing some of the characters' issues come to light and get discussed as they move closer together to actually talking about them with each other. And it seems like some reveals are in the offing--I look forward to the next installment!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 00:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffies abound, but quick updates, so all is good - sweet! :P And a Happy Birthday to you as well. Hope its a good one. ;)
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Reviewed By: silverwildcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 23:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray! An update! It's always good to see your name in my inbox. As usual, a very enjoyable read, even though it's ARGH CLIFFHANGER! :)
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 23:04 PDT
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Well, my heart is doing somersaults after this chapter. Angst and cliffhangers just kill me. Well first of all, I suppose that Inuyasha smelled that Sango was pregnant and of course Miroku couldn't be happier. The monk's willingness to tend to Sango's every needs was hilarious and of course, very irritating for Sango. Now poor Inu and Kags. I'm hoping that you'll let Inuyasha open up to her (maybe after fearing that Kagome might have lost her life in another rouge attack). Poor Inu, he can't tell her how he feels unless it just leaks out by mistake. And his dreams, he's going to have to tell her about that too or she's going to keep on being upset at him. Last but not least, I am really looking forward to (I hope) Kagome finding a bow and arrow and somehow helping fight off the rouge demons. In fact, I hope she obliterates them, leaving Sango and Inuyasha slack jawed. That would be an awesome comeuppance! :-) Keep writing, please don't stop.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things were fine in the beginning... but then the action came... looks like everyone will be busy... what will happen next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 21:53 PDT
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Yes! An update, woot! Excellent chapter, I can practically feel the tension radiating in the air between the characters. Especially between Kagome and Inuyasha, though I think Inuyasha is being stupid at the moment for not saying anything to Kagome and about the nightmare as well. She needs to know, especially since she is starting to "awaken" so to speak. When Kagome suddenly nukes some demons with her suppressed miko abilities, she is going to want some answers as well as the people who watch it when she does. Miroku and Sango must of been pretty busy lately, and without protection. *cough* She's going to be ballistic when she finds out that she's preggers and he didn't told her. It seems the guys aren't really smart....Anyway thanks for the update, always love reading this story and its delicious plot/character workings. Also I wouldn't mind a chapter for Sachi. *cough* Thanks again, later.
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