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Reviewed By: Akihanah On: November 09, 2004 21:02 PST
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I find it rather funny that Inuyasha gets mad at Kagome, and claims he has no feelings, then gets insanely jealous every time she even talks to another guy. Its really rather revealing. I like the first chapter, but I'm curious as to what happens. (duh) Good luck with this and with Chronicles. I have never tried this before, and just want to see if it works.
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Reviewed By: inufan_625 On: November 09, 2004 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol @ the final thought...Poor clueless Hojou. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us on this one. What reason will she give? How will she soothe and irate Hanyou? Who will teh new villan be? Where has InuYasah been disappearing too? SO many questions. I will be eagerly waiting the next chapter. At least in teh mean time I have Chronicles....
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Reviewed By: Gaudy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 20:16 PST
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A chapter wasn't enough! I want more. I just can't wait to see in what other journey you'll take us with this fic. I already love it.
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Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 19:47 PST
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Hey hey Sue, first chapter and this story is already great! As usual you're setting the bar higher and higher for yourself. I can't wait until you finish Chronicles (well, not really, I really love that fic) and gain headway on this one. Lookin' good!! ^^
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Reviewed By: NordicaVB - thought I was signed i On: November 09, 2004 19:10 PST
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I can't believe you posted the complete chapter 1. I didn't think I would look forward to the end of Chronicles, but with a chapter like this who can wait to read the second chapter? I can't believe she let him kiss her and that Inuyasha watched. Chapter 2 will definitly be very interesting. Though, I do worry why Inuyasha leaves for a week at a time once a month (or something like that). Very interesting plot. I look forward to growing attached to this story as I have your others. Sigh, chapter one starts and with it, angst already. Although, I have grown to appreciate your angst...especially when it's balanced so well with the 'other.' Great story idea/plot/chapter one!
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - not signed in On: November 09, 2004 18:46 PST
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I liked it. Houjou sure is dumb. I feel kind of sorry for Kagome though. I can't wait to read more of it!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: November 09, 2004 18:37 PST
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Thank you for always writing such great stories to keep me entertained. I can't wait to see what direction you take this one in.
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Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: November 09, 2004 18:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh... omoshiroi (interesting)... i enjoyed reading Purity & Torrent, and am reading Chronicles right now... and it seems I'm going to enjoy this next one!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (lazy) On: November 09, 2004 18:33 PST
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woohoo! woohoo! yea i'm here for the begining of one of your awesome fics! It is perfect begining! I'm currentally trying to catch up to you with Chronicles... i'm on chapter 75 but you update so fast it's hard work catching up. Of course that's a good thing! Love the jealous hanyou begining!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 09, 2004 18:26 PST
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Ooooo looks like another good one! One with a jealous hanyou and a love-struck clutz. LOL Yay! I can't wait to see the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: aether_21 On: November 09, 2004 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i just love your stories!!! i usually read on ffnet but metamorphosis isn't up there yet. great first chapter, i love it when inuyasha gets jealous (hehe). i'm getting curious if this would be a love triangle with houjou or if it would be sumthing more :) great writing, i like your way of writing lemons, it's artfully and tastefully written, not jsut any lemon for the sake of lemon ;) keep up the good work! il be reading your original works soon, ja!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 09, 2004 17:38 PST
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ouuuu---- this ones good!!!! hehehe-- guess Kagome should have listened to that old saying "be careful what you wish for"-- hehehe. Great start to yet another will-be-fabulous story. Poor Houjo-- getting his hopes up like that- haha- oh well. Oh look-- I seem to have lost all compasion once again- oops! Can't wait to see what this story will be like-- maybe I'll go back to the top and read the summary-- I was too excited to read it that I skipped that part. Keep up the great work and take care!!! ---Aitu aka not signed in
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Title: I love your writing!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess MM won't keep me logged in. I dunno why Weird. On: November 09, 2004 17:36 PST
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I'm seriously considering kidnapping you and forcing you to write stories only for me. lol Just kidding. How come no new updates on ledgens? Hmmm...? Anyways this looks like a great first chapter. I love Inuyasha and I love the way you bring them all to life!
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Title: Huzzah!
Reviewed By: Radio- not signed in On: November 09, 2004 17:30 PST
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Poor poor stupid Houjou. So deluded, but score one for him anyway. I'm excited for this fic! You never give your readers a rest, do you sue? You are so... nice! Hahahah... Nice chapter, I can't wait to see where this is going! Houjou/Kags? LOL! jk, jk.
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