| "Making Things Right" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: August 15, 2005 17:28 CDT
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great job! the epilogue turned out well. continue writing and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha0024 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY...... I love this story it is awesome.... Can't wait to see the last chapter.. Good job on all the chapters....
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Title: I just love happy endings
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 22:34 CDT
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I have been watching this story unfold for quite some time, and just wanted to tell you how much I have enjoyed it. Very well done, nice plot twists, great angst, I love that the brothers of the fang have called a truce, and love that being mated to Kagome has given Inu total access and control of his youkai. It made me happy that Kagura is alive and well, mated to Sesshoumaru, and expecting without losing ANY of her edge, and that Shippo, Sango, and Miroku are here and happy. Sometimes I just want to read a good love story, and this is it. Well done, and I am hoping to see more stories under your name. I hope to see the Epilog soon.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, what a honeymoon! i loved the whole fire rat robe and salior fuku idea. nice. ;) i am eager to see how the last chap. turns out. i wonder how the "pups" will look. hmmm. can't wait. bye 'till then.
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Title: Waff heaven
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 12, 2005 20:07 CDT
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It's very amusing (and perfectly understandable) that InuYasha has a thing for Kagome's school girl outfit, and she for his haori. Nice touch with their little role-play. I enjoyed your story very much and I, too, am sad that it's almost over. I hope we get to meet the Baby. Good job...I look forward to the last chapter, and your next endeavor! Thanks!
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Title: loven it!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love happy endings and i love the way this story is ending up. i cant wait for the next chapter so please update again soon. P.S. have i told you how talented i think you are? well you are:-)
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Reviewed By: baka_mai On: August 12, 2005 04:02 CDT
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I love your story, i always have and its exciting yet sad that its almost over. Please upsate really soon though because i want to see what happens in the very very end. So yah!! your a great writer and i hope that you would consider writing another story (if you can) so all of us reading your work can see what exciting things you come up with next!! 10!!! JA NE!!!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 12, 2005 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This has been a wonderful story. I will miss it when you're finished. I can't wait to read the epilogue. Please upload it as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 12:02 CDT
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ohhhhh -tears- this is so sad! The story is almost over! :( that's just so sad! This story has been so great and I absolutly LOVE it! :( its just so sad that its almost over! :( I cant wait till the next chapter come up! :( but then again I dont want too :( SAD!!!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geez, finally! i've been trying to finish reading this last chapter since yesterday. everything you can imagine has happened to prevent me from doing so. besides all of that b.s., the chap was great. i'm glad they were able to compromise for the wedding and it was sweet to invlove miroku and sango. i am eager to read the next post. heh heh. you know why. ;) please upate when you can. well, bye 'till then.
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! WOW I LOVE your story! it's just SOOO good! I cant WAIT until you post another chapter! ^_^ It's just such a GREAT story! I hope it doesn;t end soon cuz this is only the second story that I've found that I REALLY like! You are a very good writer indeed. ^_^ I hope you keep wrting cuz this is soooo good!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so sad cuz it seems like this is almost the end. i hope not. great job on the fight. really. that was awesome how kag took care of kousotsu! i didn't know she could do that... but it makes sense. i am ready for the next chap. i would love for you to continue the fic long enough to include sango and miro's wedding and also the "pups". but thats up to you. (please) ^_^
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Reviewed By: selene_nikolah16 On: July 15, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, i just want to say that you are by far the third author that really stirred my interest in the inuyasha fanfiction.... i really like your style of writing, it is not yet refined but the creativity is flawless. i do hope that your inspiration by far exceeds your expectations. so that you may finish your fic and update in time. best wishes in your writing and pls....update soon...... your new fan, -jane-
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 17:58 CDT
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great chap! i am excited to see some action coming up soon. see ya next update. =p
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Reviewed By: Anna333 On: July 11, 2005 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D me likey the story so keep going with it and updateing to oooo i love the lemons very good lol cuz some ppl like to jump into things but i like urs but anywho keep going with the story i would love to find out what happends next!!!
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