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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You have come up with such an interesting and complex plot; it's amazing! Your Sesshomaru is one of the best I've read in a while, as well as being impressed with the way you portray the other characters. They're different but the elements of their "former" selves are still true to character. At first, I thought you had mislabeled the story as being a continuation as opposed to an AU, but now I see how well you've constructed everything and am incredibly pleased. Really, it's one of the best "in the future/present" Inuyasha fics I've ever read. Please don't take offence, but thorough beta-ing would only help to polish this gem you're creating, and if you ever need someone to assist, I'd be more than happy to comply. I kind of stumble every now and have to re-read sentences when there are words missing or used in the wrong tense/plurality, and the lack of commas or other proper punctuation in places... but not enough to deter me from continuing, of course. Either way, your story is absolutely fabulous.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurray, inu is back to his old (horny) self. omg, did i just say that? heh, who cares. so, yes the lemon was, err, satisfying and lets just say if that had been all you wanted to focus the entire chap on, i wouldn't have complained. i'm glad they are making headway with the experimental facility and i'm curious to see where you will go from here. geez, you really have something bad@$$ going on here. btw, i am also leilchan, the moron who reviewed before this one. for some reason i just couldn't spell that day to save my inu-luvin' ass. gomen. thanx for the iroppoi chap and please update when you can. ja.
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Reviewed By: leilchan On: June 12, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanx for the update. =P atleast kag is thru with that job and can now move on to bigger things. will this newly rescued demon sick around to help out, or is he outta the picture? poor inu just can't seem to keep his clawed foot out of his mouth!like kag doesn't know what she does is dangerous. geez. i'll be looking forward to the next update. i know it'll be great. ^__^
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Reviewed By: IAMNAMELESS On: June 06, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story I Really REALLY Like It PLZ FOR THE LOVE OF OF GOD UPDATE SOON!!! (P.s I Almost When I Read The Battle With Naraku)
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sux that kag has to be surrounded by morons at the facility she works at, but hopefully it will be worth it. maybe she will find out what the hell is going on in there and they can rescue everyone.poor trapped youkai. oh yeah, i luv the tension between kag and inu since he has lost his memory! it rox, but i also can't wait until he remembers everything too.please update when you can. i think this story has turned into one of my favorites.p.s. the citrus kix so much @$$! ^_*
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 17:54 CDT
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I just caught up on this story and I'm still enjoying it. Thanks for updating and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON!!!!!:p
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope kag's plan works out and inu can get his memory back soon. gosh, poor kagome! but, atleast inu is making some progress. wow. to be able to have a first time with someone more than once and remember it. lucky girl. ^_*
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You reviewed me so I guess I can return the favor. Besides, I've been wanting to say this, anyway. Few of the other reviews seem to stray away from vague minor spoilers, so I guess I won't, either. Overall this is pretty durn good, but Shippo's sacrifice in chapter 12 was awesome. A moment that redefines his character while remaining completely true to it. It's surprising and yet completely believable that he would harbor such secret regret and that it would move him to make such a sacrifice. Makes the whole story for me. Kagome vs. Naraku was pretty fabulous, too, though. Wondering if anything more will happen with Kouga. Kagome knows he was much nicer 500 years ago and I figure that would get to her eventually, make her want to reconcile things.
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 11:40 CDT
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I'm loving this story! I hope you have the chance to update soon!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 14:23 CDT
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poor inu. he can't even remember that he's gotten laid. haha. well, looks like kag is trying to remedy that little problem. yea for miroku and sango. finally! oh yeah. i wonder how kagura/sess having a baby will play into this storyline. will it begin a domino effect involving everyone else getting pregnant. that would be funny. but not yet. get the bad guys first. god i'm screwed up. =P
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Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a good story! and so sneaky!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in between a movie, dinner, and putting kids to bed, i have finally caught up with MTR. i just knew i would love this story. omG. i think i sat for ten minutes giving a detailed summary to my "pretending to be interested" husband. @_@ it looks as though you have been updating pretty regularly, so, hell yeah, i can hardly wait until you do so again! i would definitely recommend this fic to anyone. woohoo! i love it when i stumble across a badass fic. it makes me smile. =P
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Title: i've only just begun
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've given you a "10" because i haven't even finished the first chapter and i can tell that i'll be hooked. i happened to look up at the review amount and was SHOCKED to see that you don't have atleast a hundred more. i thought to myself, "i must perform my readers duty and review immediately!" there's no telling how many authors quit writing just because they aren't getting enough feedback. i just wanted to let you know that your story looks to be promising. i can't wait to get back to it and finish the rest. please continue it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 07, 2005 08:47 CDT
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You have Inuyasha perfectly in character and I like how you are building their relationship again. I think sleeping by Kagome each night would lead to a citrus sooner rather than later since he already knows they are mates and he still loves her. Great job so far. Update soon please. Thanks!
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