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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 23:30 CDT
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Wow. This wasn't all that hentai...were you thinking of the next chapter. I really liked this chapter. It shows how much Inuyasha is hurting b/c he can't remember. But he will perservere.
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Reviewed By: Arcangel3012 On: May 03, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is the first time that I have reviewd on this site. I have found your story enjoyable thus far. I have to say that I am a littl upset to see that InuYasha has reverted to his old self. I was quite enjoying his protective, softer side. I hop that he gets his memory back soon. Keep up the good work. I hope to read happier chapters in the future as well. Contact: Dolly10_4_84@hotmail.com or tmb@muw.edu Elementary Education Major/ English/ History
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Reviewed By: Arcangel3012 On: May 03, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is the first time that I have reviewd on this site. I have found your story enjoyable thus far. I have to say that I am a littl upset to see that InuYasha has reverted to his old self. I was quite enjoying his protective, softer side. I hop that he gets his memory back soon. Keep up the good work. I hope to read happier chapters in the future as well. Contact: Dolly10_4_84@hotmail.com or tmb@muw.edu Elementary Education Major/ English/ History
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reding chapter one today and I simply coulden't stop! The interaction between Kagome and the reverted Inuyasha who knows himself from 500 years ago is PERFECT! Update soon! P.S. some sango and miroku action would be nice.. eep I hope Inuyasha does get back to normal though!!
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Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I wanted to cry with Kagome when InuYasha was being such a meanie!! But, he does act a lot like his Feudal self, so kudos for that. You're doing great on their unbalanced relationship right now. And Sesshoumaru-sama is good too, he's a little nicer than I'm used to reading/writing him, but you can tell he wants to make things better, though he's gruff about it. That's Fluffy-sama for you. *pets Fluffy's fluffy* Overall, good job, waiting the next eagerly!!! ^^v
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 02, 2005 16:53 CDT
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I like how you are developing their relationship again. Inuyasha is very in character and I can't wait for you to have him rediscover Kagome sexually. ;) Update again soon, please. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: sakurakesshou(too lazy to sign in) On: May 02, 2005 16:31 CDT
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You've definately got the kagome and inuyasha interaction going well. Though to me Sesshoumaru seemed like he was being hasty talking to Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 13:08 CDT
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Awww... I feel so bad for Inuyasha and Kagome. Plz update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: April 27, 2005 00:50 CDT
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Wow. That was a good chapter. I can't wait until the next one. I want more Kagome/Inuyasha fluff! Yay! Fluff is good. So is the memory thing. I really wasn't expecting that.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: April 27, 2005 00:36 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha...and poor Kagome being deprived of a very demonstrative lover. Then again, letting Inuyasha rediscover her should be extremely fun. Update again soon, please!
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You've got a nice story here! I might check up on it later. It was quite captivating really! The transitions between the visions and what was going on now were neat. Me like!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:21 CDT
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Great chapter! Oh, boy, I can't wait to see what Inuyasha does when he finds out he is mated to Kagome. Update soon please! ==As an aside note, I just wanted to mention that I think this story deserves more reviews. I think if you allow unsigned reviews, you might get more. 'Just a suggestion...
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 18:41 CDT
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Wah!!! Great story! Really fantastic. It moves a little slow, but I enjoy all of the Kagome and Inuyasha fluff. Keep up the great work!
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Title: *sniff* So Beautiful...
Reviewed By: My Sweet Koinu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Touching story, very creative. You are a wonderful author, and I was particularly surprised to find that your fanfic mentioned something that most people don't understand or realize when they see my screen name (I was shocked to find that you had used the phrase in your work, what a coincidence!), that Inuyasha really is just a fluffy puppy (hee hee ;P), hence, "my sweet koinu." It was touching to read Izayoi's reference to her son in such an endearing manner. Love the story, please keep up the good work!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. It is exciting, has lots of twists and turns, yet the characters are believable as far as Canon Universe, AND are staying, for the most part, in character. That's a tough thing to do, given the changes in InuYasha!! You are to be congratulated for that! The only problem I have with ANY part of this story or the writing is the minor, but frequent, problems with grammar and sentence structure. Normally, I wouldn't even mention it, but I love your writing and would like to see you excel at it ... in some places, the wording is jarring enough to make one pause about reading further. I'm glad I decided to ignore most of it, though, because this IS a thoroughly entertaining story and has kept me engrossed enough that Easter dinner is now late!!!! Thank you for writing a fic that so engaged my mind and my senses!
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