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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 03:06 CDT
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thought i stop by and leave a note.. i just read it and i thought that it was amazing.. i loved all the elements that you were actually able to bring into the story. the beginning confused me at first but after a while the story just started to write itself and i was able to read along easily. i just have to say that my favorite part of the story had to be when i got caught off guard.. i love when i am not able to suspect something and you did that for me.. so thank you. i think that you did a great job and i cant wait to read more of your stories!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 19:31 CST
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great job im looking foword to reading 2 other storys of yours ^-^
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 05:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible story! I've just finished it and WOW, what a ride. I absoulutely loved the premise. You have an amazing talent to pull your readers into your stories and take us along with you. Thankyou and please continue to write your wonderful stories!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible story! I've just finished it and WOW, what a ride. I absoulutely loved the premise. You have an amazing talent to pull your readers into your stories and take us along with you. Thankyou and please continue to write your wonderful stories!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 00:16 CDT
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amazing story... i really loved it... i've read it so many times and the story still amazes me... great job!... good work!... excellent writer you are!... keep it up!
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. This has got to be one of the most incredible Inuyasha stories I've read yet. I laughed and cried and laughed again and cried some more. I had no trouble following the story, and you made everything work together and it made sense, which says a lot because this could have been a very confusing story in the hands of someone less talented :) Your characterization was fantastic. I love how you brought Kagome and Inuyasha together in the present day, and Inuyasha losing his memory and reverting was quite an unexpected twist. Lots of creativity in the story, especially when so many of the same ideas get used and reused over and over again (which can't be avoided, since there's a finite number of basic plots - it's just how you get from beginning to end that makes a story unique). Your story is definitely unique, and one I'll read again for sure.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Remarkable story! I used quite a few kleenex, especially as everyone was given their memories back. But laughed alot also! I liked the combining of the feudal & modern era components. And it was nice that there were other inuyoukia whereas with most fics, inu are rare. The addition of Sango's father was a surprise, and I could totally see Miroku as a bartender. I am a diehard Kag/Inu fan and you did them well. I look forward to reading & enjoying your other fics!
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. I have only recently discovered your stories, and I'm impressed beyond words. Your use of grammar, your style and the anticipation factor you utilize is simply amazing. Your stories blend together as well, and I love it. Please write more! I've read everything you've posted thus far, and I enjoy it so much!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very well written story. It kept me interested from start to finish. I felt you did a great job writing the lemons. I thought the whole story was very sweet, sexy and action packed. I hope you continue to write.
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 01:13 CDT
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Well, I've read many of your fanfics in the past week or so, and I pretty much love them all. Great variety in the plots, very well written, characterization is wonderful. Even if the "Inuyasha forgets who he is.. again" thing did get a little old. They were all great. Just one thing though, that I feel that I have to mention (I feel sorta embarrassed that I'm bringing up something so petty). The children's names. I think it's been three or so stories now that there have been twins named Takara and InuTaro and then 5 years later there is Kenji. It just kinda ruined the suspense when I started to suspect what was happening. But I loved 'em anyway!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to tell you that this was an awesome story and i was sad to see it end. Please keep writing you have a talent.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so Kawaii.... I loved this story... up until 5am reading it... couldnt get my eyes off of it... again awsome story... I loved how you made the characters and the length was perfect... laters... yasha
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Title: Making Things Right
Reviewed By: inutama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this story and really enjoyed the story alot.I am also intrested in another story you are writing called Forced Admission are you giong to put it on MediaMiner soon.Keep up the good writing.
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Title: absolutely loved it.
Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. it's undeniably perfect. i'm completely jealous of your ability to write such amazing stories. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
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Title: Loved it!!!!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much i'm crying, i'm sad that it's over but it was such a fantastic, well written story, that i'm ecstatic you posted it for us all. thank you. =D
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