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Title: *sniff* So Beautiful...
Reviewed By: My Sweet Koinu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Touching story, very creative. You are a wonderful author, and I was particularly surprised to find that your fanfic mentioned something that most people don't understand or realize when they see my screen name (I was shocked to find that you had used the phrase in your work, what a coincidence!), that Inuyasha really is just a fluffy puppy (hee hee ;P), hence, "my sweet koinu." It was touching to read Izayoi's reference to her son in such an endearing manner. Love the story, please keep up the good work!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. It is exciting, has lots of twists and turns, yet the characters are believable as far as Canon Universe, AND are staying, for the most part, in character. That's a tough thing to do, given the changes in InuYasha!! You are to be congratulated for that! The only problem I have with ANY part of this story or the writing is the minor, but frequent, problems with grammar and sentence structure. Normally, I wouldn't even mention it, but I love your writing and would like to see you excel at it ... in some places, the wording is jarring enough to make one pause about reading further. I'm glad I decided to ignore most of it, though, because this IS a thoroughly entertaining story and has kept me engrossed enough that Easter dinner is now late!!!! Thank you for writing a fic that so engaged my mind and my senses!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 18:25 CST
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You have a wonderful story and I look forward to reading more. Thanks and update again soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 19:55 CST
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I am enjoying your story and I liked you new chapters. I hope to read more soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 18:12 CST
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LOVE IT!!!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 00:44 CST
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Thank you for the update. I enjoyed your new chapter and I hope you update again soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 10:28 CST
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Wow! I luv your story! Those last two chapters had me crying so hard. PLease update soon! I really really really like this story! ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 21:16 CST
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I am very much enjoying your story and I hope to read more soon. Please update. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 12:01 CST
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This is interesting and very readable. I'm wondering exactly what's going on in terms of the memories/dreams, but I'm sure you'll explain it all eventually, and in the meantime I'm very much enjoying the read.
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really starting to take shape. I can not wait until the next chapter comes out. I hope that you do it soon.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 03:57 CST
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SWEET!! You DO know that this an awesomely good story, right? Well you should. I've got you down as one of my favs, and I ain't lettin' go, so I'd better see another chapter quick!! :)
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story keep up the good work. cant wait to see where this is all going. Hope that you get the next chp. out soon. Great work you are very talented.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, shEEt!! I can't believe you stopped there!! Cruel and unusual punishment, cruel and unusual punishment!!! Do I EVEN have to say that this story is UNBELIEVABLE? I hope not...
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmm...well, it is an intresting and rather complicated story that you have woven. very well put together. i have many questions...many questions indeed which i am sure will be answered in due time. i am guessing that the Kagome and Yash of the future are reincarnations of their former selves (which is a little odd but good never the less), unless Kagome never died and has represed the memories because of how tramatic they were. anyways, great story, great plot. you have a lot of good things working together. i love how Miroku's response to being a pervert was 'i guess.' that was great. i wasn't keen on the thought of Sesshoumaru mistaking Yash to be their dad, thats a real nasty slip of the tongue that InuYasha could easily hold over his brother head....if he could reach that high. great story. keep it comming.
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Title: great beginning!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 04:17 CST
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What a sweet chapter! I can't wait to read more. Like what exactly she wished for and how the whole gang (I'm assuming Miroku and Sango will show up later) is now in her era and not Sengoku Jidai. Was everyone's memory wiped? Did they just live on to her time? If that's so, then Miroku and Sango died... This a great story. I look forward to your next chapter. Ja ne! :) Joy
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