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Title: i've only just begun
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've given you a "10" because i haven't even finished the first chapter and i can tell that i'll be hooked. i happened to look up at the review amount and was SHOCKED to see that you don't have atleast a hundred more. i thought to myself, "i must perform my readers duty and review immediately!" there's no telling how many authors quit writing just because they aren't getting enough feedback. i just wanted to let you know that your story looks to be promising. i can't wait to get back to it and finish the rest. please continue it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 07, 2005 08:47 CDT
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You have Inuyasha perfectly in character and I like how you are building their relationship again. I think sleeping by Kagome each night would lead to a citrus sooner rather than later since he already knows they are mates and he still loves her. Great job so far. Update soon please. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 23:30 CDT
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Wow. This wasn't all that hentai...were you thinking of the next chapter. I really liked this chapter. It shows how much Inuyasha is hurting b/c he can't remember. But he will perservere.
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Title: Title?
Reviewed By: Arcangel3012 On: May 03, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is the first time that I have reviewd on this site. I have found your story enjoyable thus far. I have to say that I am a littl upset to see that InuYasha has reverted to his old self. I was quite enjoying his protective, softer side. I hop that he gets his memory back soon. Keep up the good work. I hope to read happier chapters in the future as well. Contact: Dolly10_4_84@hotmail.com or tmb@muw.edu Elementary Education Major/ English/ History
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Title: Title?
Reviewed By: Arcangel3012 On: May 03, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is the first time that I have reviewd on this site. I have found your story enjoyable thus far. I have to say that I am a littl upset to see that InuYasha has reverted to his old self. I was quite enjoying his protective, softer side. I hop that he gets his memory back soon. Keep up the good work. I hope to read happier chapters in the future as well. Contact: Dolly10_4_84@hotmail.com or tmb@muw.edu Elementary Education Major/ English/ History
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reding chapter one today and I simply coulden't stop! The interaction between Kagome and the reverted Inuyasha who knows himself from 500 years ago is PERFECT! Update soon! P.S. some sango and miroku action would be nice.. eep I hope Inuyasha does get back to normal though!!
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Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I wanted to cry with Kagome when InuYasha was being such a meanie!! But, he does act a lot like his Feudal self, so kudos for that. You're doing great on their unbalanced relationship right now. And Sesshoumaru-sama is good too, he's a little nicer than I'm used to reading/writing him, but you can tell he wants to make things better, though he's gruff about it. That's Fluffy-sama for you. *pets Fluffy's fluffy* Overall, good job, waiting the next eagerly!!! ^^v
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 02, 2005 16:53 CDT
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I like how you are developing their relationship again. Inuyasha is very in character and I can't wait for you to have him rediscover Kagome sexually. ;) Update again soon, please. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: sakurakesshou(too lazy to sign in) On: May 02, 2005 16:31 CDT
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You've definately got the kagome and inuyasha interaction going well. Though to me Sesshoumaru seemed like he was being hasty talking to Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 13:08 CDT
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Awww... I feel so bad for Inuyasha and Kagome. Plz update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: April 27, 2005 00:50 CDT
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Wow. That was a good chapter. I can't wait until the next one. I want more Kagome/Inuyasha fluff! Yay! Fluff is good. So is the memory thing. I really wasn't expecting that.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: April 27, 2005 00:36 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha...and poor Kagome being deprived of a very demonstrative lover. Then again, letting Inuyasha rediscover her should be extremely fun. Update again soon, please!
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You've got a nice story here! I might check up on it later. It was quite captivating really! The transitions between the visions and what was going on now were neat. Me like!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:21 CDT
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Great chapter! Oh, boy, I can't wait to see what Inuyasha does when he finds out he is mated to Kagome. Update soon please! ==As an aside note, I just wanted to mention that I think this story deserves more reviews. I think if you allow unsigned reviews, you might get more. 'Just a suggestion...
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 18:41 CDT
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Wah!!! Great story! Really fantastic. It moves a little slow, but I enjoy all of the Kagome and Inuyasha fluff. Keep up the great work!
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