| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvr13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story first caught my eye while ago on fanfiction.net but I thought it was pointless angst so I stopped reading it after the first chapter. Now that I have read it I have to say, I was horribly wrong. This story is extraordinary! I would have to say this is one of the best fanfics I ever read (trust me, I have read a lot of good and crummy fanfics in my day). You have an awesome writing style. I canft wait for the next chapter (that was one hell of a cliffy you left in chp 27). ^_^
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: youkai_lover2006 On: July 30, 2006 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story for a long time, and i really love so. so does my friend!! and holy crap!! shippou was watching them!!! >.O" lol. now, i'll read ch 27 >.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: youkai_lover2006 On: July 30, 2006 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story for a long time, and i really love so. so does my friend!! and holy crap!! shippou was watching them!!! >.O" lol. now, i'll read ch 27 >.
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Reviewed By: kenji06 On: July 30, 2006 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel horrible that I have read up to chapter 26, and have not left a single review. I'm sooo sorry. You are such a great writer, not just in this fic but in all of your fics. Hope to see an update soon!
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Reviewed By: Pandora Ramirez On: July 28, 2006 22:03 PDT
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Oh crap, I hope it's "THE" madness! As usual, it's fantastic, totally into it and jonsing for more whenever you can get the time! I need some Chapter 28 action right about now! As a side comment, I hope you are considering writing a novel some day; you, more than any fic writer I think I've ever read, have the abilty to flesh out a story so much as to warrant it's length. A story so intense, emotional and with such a complex conflict to potentially resolve, could never be encapsulated in a small package. That said...if it goes on much longer, I am going to go totally insane wanting to know what happens now! GAH! Anyways, as always, fabulous. Your writing has attitude and character...and that's the most important attribute ANY author can ever hope to implent into their stories. Looking forward to the next time I can review. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Portia On: July 28, 2006 16:41 PDT
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ohhhhhhhh god. Madness? NOT THE MADNESS! You torture me with your torture of doom!
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Title: heyy
Reviewed By: beccapatty2 On: July 27, 2006 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayy another excellent chapter! i keep lookin forward to it.. and once again i wasn't dissapointed! This story is sooo good.. I can't believe Inuyasha finally told her he loved her.. and all the disaster that happened afterwards.. scaryy.. I feel soo bad for both of the hurting characters! :( :( ahhh when is Kagome gonna take Miroku's advice and tell inuyasha about the baby.. *sniff* soooo saddd.. great job u always make ur chapters soo well that the readers just get right into it.. I block out everything around me and its like im right there watching the whole thing play out.. ahhh keeep up the great work! cant wait to see what happens next!
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Title: ch26
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 09:12 PDT
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Oooh I have chills! That was absolutely heartwrenching! Can't wait to see where you take it from here!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 27, 2006 08:48 PDT
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and here i was thinking there couldnt be a worse cliffy than the last one. i hate you for proving me wrong and id LOVE you if youd share those 10 pages that are obviously in your head right now (muahaha no more writers-block-excuses for you young lady!). well im sitting hoping waiting wishing!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 26, 2006 05:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W . h . o . . a! (said with awe!) This story's going to kill me! Wheezambu you amaze me with your work. Your work is better than most books that I pay to read. I could sit here and drool on and on about it. The cliffhanger at the end . . . InuYasha has gone mad again. (Insert stress and worry here.) I hope Kagome can save him. (Pause, thought.) I hope he can save Kagome from being self destructive. Shippo, Rin, Miroku. This story is a boiling pot of emotions and cliffhangers. The best kind of story we love! More power to you, Wheezambu! Thank you, Cynbad146
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Title: Superb
Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 02:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only recently found this fic, but I spend the time between chapters wishing for more because this is the best 'dark' Inuyasha fic I've seen, bar none, and one of the most angsty and compelling things I've read in 11 years of internet fanfiction perusal. Bravo.
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Reviewed By: srg1 On: July 26, 2006 00:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read this on adultfanfiction.net,but since its down for repairs, I read it here instead. I think this was one of your best chapters. I kept wondering if Kagome would reveal that they had a child that died. I was so surprised that Inuyasha took everything that Kagome told him so well. I wonder if he will ever remember his past. This is a great story, and I really hope you can update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:20 PDT
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*gasp* That was so good. I completely forgot about the baby! I was shocked for a minute. Thanks for the update. This is such a good story. I liked that you had Inuyasha pretend he knew Shippou was watching. It sounded like something Inuyasha might have done in the old, pre-jewel-possession days; to make it sound like he was in control when he wasn't. Except for the have sex with Kagome part. This is coming out wrong, but I hope you know what I mean.
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Title: ch. 27
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 19:21 PDT
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(sigh) No one ever said Inuyasha was guilty of tact or brains. Unconscious? Is that darn cloud thing back?
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aagh! So damn heartbreaking...I wanted to slap Inuyasha at the beginning of the chapter for making such as ass out of himself to Shippou, but then hurt along with him in his desperate isolation at the end. I just couldn't side with any character in this chapter. They all were just so depressing and I'm glad my love life isn't this wretched. I'm suprised I didn't bawl at home sad Inuyasha was at the end. I absolutely love this story and this was a great chapter. I admit this is the one story that I actually flip out about when it is updated. So thanks so much for the delightfully soul wrenching chappie!
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