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Reviewed By: Kendra On: February 13, 2006 02:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in readers bliss right now. bloody hell, bloody hell that was frelling fantastic. You do know now that I will have your internet babies.
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Title: perfect!
Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 00:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your characters are sooooo REAL! I love this piece! See, it's not just a story...it's a freakin' PIECE! I await your next update eagerly.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: February 12, 2006 23:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wishes do come true. Tonight, I was just hoping that you would update soon, and lo and behold, there it was. Again, you leave me breathless with the emotions that your talent can easily create. The chapter was WONDERFUL. There were many parts and quotes that I loved. You may get on to me for listing same, but here are some: "Do it because you can." When Kagome was appealing to InuYasha because of his sad youth; "Because I liked the way it felt to hear you defending me." This said so much, how InuYasha needs to be loved; The description of Shippo's feelings during his entry showing his relief that Kagome AND InuYasha were okay. A redeeming scene for Shippo; The part where InuYasha is fantasizing after his frustration of being interupted with Kagome. Well worded; Kagome admitting discoveries to herself, that neither were the same anymore. Deep thoughts; Most of all, the last scene. "You don't understand a damn thing, InuYasha." "His senses were rocked . . . " "This is what she wanted, secretly in the hidden places of her heart, to have him under her control." And last, "She made him helpless . . ." This is the only thing that I could believe would make InuYasha truly helpless. Wheezambu, you are on FIRE with this chapter. Guess I need a glass of cold lemonade now or a short hospital stay for my pounding heart. Thank you for such a rewarding chapter. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 22:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a place to stop. now i have to wonder how drastically things will change after That! i can totally understand where Kagome would want the dominance over him. the control. you seriously made my day with this update. i just can't sum up exactly what i love most about this fic. it's like picking a fave child or something. i just love it all.
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Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 21:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused. It's not finished is it? The status is listed as "Completed," it isn't is it? I really hope not. There's still so much left unresolved. I really love this story, so please don't say it ends like this. I really like your writing a lot. Also, I got two emails saying that a new chapter had been added, but there's only one new one. So what's the official chapter count? Good luck writing and please update soon. And that's for the quick update last time. Be assured it didn't go unappreciated. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: InuSaga (NSI) On: February 12, 2006 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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On one hand I'm glad the well didn't work. It's not like Kagome would come back to work stuff out with InuYasha afterward. On that same note the next chapter should be very interesting, in a "morning after" sort of way. On the other hand, Kagome is screwed. I'm glad that everyone seems to be coming back to themselves a bit, and I'm looking forward to when Kouga makes his comeback. Good work as always. Told ya I'd review. ~_^
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 19:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter! Still makes me wonder though, if and when, InuYasha does regain his memories and if Kagome ever does tell him of the child they both lost. And what the hell is that nasty-ass evil that they had felt before. That still has me baffled. Lol, though it doesnt take much for that. Most awesome story. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: KitLane On: February 12, 2006 18:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just letting you know that half your story is in italics :)
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Reviewed By: SorcyFujin On: February 12, 2006 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL AS USUAL!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! VERY VERY SOON, okay?
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 18:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh good lord, that was hot. I LOVE the way you write such sensual scenes, seriously they have me on the edge of my seat! heh, Great update! Really looking forward to the next now!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 16:35 PST
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Kagome's trying to con him into a freebie act of helping people, echoing the way they used to act. Even if Inuyasha can't remember, I can tell that this is going to resonate for him. I think there's a mistake with the formatting, though. The whole second half is in italics, and they make it look like we're starting a flashback. ~~~ Ah... A lemon, but a dark one. That wasn't an act of healing, was it? Truly, it could go either way. ~~~Tell me that Shippo wasn't watching that.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I don't know whether to hate you or love you for that chapter! I love the role reversal at the end. It's amazing how much they've changed and realized about themselves in this chapter. The ending? WHOA, hot enough I'd say! I can't wait to see what the outcome is of that little noctural adventure. Excellent writing as always! Keep it up you torturer ;)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: February 12, 2006 16:20 PST
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...O_o. should i be near tears at the end of a lemon? oh.my.god. i dont' think it's possible for my heart to lurch so many times in a span of fifteen minutes! and what you said rings true; she was never seen again. once more, you have ripped away everything i hold dear over kagome and inuyasha's relationship and left me with just this desolate wisps of hope that shall never be filled. damnit woman, you need to stop making me cry!!!! ^__^ love the story, love the angst...it's just so...wow.
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: February 12, 2006 15:39 PST
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How do you DO that? You just can't tell if they're gonna kill each other or find their salvation in each other's arms with an ending like that! INCREDIBLE! Keep up the good work!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: cockitpullit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 21:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really well written, interesting writing style =) just little spelling mistakes like saying "going to the will" instead of the "well" XD This is one of the best inuyasha fics ive read so far, definitely top 5!! Oh but im just concerned about how much umm "ten years before" things there are -_- there awesome but soooo suspenceful! oh and yeah wit all the rape or w/e? its weird lol but yeah u did u put warnings lol goood job update soon
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