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Title: ooOOO
Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 13:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shockingly amazing! Goodness and it is so dark. I love the way you have Inuyashas side of the story too. Please update soon! *hops on foot with impatience*
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Title: ..
Reviewed By: Caramel On: February 02, 2006 01:27 PST
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update........bleh. 11 days of smut writing sounds kinda......gross
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Title: ch. 18
Reviewed By: Ithilwen NLI On: February 01, 2006 19:55 PST
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I do not see Kagome being this cool with someone coming at her with a knife, especially not when Sango would have been able to convince her verbally that her appearance needed alteration. For her own good -- whatever -- what she did was assault. This Sango deserves to get sliced where it won't grow back.
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 20:12 PST
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Wow I must admit I absolutely loved this update. It wasn't super action packed and nothing too crazy happened but I got a really good feel for how their group is coming together and liked the character interactions between Rin and Shippo especially. The dialog for the ending scene with Kagome was very well done also. It was raw and very honest and because of that I felt it was more powerful. That and the line "The look in his eyes promised violence" I loved! For some reason it made me grin :D So much to the point I didn't mind the evil cliffy too bad...but the promise of smut in the A/N is what really killed me! REALLY looking forward to your next update, no one writes smut like you do :) Ja!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: namethatisnotanother On: January 29, 2006 11:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading (and waiting on) your story for quite some time now. i can't explain the feelings i get when i read your story. the only thing i wish for (and i know you'll hate me for this!) is that you would update more often. but i also know that that wouldn't help you write the chapters as well as you do. so, i'll patiently wait to be awed by each and every word you write. i'm a serious reader, and i don't read every fanfic that i come across. in fact, i've already read most of the good fics, and i'm dissapointed in the fact that it literally takes me hours to find a halfway decent fic to read. but your style is amazing. i love it. please don't stop. oh! and i would really appreciate it if you coud give me links to some good fics. thanks a bunch, keep on keepin' on, your fan, ----isabella e-mail: necoconeco_1@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 26, 2006 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I forgot something on my AFF review. I thought the way you wrote the end of the chapter, where InuYasha was just PRETENDING to be knocked out, was very surprising and exciting. I did NOT see it coming. That is some talent you have. I hope Kagome can save him before he gets out of control, but at the same time, those bad hunters could use a lesson or two. Poor Kagome can not seem to win, can she? She finally decided to be herself and save InuYasha, but unfortuanately, she may regret it. I am not even going to guess what direction you will take the storyline. This is a Kick A-- story. Thanks, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: January 25, 2006 20:40 PST
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man. phew. might as well have left US tied to that pole... eagerly waiting for more!
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Title: ARRghghgh
Reviewed By: Amie NSI On: January 24, 2006 20:27 PST
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What a cliffie! I love this story! Please update soon! Like, yesterday! Thank you so much for writing!
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: January 24, 2006 05:53 PST
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NOOO! How evil is that cliffhanger!? *cries* I pray to all that is holy that you update SUPER-SOON! I think the suspense really might kill me.
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Title: EVIL!!!
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 21:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I nearly had a heart attack when I saw where you ended that one! Evil doesn't even begin to describe it! I understand, though, what's it's like when "life's kicking you in the ass," but please, please don't make us wait as long as we did for this chapter. I had nearly lost hope, but you pulled through. My savior!
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 17:34 PST
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Holy toledo batman! What an awesome chapter! So, wow, Kags stood up for him. What great characterization you have here. I don't think Inuyasha will go all Kill Bill on us because Kagome would never forgive him. I think he will make a stand and show her that he really is different and they will get all mushy for each other. Of course he could go all kill bill on us and that would be cool. If you do go that way make sure you put in there that winter sceen with the scalping! Just kiding, great work the suspense was great!
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Reviewed By: Dopy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 16:44 PST
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omg!!! I have been dieing for an update to your story. This chapter was awesome. Now I dont know if i want inuyasha to go crazy killer or just walk away...either way would be fine with me though.The ending just left me all wide eyed....please please PLEASE!!!!! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!! I feel like I got a breath of air taken away from me.
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Title: screw shippo!!
Reviewed By: \sdjagjlag On: January 23, 2006 16:21 PST
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dude..kill shippo!!!! he's and ass and shit for brains!!! an ignorant jerk he don't deserve to live...that little bastard!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: January 23, 2006 16:16 PST
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Wow, that was an awesome update...I hope he won't murder anyone...please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: junsei On: January 23, 2006 13:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrrrrrrrrrrrrr......... update soon.....wicked author.........
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