| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] |
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 30, 2006 19:08 PDT
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You fic entrances me into a sort of emptiness that I am so familiar with, but can't place. It doesn't make sense to me, but it's beautiful in its loneliness and pain... Even now I can feel the lump in my throat I can't quite swallow. And only one other author has ever made me feel this way, but that was based off of pure familiarity and rememberance of something that actually occurred. Amazing...
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh! That was an evil cliffy and you know it!! That is kinda gross if shippou was watching the whole time!! Eww! I mean was he or did he come afterwards and heard their conversation?? Clear this up please! I dont wat shippou to seem like some twisted sick pervert or nothing! Grea story though!! I love it!! Find a way for Inuyasha to live. I like happy endings ya know!! Fix everything at the end of the story when you decide to end it!! Por favor!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long awaited and much appreciated. What else can I say? I think the other reviewers said it all. Beautiful chapter with alotta info as well. The dream Kagome had was rather intense. And I was half expecting for Miroku's spirit to show up there as well. Then InuYasha remembering bits. He knew he did something just not quite sure as to what. Wonder what will happen once he finds out all. Should be interesting to say the least. Then Shippo showing up right after they....hmmm....well, cant wait to see what all happens next. But update when you can.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 30, 2006 16:38 PDT
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You have done it again. I can not believe how talented you are. I know that we had to wait a long time for this chapter; but everytime you update you make up for the wait. Awesome chapter. If you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 14:37 PDT
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that was an awesome chapter!! thanks for updating. now i hope you update again soon because that was one major and nasty cliffy!!
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Title: Thoughts
Reviewed By: Krazy Kilala On: May 30, 2006 14:27 PDT
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I felt the need to comment on this chapter, although I usually just read them and spare the comments, I actually doubt you read these. However, very nice chapter. Left me wanting to go find my boyfriend ;) And then ending, with Shippou...magnificent.
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 12:33 PDT
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happy ending, happy ending, happy ending!!!! i love this story soooooooooooooooooooooooooo so so much! but please HAPPY ENDING!! i will cry if it's not cuz i love this story too much!
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Title: ch. 26
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 09:22 PDT
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Ayame's grown strong and Kagome's grown weak. ...And Inuyasha's grown prudent?! What the crud?! He's finally learned exactly what to say. Lovin' the ride ...not as much as Kagome seems to, but still, I'm loving the ride. GRAMMAR ETC: Eh, a few run-on sentences...
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Title: YAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 09:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another amazing chapter cough*finally*cough, but seriously, great job. i didn't think the story could get any better, but you just keep suprising me. as always, update soon, but it doesn't really make a difference what i say now does it? i'm just glad you keep adding chapters at all. i read a really cool story called turnabout is fair play, but it was never finished, and that really sucks. so thank you for keeping on writing. 'til next time!
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Reviewed By: C.penny On: May 30, 2006 06:40 PDT
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OMG! This is so intense, I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'll be patiently waiting for your next update. ~CA
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 00:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gods. This story is so intense. I love how polarized the emotions are in your writing. I think this chapter showed a great deal of that in all of the charaters. The lack of middle ground...only intense love and intense hate...trying to find that middle ground, so torturous! I love what is developing between Inuyasha and Kagome. Amazing end scene there. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: May 30, 2006 00:02 PDT
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Whoa! I did not see that coming! Yeah it was a long wait. But you made it up to us with that awesome chap! Keep it up Wheez
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Title: SENSATIONAL!
Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* God, I love your story! I have read (and reviewed it - several times actually :D under a different user name tho) on adultfanfiction.net but only just found it here, and I just couldn't resist the urge to tell you again what a brilliant story this is! I quite often (as in all the time) get lost in the stories I'm reading, taking on the feelings and emotions of the characters - and I have to say, your story almost has me sobbing with aching and lonliness at the end of just ONE chapter; after several consecutive chapters I almost have to walk away and go find something extremely happy to do, or drown in dispair. ....Well, ok, maybe that's a slight exageration, but not by much. your story is so wonderfully written as well, not just a gripping tale, but beautifully worded and .....just brilliantly done! I think that anyone who reads Inuyasha fanfictions is at a terrible loss if they do not read at least one of your stories - if not this one (altho,as you might guess, I highly recommend it:D)then ust anyone of your stories! another of my ALL time favorites is your "the youkai and the exterminator" which I can't wait to get the chance to go and check out the new updates that I wasn't able to acces for a long time. Hope you update soon, and keep up the good work!!!! :D P.S - I hope that my review made some sense - it's like almost three in the morning, and I am hardly making sense to myself, so I can;t imagine what kind of sense I would be making to someone else. But I think that you'd probablybe able to get the gist of my review anyway :D
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Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: April 30, 2006 05:00 PDT
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Enter Kouga! Exciting chapter. I'm glad to see Rin fitting in with Kagome, Shippou and the wolves, but it still seems a little strange that she could be so lighthearted in their midst, after her own experiences and a lifetime of alliance with Sesshoumaru and InuYasha. I have so much sympathy for Kagome and InuYasha - they are both SO damaged. I'm assuming "boss" is Kohaku? His animus towards InuYasha is completely justified, especially if that memory is an accurate one and InuYasha had Sango for a snack. Can this story *get* any better?! Updates make me so ridiculously happy! You're such a great writer, Wheezambu. Thank you for your efforts.
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Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: April 27, 2006 22:14 PDT
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What is this sorrow filled creature. Is it what happened to Inuyashas memories cause there is that yawning emptiness when he tries to remember stuff and it's a soul that is being devoured by demons? (I'm part of that mailing list thingy so this is sort of reacting to the person who thought it was Miroku...which is kinda weird cause his spirit is talking to Kagome, not trapped like this one) So I was just awonderin if you've figured out what it is going to be...or is it like Naraku/Onigumos soul or something???...I don't know...all I do know is that...YOU MUST UPDATE OR I SHALL SWALLOW YOUR BRAIN...wait no that would mean you wouldn't be able to update...fine...Update or i shall...TIE YOU UP AND COVER YOUR FEET WITH RABID FERRETS OF DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!... I love you!
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