| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] |
| Pages (51): [ « ‹ 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 › » ] |
Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 11, 2005 19:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
You keep me sitting on the edge of my seat!! I can't wait to see what's next.. especially with her pinned to a wall with a very mad demon choking her!! LOVE IT!! Happily waiting for more!
|
Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 00:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
i've just finsished reading chapter ten and wanted to respond to your question. i admit that it does bother me sometimes, but not so much the sexual abuse as much as the psychological abuse linked within the sexual abuse. i trust that you will not make her up and forgive him easily, which is one of the reasons i keep reading. also if you've ever read my story caged (no this is not a plug) you'd see that i like the dark portrayal of kagome as well. i love your writing style it's so beautiful, another reason i keep reading. i also love the skipping between past and present, very original. please keep it up :)
|
Reviewed By: PrncessS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! It's very well written, with good imagery and expressiveness. I truly feel Kagome's emotions. It is a little dark and seems like a rape/abuse fic (but you said it isn't, correct?) but it's so well written I'm in suspense! I have to know what happens. Please update soon, I can't wait to see how it turns out, how they both end up changing before the story ends, and what happened to InuYasha to make him ill after Kagome escaped.
|
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: May 10, 2005 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_o ehn! nnnhhh!! ehhhh!! @_@ O_O nhaaarrrrghh!!!! ::bites nails::
|
Title: 13^Yeah
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
So Sesshoumaru doesn't believe Kagome and Inuyasha's not going to believe Kagome, but there is one moderately objective source. I eagerly await the appearance of our resident Myouga ex machina.
|
Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
NO No NO you have to be kidding me you CANNOT leave me hanging right there I swear im going to cry!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU DONT TAKE LONG TO UPDATE IM DESPERATE!!
|
Title: Thr 13th Addendum
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kagome's "friends who had died," not "friends that had died." ~~~ "What was the point, he was never going to win against Inuyasha," and "Why did you come after me, I was already on my way back?" are both run-on. Separating them would make it easier to understand which part is the question and which is not. ~~~ "Aren't you going to ask me why I'm here," "Are you insane," "Did he tell you that," and "Why should I help you," each need a ? ~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ Saw the Makikoslap coming about two chapters away. I must say, though, that for someone who tried to melt her in demon acid just to tick off his little bother, his given name is hardly the most offensive thing that Kagome has a right to call him. ~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ Hooo... If Kagome does hook up with Inuyasha again, even an Inuyasha freed from the Shikon and somewhat restored to himself, Shippo will have a hell of a time dealing. ~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ It's pretty cool to see Kagome using all the skills -- corrupt and otherwise -- that she learned in her years of self-destruction. It's almost as if fate had been looking out for her after all. ~~~
|
Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 16:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great cliffy. I love how you portrayed Fluffy in this chapter. He is always after answers to his questions and doesn't give a damn about others needs or concerns! I like Kagome's reaction. I did not expect her to be able to give him too much info, just enough to make him happy and not bring up too much within herself. I love the ending! So, he finally does recognize her but who does he think she is??? Can't wait to find out! Love the fanart!
|
Title: must punish inuyasha
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in my head I can hear myself growling the perfect growl right now...damn that dog eared jerk, and his fluffy brother too...man oh man...the more I read the angrer I get...I love it, I can't remember when a story drew me in as much as this one does, I hope the next update is out soon
|
Title: The Thirteenth Demon
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 11:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
Just a note for now -- "could hardly stand it," not "couldn't."
|
Reviewed By: LavenderRose (nsi) On: May 10, 2005 08:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Shades of episode 1! Does she really still resemble Kikyou, even with aging 10+ years? Another great chapter...can't wait to see what happens next time!
|
Reviewed By: Shapiro [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 08:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice!!!! I liked the confrontation between Sess and Kagome. But I loved the encounter with Inu!!! Thank you for the fix!! Hope you hand out more!!!
|
Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 10, 2005 07:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a freaking genius. This chapter was awesome for someone who wrote it in one night. Do you have an outline for this story or this just comes to you when you write?? Please if you can update really soon (like later in the week). Just joking, but please very soon.
|
Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 10, 2005 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a freaking genius. This chapter was awesome for someone who wrote it in one night. Do you have an outline for this story or this just comes to you when you write?? Please if you can update really soon (like later in the week). Just joking, but please very soon.
|
Reviewed By: Mel240 On: May 03, 2005 12:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I'm going to cry. Why am I going to cry? I'm going to cry because I have to wait for the next chapter. I'm going to cry because there's so many questions I have and all this anticipation... It is so damn hard to find a great Inuyasha fanfic. Especially one as well-written as this. I've read some stories with wonderful plot lines, but the stories were messily put together for the sake of reviews. I absolutely adore the twists you threw in this story. Kagome's transformation, the fucking beautiful, and sick irony of Inuyasha losing his goddamn memory. OF ALL THINGS! I can see that you're going to drag Kagome through the mud by her hair kicking and screaming in this story...that poor girl. All I can say is, that I hope Inuyasha makes up for what he did to her. Even if it's not possible, I basically can't wait to see him try. I loved how you portrayed Shippou, and your theory on him thinking of her as more than a 'surrogate mother'. It was all very fitting. Man...I hope I hope I hope you update soon. This story is wonderful. Definitely up there with the 'Lucky Ones'. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
|
| Pages (51): [ « ‹ 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 › » ] |
