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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: goosh On: April 24, 2005 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is the greatest angst ff I've ever read. Keep up the good work! I loveeee this story.
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Reviewed By: Shapiro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 20:34 PDT
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Another masterpiece to add to your work of art!! I'm so glad you updated, I was starting to get the chills! Can't wait for the next installment, I'm just enjoying the ride way too much!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: April 24, 2005 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, wow. =/ im so glad you updated already.. ive been really depressed lately, but every step this story takes that i read, is helping me. i hope you can update again soon. thank you..
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 24, 2005 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoohoo!!! What a chapter! I just want to say that I have no critism to share on this story. I am really enjoying the angst. I have a feeling that Kagome and InuYasha will not be together at the end . . . but, I still hope that they will. Yes, I know you warned us, up front . . . so I am an eternal optimist, what can I say. Never hurts to hope. Anyway the story is fantastic; keep up the great work. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 18:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the anguish! Great chapter rated it a 9 because of the spacing thing. It made my eyes go cross-eyed, but it was worth it!! You explored the dark emotional side and did it well. Kagome's characterization is coming along nicely. I love the Miroku hallucination; he always has been a pillar for Kagome. Can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: April 24, 2005 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Even though mm.org messed up the formating. Very interesting how Miroku was there and talking to her-kind of like a guardian angel. I hope to see more soon!
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Title: Love this story!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 17:43 PDT
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So far, this story is my favorite of all the ones you've written...great chapter (though MediaMiner messed up the formatting, so there aren't any breaks between paragraphs). So, Kagome remembers too much, and Inuyasha too little...and the scene with Miroku's ghost at the end was thought-provoking, and not just for Kagome. Great job, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 17:08 PDT
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I don't know why only you seem to have continuing problems with formatting when you post new chapters but it's anoying. (not that it's your falt TBH). Buy any way good chapter!!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: April 24, 2005 16:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so confuzzled.... at the very last, it says: 'she had lied, and so had Miroku'. How did Miroku lie? i hope you explain everything in the next chapter!!! p.s. and please don't make the next chapter like this one! it is very confusing if you don't have paragraph breaks...-_-;;
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Reviewed By: nancey not signed in On: April 24, 2005 16:42 PDT
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Besides the formating thing. Great chapter.So the monk is in the story still, cool. Is he a gost or spirt or something else? It was kinda hard to read with no paragraphs but still as always wonderful writting
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SylverAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:36 PDT
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Wow! Great job on the story so far. It's really well-written. That last chapter was such an interesting twist, with Inuyasha not remembering her, or anything else! Now I'm anxious to see what happens next! How will she get him to remember? And how is he going to react to that kiss? lol I hope you'll have the time to update soon :)
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:33 PDT
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OH GOD!! YOUR TWIST IS SO SAD..I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! Even though I cried..Man you are so dang talented its not even funny! Im waiting for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Fluff'slurver On: April 21, 2005 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_o wow...powerful...
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Title: WHAT!?!
Reviewed By: Kazehimeko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 16:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU WHORE! YOU JUST STOP WRITTING! OMG THIS STORY IS A FUCKING WORK OF ART! I CANT BELIEVE HE DOESNT REMEMBER! omg i cried so hard please please please update soon! please!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: April 20, 2005 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn strait!
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