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Title: ONE HUNDREDTH REVIEWER!!!! WHOOP-DEE-DO!!
Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: April 03, 2005 15:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nope, the dark theme of this fic does NOT bother me at all...in fact, that's what makes this story so interesting!! keep at it!! i wonder how Kagome will react to Inuyasha now that she knows that he doesn't remember her!! hehe, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 14:05 PDT
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So Inu doesn't recognize Kagome? Or perhaps, it's not Inu? Hm... I'm curious now. Not that I wasn't before... ah well... I can't think of anything else to type... reviewing just keeps getting harder and harder for me.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have really enjoyed your fic. Yes, the sexual themes are disturbing but if they weren't then the story would not be as effective. You are effectively painting the picture to who Kagome is and how she got there. You are doing a great job with the characterization of Kagome. I really am impressed with the description of the Inu/Sess scene. I love how you portrayed the jewel eating him up from the inside. We all know that the bad Inuyasha is that way because of the jewel and not him. That is one thing that I do not understand in the magna and anime. Everyone but Kouga who uses it is corrupted by it, well Fluffy when he used it in the human arm. But Inuyasha wished on the whole jewel not just a shard. When Sess used the Tenseiga it sucked the power of the jewel out of Inuyasha because it was what was killing him. He was fighting against the jewel because of his heartbreak. Great job, you haven't missed a detail in painting the picture for the readers.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless(not loged in) On: April 03, 2005 13:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where to begin pffff. that was just great and cruel. I hate being in suspense and you did that so well. And the dark sexual themes of this story does not bother me at all. I can't speak for the rest but I can see why its a must have in your fic, why Kagome loves and hates Inu yasha. Cant wait to read the next chapter (Hell's fire, Mother Night, and may the Darkness be merciful. Let that be soon)
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Reviewed By: hin-chan On: April 03, 2005 12:59 PDT
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It was awsome!!! Geeze! A cliffie? You better update soon!! I'm seriously going to spaz.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: April 03, 2005 12:48 PDT
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oh my fucking god!!! I have not problem with how the story is going and I like it very much. But you bitch how could you fucking leave it there? I need to know what the fuck is going on. In the cave he was dying from heartbreak wasn't he and Seshomaru brought his miserable hide back but with is he lost his memories, didn't he? I don't believe it. But who are two brutes with him and oh my fucking God plz tell me you plan on updating soon!!! I don't believe you left this story here, like this on that note! I have to know what the is going on what is goiug to happen!!! I know i seem a little impatient and trust me I am. Right now life is crashing down around my ears and I'm trying to escape into a world of the unknown of the make believe until it all settles down. I need something this is one of the best fics i have read in a long time and I hate that you have writers block and I hate those pesky alien abductions but come on next time ask them for a computer. They're really kind if you know how to talk to them. Now I'm going to read the chapter again and I hope you have a wonderful and fast time writing the next chapter. Love MN - - - P.S. everyone has delt with one form of abuse or another. Sexual abuse too, it may be that it was verbal or just a sexual stare that turned you off. But if you can look back on it and smile then your fine, you'll get over it!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 03, 2005 12:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Glad to hear that your writer's block has let up. I have definitely "bein checkin in" for updates. I do not think you should change any thing concerning the subject matter. My interest was caught by how and what you were writing about. I would think for someone to say that they hope you will not write with any sexual references (dark or otherwise), would be denying the truth of why they have continued to read your well written fic. I appreciate that you hope to finish the story (so many do not). Thank you so much for sharing your work with us. I think that you are very talented. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:23 PDT
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Yes, it's a dark story, but it's an interesting kind of darkness, not mindless but mindful. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 03, 2005 12:00 PDT
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OMG! he remembers nothing?? ugh! Pleeeeease update soon! I love this story, for all it's darkness - it is a powerful thing. I will eagerly wait for the next update!!
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Title: Yay! New chappie...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: April 03, 2005 10:39 PDT
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Wow! Intense once again. Kagome's inner turmoil and Shippou's confusion just keep hitting me. And the scene with Sesshoumaru confronting an insane InuYasha was a little shocking. I knew that somewhere inside, InuYasha had to be regretting his actions...especially the way he treated Kagome. He let his new power corrupt and blind him, but once she left, he could no longer ignore how bad things had gotten. Her escape woke his conscience with a vengence. Your description of his self-flagilation and how it seemed as if something were eating at him from the inside sounds a lot like insurmountable guilt. And now InuYasha is back, saving Kagome just like before. But what's this? He doesn't remember her? He wasn't dead but Sesshoumaru used Tenseiga on InuYasha. What did that do to him? And who are the others with him holding back a frantic Shippou? -- I'm all fired up with curiosity. -- To answer your A/N: the dark sexual themes that pepper this story are disturbing, yes. But they are needful to help describe who Kagome is, what kind of world she lives in now...lives in and controls. An unfortunate result from loosing control of her life under an oppressive InuYasha's thumb. They don't bother me, they slam home how hardhearted and manipulating Kagome has become. It was neccessary for her to survive beyond her experiences. I hope that she may heal and recapture a bit of her former self.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 10:30 PDT
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Thank you for updating and please don't change your writing style. If someone is bothered by it, they can stop reading. Your story is disturbing, yes, but it is also compelling. I look forward to reading more soon. Update again, please!
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 09:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter, though i hate cliffhangers!! Please finish the next chapter sooner than this one.
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Title: This is the best!
Reviewed By: Ayonali On: March 27, 2005 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. A little annoyed that you haven't updated it. But overall, it is a good fanfic. Personally, I think that your style is quite unique. And overall, there aren't TOO many fics that Inu Yasha is, well, really horrible in. Not that he himself is horrible. Just that his behavor is. (Like what he wanted to do with Kagome in the hut when Shippou was there. Although Shippou had left. That is just evil!) And the fact that you made Kagome stronger after what has happened to her. Very good. The "mastery of four languages part" is a bit unbelievable, but we all have things in stories that are off.
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: March 19, 2005 12:16 PST
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man...good story...
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Reviewed By: Miss Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 07:15 PST
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Oh my god! This deserves a signed review from me! I can't believe it. *sniff* She's so bitter. And Shippo calling her a whore, how could he. He saw that she wanted to leave, damn it he helped her escape! Kagome can't mate him, then that would really make her a whore, not that she isn't already. She's a ho with a prepose! Get what you want and fuck who ever comes along! He seemed so hurt *whimper* by her outburst though! I love the story and keep up the good work. and what's going on with InuYasha? I can't believe he did what he did! And Sesshomaru, is he still alive? OH my fucking god! I want to know what's going on! And, Oh, *shudders* Please update soon!
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