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| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] | | Pages (51): [ « ‹ 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 › » ] | Reviewed By: amandachristine06@sbcglobal.net On: April 09, 2005 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I am in love with your story!! I am so happy you updated because I've really been waiting for more to read. I'm sorry that I don't have any real constructive criticism to offer, but it' sjust that your story is so good. This is definitely my favorite story of ALL TIME! Always believe you have great talent because you really do! I think that the dark themes of this story is what hooks everyone into it. If they don't like it, they really need to go read the kiddie stories. Your story was given the right rating, so they can't complain if it offends their tender sensibilities. *rolls eyes* But whatever. I think that the flashbacks and the present stories are coming together nicely. They easily merge into an understandable single story. I can't believe you're so cruel as to leave us with a cliffy!!!! But that's just to keep us on the edge of our seats, huh? Like the McDonald's song~I'm lovin' it. Hehe. I can't wait to read more, please don't leave us hanging. We can't hold on forever. I recently had to give up on a story that hasn't been updated since November. Please don't be like that! There is nothing worse than that. Except politics. *yuck* Until I read again! Love, Manda.
| Reviewed By: applegeeksROCK On: April 08, 2005 23:31 PDT
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oh my goodness...this is gonna be interesting..
| Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(NOTSIGHNEDIN) On: April 08, 2005 21:04 PDT
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I DONT LIKE YOU LEAVING A CLIF HANGER!!!!!!!!!!!! I DO LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: forever_love (not logged in) On: April 05, 2005 20:04 PDT
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Nope the dark theme doesnt bother me its more of a really good twist...anyways I cant believe you would leave the story at such an interesting point DANG CLIFF HANGERS hoep i wont have to wait long for the lenxt chapter..
| Reviewed By: morwen_re too lazy to loggin On: April 05, 2005 04:34 PDT
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evil author! you left it at a cliffie! i want to see the next chapter soon, 'cause this is one of the best fics i've read soo far!
| Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds (LiaChan2787@yahoo.com) On: April 04, 2005 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To answer your question, it doesn't really bother me.. I mean it is a dark theme and takes a little to switch over from the happy go-lucky story we are all used to. But that is really what I like about it. It's dark and different. So, please continue writing this. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! AngelOfDiamonds Lia
| Title: Twist of fate
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 13:09 PDT
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Another great chapter, and well worth the wait! For what it's worth, I like the darkness of this story--Kagome and Inuyasha aren't teenagers any more, and the choices they made have exacted heavy tolls. And you're offering some hope to the readers--Kagome is strong, even if she is deeply wounded, and Inuyasha...well, trust Sesshoumaru to find an exquisitely cruel way of delivering mercy via Tenseiga! No easy out for our dog-boy... I like the twist of suppressing Inuyasha's memories of what he did to Kagome...eventually, of course, they're going to have to come out, but for now, he's got a chance at redemption, a clean slate, so to speak. And you've given the readers a glimpse of his unbearable pain in the immediate aftermath of Kagome's escape. She really needed to get out of that abusive situation, but it's obvious that he literally and figuratively tore out his heart in forcing her to leave him. All of which is a really long-winded way of saying--great job so far! Please continue!!
| Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm glad you posted this chapter. This is a great chapter, and I'm so pleased with the character development. I was very happy to see you bring in Sesshoumaru's character. That scene was my absolute favorite. The ending was quite a turn of events and I look forward to see where you are going to take this. Good luck!
| Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER, On: April 04, 2005 02:05 PDT
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Oh, so SWEET!! Nope, I don't have one problem with the sexual undertones of the story, though I could see how some could or do. But as you said, if it bothers them that much, why are they still reading? Anywho, AWESOME new chapter, that last bit of who are you COMPLETELY threw me for a loop. Had no idea that was coming, and usually I'm pretty quick on the uptake. Double whammy for you!! Can't wait for the next chappie to come out!!
| Title: Edgy
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: April 03, 2005 22:36 PDT
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I for one, really enjoy the darker edgy side to this fic. I have been following it since you started this one. I find this refreshing, ok, that may be strange. Refreshing for dark and edgy. But, I mean in the sense that it is such a change from the "kissy, kissy, romance novel" types. Wlfhund
| Title: ouch!
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
,,,o_o,,, ahh.. the part with inuyasha and sesshou made me cry! it was so sad.. ::sniffle:: i didn't get the part about the ghost-demon thing.. it was moving at high speeds.. kagome thought it was a demon but not a demon, shippou said it wasn't a demon unless it was a ghost of a demon... and it was really sad and really fast. >_> if it was a demon, was it kouga? maybe it was kikyo somehow? o_O nah.. not sesshoumaru, why would he be sad? >_> maybe it was inuyasha.... but i think shippou would have noticed if it had been. That part made me really curious... also, at the very end, "Do I know you?" OUCH! xD If i was kagome, the shock would make me either pass out, start hysterically crying- or screaming- or both- or fall on the ground retching my stomach out. id probably lose my voice for a weak, too. >_>;;; lol, i wonder which of these she is going to do? or maybe she'll slap him. XD or maybe- though a bit farfetched- she'll hug him? o_O anyway, can you tell how eager i am for the next chapter? XD i hope you update it soon, and its okay that this one took you so long because we all know that better takes longer! (for the most part) oh, and about the last question of the sexual content etc... I know i for sure don't mind at all- its what makes the story dark and captivating. i wouldn't be at all happy if you changed it- and besides, i think you shouldn't worry about what your readers think- you have a good story. don't change it for anyone but yourself!
| Title: con flabin rasa frakin son of a bad word
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He doesn't remember...HE DOSN'T REMEMBER!!!!! Gah!!!!! I want to curse like Yosemity Sam...I want to through a fit like some kind of spoiled three year old after his mom says no in the candy section. OOOOOOOOh I'm so glad that I looked up you story do day cause the damn site didn't send me my notication...I've been pray to everyones muses, but it looks like I need to pray to yours. Oh muse please do not abandon this author again, cause If I don't get read more soon I'll surely go as made as Inuyasha after Kagome left. Sigh well until next I'll be waiting as patianly as I can. Ja
| Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: April 03, 2005 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fuck anyone who doesn't think your story doesn't kick ass royally. it's twisted and dark and awesome in every concievable way. if they can't handle reading something angsty then they're weak and pathetic and have absolutly now idea what great work is. to all those whom disagree with me in the aspect of your work kicking ass: fuck off. lotsa love, a forever faithful reader of your work. (even if that's the only thing i have faith in. ;P
| Reviewed By: haleos18 On: April 03, 2005 19:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O wow...*in complete awe*. man, i LIKE the concept. there aren't enough stories like this where kagome and inuyasha actually have issues to work through. thank you for really developing conflict and plot and oh geez louise if you were god i would totally worship you. please update soon ^-^
| Reviewed By: Nyachan (too lazy to log in a sakurakessho On: April 03, 2005 16:51 PDT
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Wow! At frist when I started reading your story this morning I thought that I wouldn't like it. But damn...you're an awesome writer! As you said, it is a really dark fic. But it works well with the storyline that you've chosen. Really, I can't see this fic being any less dark than it already is. Is it going to get any darker? Now, honestly I cannot wait for your next chapter. I hope you get it out soon. Keep up the really wonderful work. *holds out chocolate covered coffee beans* Maybe these will help? ^_^;
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