| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] |
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: March 08, 2005 19:58 PST
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wow... i have to say this story is really interesting! i really like the way you keep going back from whats happened and what happening, it adds a nice little touch to the story. great job, update soon!
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Reviewed By: forever_love (not logged in) On: March 07, 2005 21:51 PST
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AHHHHHHHHH Omg you are a genius! I hope kagome meets inuyasha soon i wanna see what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 11:51 PST
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awsome fic. can't wait for more. not very creative i know but i'm soooo tired. i'll write more creative next time, mabey? Zirra
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Reviewed By: SammuriKitty420 On: March 05, 2005 11:46 PST
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Ah..I've been following this fic for so long..too long. Anyways it took me forever to find it, I'd always read a chapter, then lose it, then read all the chapters over again to see where I'd left off. But this time I'm keeping it, and I've finally finished reading what there is to read..strange, I remember there being more chapters than 9..oh well Please do update soon.
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Title: to die for @_@
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel (not signed in) On: March 04, 2005 21:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang, man! one of these days im going to read one of your chapters and ill never get out! ill be stuck in a mental loop, over and over, and they'll have to send me to a mental institution because ill think that i live in the sengoku jidai with inuyasha and kagome and shippou XD. You are such a good writer! whenever i read, it makes my heart race! i went back and read the things that you changed.. its a little odd, but thats probably just because i read the original stuff so many times that its wierd to see it different. XD anyway, hot damn you are a good author! so good! it kills me.. oh, btw, the ending to chapter 9 was so sweet... oh, i hope you update soon! i absolutely love your story- the suspense, the drama, the mystery, the angst.. it makes you wonder.. but i always knew that inu wouldn't really betray her. maybe he wasn't faking it when his old self came back before she ran away down the well.. okay, im talking too much. >_> see what you do to me? im so excited and hyper now XD i think ill read it all over again! XD ^_^ FIVE HEARTFELT TENS FOR WEEZER!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 19:32 PST
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It seems the healing has started... Hm, is it me or does Inu seem to be representing 'corruption' suddenly? And he can see the signs in others, or try and use what could be misinterpreted as such against others. Like Shippou's love for Kagome, he stated he wanted her as a mate but was pretending to be like a child until he grew... but I think that love was that of a child for a mother. And that Shippou just wished too protect Kagome. AS he stated. That scene though, capitivated me. Her wounds haven't healed over the course of ten years... how will they heal? I think I know, but truly, you are the only one who does know. Thus, I should leave all predictions to you. Please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: kakja1234(nli) On: March 04, 2005 12:16 PST
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omg! that was so sad! kagome's relkationship with inu, and shippo wanted to marry her. dang, really good fic, love the darkness, update soon!
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Reviewed By: maleng On: March 03, 2005 21:08 PST
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oh my gosh that was... well... very different and i loved it.
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Reviewed By: Sharibet (not signed in) On: March 03, 2005 11:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Another excellent chapter...you're doing a fabulous job keeping up the emotional intensity. I liked seeing Kagome begin to come to terms with what she's had to do, had to become to survive the aftermath of her time with demon-Inuyasha, and that scene with Shippou was masterfully written. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 10:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very much enjoyed this chapter, I am can't wait to find out what really happend to inu yasha.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 03, 2005 07:15 PST
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poor shippo. You have such a wonderful story going - I can't wait for more. What Sess finds in the cave. What others from her past show up. At least she and Shippo have cleared the air.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 06:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better. I love the interaction between Kagome and Shippo in this one. Good work!
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Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 05:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, and very well written. Very angsty, but that makes the happily ever afters more enjoyable, I think. I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: March 03, 2005 04:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...does this have ANY pairing at all...?
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 23:43 PST
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Dang...you made me cry again. Poor Shippo and poor Kagome. I honestly don't know what to say except that this bittersweet reunion has opened wounds that have never healed, may never heal. The raw emotions...wondering who is to blame for past events...self recriminations and painful anger; my heart aches for them all. -- Great Chapter!
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