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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: July 08, 2005 06:05 PDT
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Bravo!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:08 PDT
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i can't believe how the relationship between inu and sessh has developed. it should have always been that way. so, inu is a walking time-bomb where his memories are concerned? poor kag. she's gonna have alot to deal with real soon. did inu EVER feel for her? could he have it in him to feel remorse if he remembers? if so, would kag even care? did the jewel change him completely, or did he always have it in him? i'm hoping for the best! @_@
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 18:38 PDT
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Very enjoyable chapter. I loved the whole chapter. From Kouga's interaction with Inuyasha to Miroku haunting a naked Kagome! You really have shed some light on the past and the future of this fic. I am beginning to understand what happened and I am getting excited about what is to come. Will Inuyasha's mortality bring him and Kagome together? Or will it be the prophecy Miroku is predicting which has something to do with the jewel and Kikyo. See I am already guessing and eager for more! Hey and don't worry about people saying Inuyasha is out of character. Well, duh he turned into a full demon possessed by the evil of the sacred jewel. That wouldn't change your personality at all, only PMS right? Thanks again for sharing your story!
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Reviewed By: ICL On: July 05, 2005 15:19 PDT
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Great chapter. I found myself feeling sorry for Inuyasha again, his situation is pathetic after all. But I think I'm begining to understand what this story will be about. I'm glad because I do know critics of this story acuse Inuyasha of being out of character. Reasons behind this OOC behavior behavior are becoming clearer to me at least. And I always suspected what the reason for his actions were. Anyway, I miss Sango :( And Kohaku too. I always thought he should have ended up with Rin and now look she's, obsessed with Inuyasha.... Will Midoriko show up as well?
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Title: Sixteen (poison flame) Candles...
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 11:29 PDT
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Eh... If Naraku's been defeated for five years, then is it ten years earlier or five? ~~~ I adore the canine interplay between Kouga and Inuyasha; the lesser male has an instinct to submit, but fights it because of the reason in his mind. They're doggy but not too doggy. I also like the Kouga response in general. This is Kouga the responsible leader, Kouga the good man. He'd loved Kagome, who'd chosen an abuser. ~~~ You've got grammatical problems, run-on sentences and the like. It's nothing that gets in the way of the story. ~~~ Ah, Sesshoumaru has been transformed as well.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: July 05, 2005 10:19 PDT
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Wow! Tenseiga only put a bandage on the gaping wound on InuYasha's life...only a temporary fix. I'm not going to speculate about anything. You're beginning to reveal things and I'm enjoying every word. *snort* Ecchi Houshi!
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Title: ch. 16
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 05:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I read the last paragraph of this chapter, I was shocked by how much emotion was invoked in me, even with all of my thoughts on Inuyasha at the moment. It makes be wonder what Kagome will do, if there is a way to help him. this is just the best story in the fandom right now.
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Title: I want some more
Reviewed By: kendraless(NLI) On: July 05, 2005 04:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is there to it was good as always cant wait for the next chapter.*sigh^
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Reviewed By: Dopy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 22:43 PDT
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This story has made me feel from one intense feeling to the other. It has such an original story to it and has even made me dislike characters that i thought to be real sweet. You MUST keep adding to this story, its been by far the best fanfic of inuyasha I have read. (It's the only one that has made me cry then leave me shocked back to back haha). But yea...please update soon! p.s- I was confused in a part, in chapter 12 right at the end "She had lied and so had Miroku". What did Miroku lie about? It made me think that the baby was mirokus but then that just made no sense to me lol.
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Title: Anti-waff
Reviewed By: Amie On: July 02, 2005 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And that's not a bad thing. This story is so dark, so painful...my God, how will this ever resolve itself? Lois McMaster Bujold said the secret to good writing is to do the worst possible thing you can think of to your characters and then see what happens. Well, you're following that advice in spades! This taut fic is gripping; I've read very few plots that take sunshiney Kagome so far down the path of despair. Your writing is excellent! I can't wait for updates. Merci!
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:08 PDT
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Wow, great chapter. I was so surprised that Inu tried to apologize to her. Love the reaction. So the truth is out about Rin, I wondered what got her panties in a knot. I can't wait to see what happens. Is Kouga going to find out about her being back? How in the world are you going to get those two together? I swear they would light each other on fire if given the chance. Oh well, it will just make it that much better when they do get together. Thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel( nsi) On: June 28, 2005 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
e_e oh wow.. that was painful.. ::squirms:: i hope this all works out.. somehow. ^^; i trust you. e_e but i just wish the next chapter would come sooner- for some reason.. even though that wasn't particularly a cliff-hanger, it left me with a lot of angst to see what happens next. o_o i hope you update soon! and excellent, excellent work on this story. e_e
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 21:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
same as always, this is consistently pulling my emotions out of me...I love that the most about this story...and I am proable going to be wondering how she will forgive him for a long time...I wonder I guess...I just wonder
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 27, 2005 18:20 PDT
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So intense. I so enjoyed it! Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god, i can't even imagine how angry kag was after inu apologized. i feel so bad for her...but i trust in you that we'll have a happily ever after. i 'm not sure how you'll do it, but i can't wait to find out. when you have time, please write a new chap. i wonder what will happen when they get to the well? will it work? what will they do if it doesn't. geez, poor kagome!
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