| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in 'cause I'm in school) On: April 10, 2006 09:00 EDT
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...WOW. That was awesome. I can't wait for the ending. So...are Kagome and Hiei gonna live together in the Makai whatever or is Kagome gonna go back to the future and meet up with him? Just a thought. Okay, I have to go the bell's gonna ring. Bye!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 08:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELENT!! Please update more?? I Realy Wanna Read The Rest. PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!
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Reviewed By: T.F On: April 10, 2006 04:47 EDT
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i love this story. it rocks. update soon
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Reviewed By: Shi-no-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! you updated! Awesome chapter, as always ryu-sama..i cant wait to read more, you better update as fast as you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: teej On: April 09, 2006 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. this chapter makes me think, like, 'wtf? how is this story supposed to end?' because we all know that something happened between hiei and kagome from the prologue, but WHAT? argh. I LOVE IT.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 09, 2006 21:39 EDT
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OMG NOOOO! you stopped right before the war will happen...maybe not a war, but you know what i mean! its been building, and building, and now its here, and now i get a cliffie! grr..oh well, im sure the wait will be worth it. very very good chapter. absolutely beautiful. i really like the character The Seer. even though shes a b*tch, and doesnt help them to her full extent, i was kinda sad about her death because she only did what she had to to unlock his powers. but Hiei is ruthless(mostly) and thats what we love about him, so its all good. i cant wait for the next chapter. i cant wait to see how he got to be sitting with kurama telling him about it instead of comming through with kagome. i cant wait to see how everyone (kags family and the SD) will react to kags being pregnant. kougas so sweet too. i love the way you portrayed him in this story. its so him. most authors try to make him out to be a jerk, which he is, but i think its just because hes so egotistical. ill shut up now. good job, please try to keep updating like you have been lately. i love it when i come home and have a email saying you updated!
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Title: Avid reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams* How could just stop there?! He could have at least reached Kagome! *sobs* You are so mean... T^T I loved this chapter! *cheers* With the tenseness and the building of the anticipation!! *shifts impatiently* I hope the fight is next chapter. The Seer is dead *throws confetti* but now it's Ryuji and Masakazu's turns. >_> You should make it slow and painful. ...Bastards... But what are you going to do about the wolves? Is Kagome going to explain wha happened, or are they going to be hard-headed bastards and not give them the time to explain what happened to Koga? Oh! You can always have them start fighting and then Koga comes and helps Kagome (after an almost-deadly-blow) and the wolves get confused and more jealous and... leave? That's very non-violent. ...And very anti-climatic. I vote for Hiei doing away with them too. Either way this goes, I just like to say that you have written a great story. I haven't seen many fanfics where readers are moved to feel such compassion for the main characters as they are for this onw (though with all the shit you put them through, you'd have to be more than cold-hearted to not feel sorry for them). You are SO going on my recommended list. ^o^ Again, I loved this chapter - this story is wonderful. I hope you update soon. But PLEASE don't end the next chapter with a cliffhanger. --I wonder if your story has been nominated. If not, I will do so now. *nods*-- ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:53 EDT
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Great chapter. Hiei is pissed i almost feel sorry for any creature stupid enough to get in his way. please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: April 09, 2006 18:12 EDT
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Aw man, dat was short, but i don't blame u, the whole story maked up for it...lol...keep it up!woo!
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix(did not sign in) On: April 09, 2006 17:53 EDT
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cool i liked this. please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 09, 2006 17:32 EDT
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Wonder how the SD group not to mention Koenma will react when they find out that Hiei is a father. Will Hiei find out in the present time or will someone, like the seer tell him? How will he take the news? WIll he keep his word to Kagome? One thing for sure, the unborn baby can protect his mother from harm. Wonder what Koenma/Enma will rect to the baby. Please update asap. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 06:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was written extremly well. Please write more? PLEASE???
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kage Zenboto (Kage Youkai on ff.net) On: April 03, 2006 19:29 EDT
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Hiya Ryukotsusei! Update soon please? I like the complicated and depressing plot!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 00:38 EST
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OMFG u can't end that there! It's no fair. Ok, so id like to start off with this: I've been following this story very closely and i would like to award you with the best Hiei /Kagome fanfic i have ever read. i admire your descriptiveness, and attention to detail. i would like to ask you though, where do you come up with your lemons/rape scenes? They are masterpieces. Where do you get your inspiration? This fic is seriously so amazing, that i wish i could publish it so i can force all my friends to read it. i am trying to write a fanfic myself, but after reading what has been posted thus far by such great an author, i only hope that mine becomes a fration as good as your work is. The plotline is well thought out, and i congradulate you on that. After i read each chapter, my head explodes with questions. i seriously cant wait to find out the fate of our beloved miko and apparation. How do they defeat Masakazu? Do they meet up in the future? How will the Seer influence all the events to come? What will happen with the approaching ookami tribe? How does Kagome become sane again after being freed? Will she go insane from Masakazu's tormenting? Will she go insane from being separated from Hiei? How does she cope with the real world? Do Kagome and Hiei ever get to officially mate? Does Kagome actually give birth to Hiei's child? Or does something happen to cause a miscarriage, or an unexpected death of her child? If the child is killed, is that what would infuriate Hiei enough to massacre everyone who has held them captive, and reward them with freedom? How was it that the spell cast on Kagome by the seer is no longer in affect? How will Masakazu act now that Kagome has possession of the power of the sceptre? Will he kill her? How does Kagome get back into her own time? Will she disappear the second Masakazu is defeated, or will she have to use her own power to transport her? Will Hiei be able to follow in any way? Will they meet up at all!? Is Kouga still within Kagome's mind? I WANNA KNOW!!! Know that i actually contemplate about this when i am bored outta my mind in my classes. This fic is so good, that i actually question it that much. i anxiously await your next post. Keep up the amazing work. ~Ryu Sama
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