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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: JessieKin On: October 02, 2014 07:24 EDT
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I've waited years for an update on this lol I really hope you
didn't abandon this website and acc because I LOVE everything that
you write and I want to continue reading all of your work.
Especially this one gah you had me hooked on the first chapter and
I've faithfully waited for the rest and now I'm stuck, I can't even
finish this now because it seem as if you haven't logged into your
acc in ages !! I want to cry lol but please please please if you
ever do log in again please update this!
| Reviewed By: Kigarii-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2013 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-Cries out- NUUUUHHH....... ; n ; Updatez Updatez... I will litteraly cry if you dont ._. | Reviewed By: Lover's Betrayal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2011 14:53 EDT
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lets see....kagome is traumatized, back in her own time, with child, thinks her family tried to kill her, is on the run, hiei is in heat again, isolated.....knows kagome should reappear on the night of the red moon, but not which one... Did i miss anything? no? Then just one very minor question: WHY'D YOU END THE CHAPTER THERE AT SUCH A SUSPENSEFULL SPOT?! WHYYYYY??? Done. please update as soon as you can, and when the mood hits. i'd hate to see this fic abandoned. | Title: Please Update! I love it!
Reviewed By: CELESTE5 On: March 03, 2011 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything about this fanfic is original and i love this pairing. Please update, I've waited for so long! | Reviewed By: JessiesHADOWBANE On: April 10, 2010 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why'd you end the chapter there???!?!?! Please update ASAP!
| Title: How horribly terrible!!>>...
Reviewed By: Rubiksmycube On: August 21, 2009 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAH! you update your other story and leave us hanging with tears of sorrow and exitement in our eyes!!!!!!!! Please oh great and mighty author!!! I beg of you!@! The next chapter for us poooorrr and eager souls that have been waiting patiently for months to see how Hiei takes care of yoko for being an ass!! Please! Refrain from your cruel ways and update so that our hearts will be free of anguish! by the way, i love the way you show the change in Hiei. Not many authors can seperate the sap they make him become with his true nature and blend it together so nicley. I love his hardened personality change. Very shmexy. Can't wait to see how Kagome reacts...and everyone else when they see her wanting to hang off of him like a distrout little girly girl frightened with big ol' owl eyes wantin' some lovin'. i ALSO can't help but notice how you developed kagome's characters so well. I hate it when you see her turn into a macho baddass in three seconds thats ready to kill and tear with her newly recuired demon powers that she pulled out of her butt.I like to see her dependent in a way. It's kinda cute and lovly and gushe! Females gatta have a big ol' protective man to protect them from the bad guys and to cuddle them. Leave the macho 'i don't give a shit' girl personality to that wanna be feminist from twilight. Not that its bad. Just like what your doing and was never a fan of the other. So perrty please with apple dumplings and keeesh on top. Update? Thebookwerm@yahoo.com Rubiksmycube
| Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is absolutely amazing!! now i'm wondering why i put off checking this story out and reading it for such a long time. it is really angsty and i don't really read stories with rape in it but this was just too good to just stop reading and i know that it was the rape was essential to build up and everything. i love everything about this story! i really wonder what's gonna happen soon with hiei and kagome's reunion and the entire thing with youko thinking hiei's attachment to her is basically a waste xD aww man why did u leave off at such a good part into the story >.<
throughout the entire time reading this i kept hoping hiei and kagome would escape soon and kept wondering what would happen once they reunite. and i also love how u tied the blood red moon as an important time and everything... if that made any sense XD grr that didn't even come out the way i wanted to explain. i suck at explainin stuff... though it's obvious i am. it made much more sense in my head x] well u did a really really great job on this and i hope u update soon
| Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Thanks for the update. Hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Rochelle On: April 20, 2009 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until the next chapter...the suspense is killing me. I hope that Youko straightens out and won't have any more murderous thoughts toward Kagome. Although the fact remains that it would take a miracle to keep Youko from dislike the girl and wanting to kill her. Kagome has enough troubles as it is without adding murderous Reikai Tantei to the mix.
| Reviewed By: anon101 On: March 18, 2009 19:23 EDT
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LOL she will never finish it. I loved all her stories but theres not one she completed. Well, just oneshots :P Its too bad because she was one of the best authors around in this fandom. But life is a bitch. She prolly married and is busy with life. We cant blame her for that. Anyway, I wish the best for her :D
| Reviewed By: JaneyJane On: January 19, 2009 18:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely addicting. When I found it two days ago, I somehow managed to tear myself away from it sometime around 7 in the morning. T_T Why, oh why, must you leave this story as is, right when Hiei and Kagome are about to reunite? Please update, its driving me insane not knowing how this will turn out. To give you an example of just how bad it's gotten, I've went to sleep, DREAMING of this damn story. To make matters worse, the period between your last 2 updates was what, 2 years? I don't want to wait another 2 years to find what happens, because chances are, I'll forget about it, and this has been one of the most catching stories I've ever read. Now, at this point, I realize this may seem like blatant ass kissing for updates, and in part, I can't really deny that. ^_^ But I won't leave without critiquing some parts at least. I know this story is a collaborated effort between you and cytinell(i think that's how it was spelled...sorry if I'm mistaken). Since it's by the combined effort of 2 authors instead of one, I can understand the slight differences in writing style. After all, everyone has their unique way of writing. What I wish I didn't see is the overlapping of some parts, how, in one chapter, something is explained in a specific way, and in the next, the same thing is brought up and explained yet again, but this time in a slightly different manner. (ex. Kagome's "mark" of ownership, the clit ring that Hiei removed) It's not a big deal, but reading something like that shows the difference in writing between 2 authors, and the story doesn't seem to mesh together quite as well. Another thing...I hesitate to bring this up, since this might just be my opinion and therefore not really a distanced critique, but I struggle to try and focus on a chapter when the entire thing is just pure, raw angst and emotion between Hiei and Kagome. I understand that in and of itself, this story is and has been stated to be completely dark and angst-ridden, but I feel like I'm watching 2 not-so-smart adolescents fumble through puberty and a roller coaster of contradictory and repeating emotions when I read an entire chapter dedicated to the inner convoluted workings of both Hiei and Kagome's minds. Now, I understand the dire situation they're in, the unbelievable hardship they must hold strong against, and the heartwarming burgeoning love that makes them cling together. (Hey, I'm a sucker for all those things, and they're what makes a story great in my opinion. ^_^) But to see a chapter that goes something along the lines of: Hiei looks away in shame, hating himself. Kagome turns away as well, tears threatening to pour down her face as she assumes that Hiei must have turned away because he's just so repulsed by her that he can't even stand the sight of her. Hiei notices her unshed tears, and does nothing except hate himself more. Kagome can't bear watching his disgust anymore, throws herself at him... I hope you get what I'm trying to pass on here. Reading a passage like this makes me want to gouge out my eyes and curl into a ball of embarrassment that this was how I acted over petty things not so long ago. I'm pretty damn sure I exaggerated a good bit too, so please don't take offense. ^_^ After all, why would I have spent all this time and effort writing out such a long review if I don't like your story? I do, very much so, and I hardly EVER go through the trouble of writing reviews. ^_^ Please add to this story again soon. I'll be keeping tabs on this one.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 13:15 EST
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| Reviewed By: kawaiikitsunes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I told you I would give you a review when I finished reading the story, but I decided to at least look at the others you have written. And I've got to say the ones I've seen are really creative. None of them take the same plot that other people like to use and the twists and turns speak awesome volumes of your creative imagination. I hope you never stop using your brain in such a great way! Sorry but I've got a favor to ask. I am looking for some stories, because I wish to reread them. Unfortunatly I can't remember their titles. And I figured you read a varing amount of fanfics so I was hoping that you could help me. I tried to write down an overview of the plot as much as I could, but it's still very vague. Sorry. 1.Kurama is given the mission to help Kagome reform the jewel at the beginning of her quest and ends up saving her during the fight with Yura. I'm not entirely sure if this is a Kurama and Kagome fic or not. 2.Kagome approaches Miroku to teach her how to be sexy and how to please a man. Along the way they end up falling in love. Ah, the pervertedness of Miroku and Kagome pairings. 3.This story starts out with Kagome being pregnant. She leaves for Yusuke's, her cousin, house so Inuyasha can't track her. She ends up having triplets who are Hieis children. The story then turns into a trilogy, but I'm not certain if the third has been finished. Yes, this is a Hiei and Kagome pairing. 4.The thing I remember the most about this story is in the middle, nearer to the end. Koenma has been captured by the enemy and tortured while an imposter takes his place and does mean things, not certain what kind of mean things, to the detectives. When Koenma is rescued, the tantei and allies being getting ready to get rid of their enemy. I'm pretty certain this is a Hiei and Kagome fic. 5.Kagome has known the detectives for a while (she knew them and about their powers and heritage), but they didn't know she was a miko. Koenma gets the detectives contracts taken from him, by his mother, Ameterasu, and she sends the detective, Kagome, and Inuyasha on a new mission to fight a horrible female kitsune named Tamamo-no-Mae. This I am pretty sure is a Hiei and Kagome story. If you can't help me with this, you suck! >-< JK S'kay.
| Reviewed By: Drache_Silver On: September 23, 2008 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating this story. I am addicted to this plot, and wait eagerly every time for the next chapter to come out.
| Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: September 18, 2008 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy mother F@%$ing S#!t You updated! O_O; Do you have any idea how many times i've checked thisstory since you stopped updating... YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!! Wonderful ch, but you HAVE to update in the near future or i will just die. I had just about given up hope on this story and now that faith is restored, please don't take it away. I can't wait to see hiei and kags reaction ... and will hiei and kur go at it cause of blood and kur thinking hiei hurt her... hmmmm. Can't wait to see. UPDATE SOON PLEASE... ^_~
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