| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
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Reviewed By: kccranfield On: September 22, 2005 15:59 EDT
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Just want to say that I love your story. I am one of the people that twiddles my thumbs waiting for each new chapter. Please keep up the good work and don't let others negativity influence your writing.
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: September 21, 2005 22:01 EDT
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that was a very interestibg chapter, atleast hiei isn't suffering anymore... i think...?
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Reviewed By: MidnightRain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the last few chapters, they are awesome. Things are getting more and more interesting with each chapter and I can't to read more. You do a really great job with the plot and the characters. Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 18:23 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Soleius On: September 21, 2005 03:34 EDT
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I've tried to read this more than once, thinking maybe it was just a bad day or some other reason was preventing me from getting into it. But after repeated attempts, I realize that I was wrong. The blatant use of shock-factor violence over and over manage to detract from the story so much that it comes off as flat and contrived. I feel that you could have accomplished the "vision" I imagine you had for this as a darker piece without the unnecessary repetition of what you perceive to be gory and violent. Yes, rape can be dark, but you're not succeeding in portraying it appropriately. You're lessening the impact by revisiting the same scenes with slight variations. This isn't creativity or originality. This is coming across as a very young and very naive person attempting to be creative and original, deep and dark by slapping together every "horrible" or "atrocious" thing they can think of. You need to learn how to guide your audience to draw the picture for themselves. This way is not interesting. A single, stark description of violence in a scene intrinsically affects the reader far more than an overload of forced descriptions. A smell, a sensation, a sight... one thing. And THAT will haunt the reader.
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 21, 2005 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I absolutely loved it, especially since not many people think of Hiei as the masturbating type. This chapter was amazing, I'm so happy that Hiei and Kagome kissed! Oh, I practically died when I saw that! Please update soon. -rei
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Sithathoryunet On: September 19, 2005 08:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always :) Can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 18, 2005 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get a ten, as always. What an interesting turn. I didn't see this comming at all. I can't wait to see how it turns out. Please update soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 18, 2005 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wonderful, simply splendid! I'm so happy to see that you updated again. Keep up the great work! -rei
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Reviewed By: dangerangel On: September 18, 2005 18:43 EDT
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very, very good.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 17:18 EDT
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Wooo! keep it up!
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Title: up through C H14
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 20:09 EDT
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are you going to bring in any other characters? Shippo, Sesshoumaru, or Inuyasha? Even if they don't have a place at this stage of the story, will they appear in the "future" when the story began? (maybe not inuyasha). . . I was so sad about what happened to Kouga! I hope his mate kicks some ass! Keep up the good work!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Terra_MB On: September 15, 2005 22:38 EDT
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I can't wait for the next chapter! *^_^* I wonder what's going to happen next. Hiei is going to have a tough time ahead of him. _
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Reviewed By: yamiko reidman aka hentai zero On: September 15, 2005 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all i can really say. THis story is so charged with emotion that i couldn't hold back the tears several times. THis is definately right up there in my fanfiction hall of fame. Keep up the good work. Update soon please! Seriously i'm desperate it's like almost 2 in themorning and i couldn't stop till i read the last chapter posted. Once again, WOW!
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Title: Distraught..yet great.
Reviewed By: Kc On: September 14, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is wonderful..you are a great author. Please don't take this the wrong way..but ur imagination..is just sickening. I suppose that is what it takes to become a great author and that is what you are.
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