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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 31, 2005 01:06 EST
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Wow, poor Kagome. Please update real soon. Woner how they will get out of there?
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:32 EST
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Sorry about earlier, had some emotional problems. I really have to agree with Shadopo on all of her thoughts. I'm very curious, does Hiei hate the human race because of Kagome's misfortune in his mind? I mean, it could happen if he had the Jagan eye implanted and made him a little insane and thought he had a chance to rule and dominate the Human World. I know I would with such power. That also brings the other thing I've been wondering about, what happens when Kagome and Hiei are alone behind thoughs bars of the cage? Do they talk to each other or even comfort each other? Do they plan of their escape? And what of that dragon demon? Is he going to help out? So many questions yet little answers. I'm getting tired, so I'll see ya later... Ja! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:07 EST
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O.O *just read her own review* I now believe I have an alter-ego who surfaced without me knowing... O.O *is scared* I think you had better lock that Bastard up tight until the fic is over... my alter-ego might just find a way to carry out those threats... O.O
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:05 EST
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THe word limit has now been added to my hit list, along with the Bastard, Ryuji, and other various people. Yes... *cackled evily* Anyways, very intense chapter, you can probably gadge how intense it was by my inability to focus on anything other than killing that Bastard. Once again, I am in awe of your writing skills... and ready to murder, maim, or otherwise lethally injure that Bastard. eh... I used up all my time thinking of a way too kill him... heh, 'till next time! ^-^ *think murderous thoughts about that Bastard*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:01 EST
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Now I'm all for Youko coming in and tearing them apart for being such bastards. The lemon sequence... you should have labeled it 'Here begins Kagome's torture, the rape upon an altar' or something... that wasn't a lemon. I'm riled up now and want to hunt down that bastard and RIP OUT HIS THROAT. No... that would be to quick... Hm, let's see, I'd borrow Kurama's powers, or just use my authoress abilities, and string him up in vines, tight, butt-naked. Then, I'd have the vines slowly tighten, and not stop, slowly pulling him apart, and then I'd let Hiei in the same room, with a rusty dagger as his only weapon, unwarded though. Then I'd catch it all on tape. *nods* Now, I just need to convince Kurama to help me, get a rusty dagger, find Hiei, no need to convince him, and rent a room. I'd also give Hiei a whip... but that's more for Ryuji than that Bastard. Kagome's revenge... Same scenario, same rusty dagger, only imagine him being slowly purified. *evil grin* A family member walked in as I was writing that... they left quickly when I threatened to tear out their throat... I only just realized I did threaten them. Heh, I think, you have an amazing knack for creating villains who piss me off to no end. Maybe... I'll think up a new way to kill him each day. Yes, that's what I'll do. *nods firmly, than settles down in wait for your story to end so she can murder the sick bastard anyway she wants* It doesn't matter if he dies... I'll revive him. then kill him, then revive him, then | Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 23:51 EST
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*Eyes glowing red* Bastard... *growl* Holly: *sweatdrop* Sorry about her, she isn't ready to talk yet. Kinda pissed off but she'll get over it... eventually. Anyway, I'm taking charge for awhile since she is depressed/ticked off at the moment. She thinks Hiei better kill all the evil bastards before she does it herself. Poor human girl *bonk* OW! Okay, jeez... Poor Kagome, how much are you going to skip since it's going to be six months while she's in Makai? It would be make sense to skip some of it. Please update soon! *Whispers* For all of our sakes... *BONK, BOOM, CRASH* cpg: WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT YOUR ATTITUDE?!?!? *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 23:51 EST
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Shabopo makes some very good points... the manga are darker than we think at first glance. I have to agree with everything she says, and be jealous she thought of it first. Heh, but if Hiei gained his hate of humans from seeing the almost exile to the makai the Kagome had to endure, surely they talked, if they were imprisoned together. Or did they just sit in silence and brood, wondering when that bastard would come and hurt them again? Perhaps, did they become more, behind those bars. But surely, Hiei somehow learned of her time traveling adventures, and if he was in the modern era, perhaps he had different motives for being there? Perhaps... I won't indulge in a discussion about the manga, but I believe Shabopo made a very good point. And raised a question, as I somehow think that there had to be time when they were both lying awake and dreading the next day, hating their lives... times when they had to break the silence, just to think about something other than the horrible turn their lived took. How did Hiei get to be with these people anyways? Are they the bandits who discovered him after he was dropped off of the Koorime domain? Or perhaps they captured him somehow, and suppresed his power before he could kill them. I also take it this was before he got the jagan implanted, thus he would still have his mother's teargem. Now that I'm thinking about it... I've gotta thank Shabopo. Heh, I shall wait and see what happens, and how you deal with it. Beat you, word limit! ^-^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 23:39 EST
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Fate never does give Kagome a break, now does it? Ah well, I'm curious to see how you have Hiei murder them. Though I'm thinking you should let Hiei have all the joy in killing them, Youko shouldn't take away his personal vengeance. I have to admit, I have a vague idea of how he marked her... but truthfully, I'm not to sure. Nor am I too curious to find out, even though I believe it will come into some imminence later in the story... I think. Perhaps not. What exactly stops others from touching her once she's been marked? Or is this going to be explained? Hm, you say this is flashbacks and such... I have the oddest picture in my head of a collage with photos taken from the story, and surrounded by spilled blood. Really creepy, but you'd have to see into my mind too fully see it. As of now, the pictures are indistinct, as I haven't read the whole fic yet. brr... creepy image. Eh, surprisingly enough, that's all I have too say. 'till next time then! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 29, 2005 21:53 EST
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OMG I hate Masakazu i think that Hiei should just kill him and save Kag because she doesn't deserve this kind of treatment so yeah well anyways great chapter hope you update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:51 EST
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I can't stop now! I already started reading it! I don't care how bad it gets I can't stop now! Hiei will save her! And then they will KILL that bastard! He made the wrong choice and now he has to suffer for it! She WILL get through this!
| Title: ...my review continued
Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:08 EST
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Sure, Midoriko warned her a little, but- were it not for her, we can assume Kagome wouldn't be in this wretched situation. That little fact will surely fester in her mind at some point. She did so much to try to deal/help with the Shikon no Tama, and Midoriko's soul, only to be rewarded by being dropped essentially into the laps of a bunch of rapists? I could even see Hiei gaining his hatred of humans over this, if he knew/she told him what her situation was- someone so innocent giving her all only to be betrayed by the one she helped, who was supposed to be an incredibly pure, good miko. Subconsciously, he might have wanted to destroy the world of humans, since they were part of why she was hurt so much. He'd care about someone who tried to aid him with no ulterior motive, especially if he were very young... And I think we all know how protective he gets over people he considers to be his responsibility, or whatnot. I mean, he got the Jagan, knowing it could drive him insane, just to find his sister, someone he didn't even know. I wonder... when he finds her, would he take her to wherever he has a secure home/place in Makai? I don't really see him letting any of the Reikai Tentai knowing about the situation, and the nature of his past. It would make sense then that he try to hide her in a place where he could kill threats without fear or reprisal... and in a place where Koenma'd not find him easily.
| Title: ...my review continued
Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anyway, so following on the theory that the manga of IY is rather darker than at first glance. I turned to YYH; It wasn't so serious, content-wise, but... If Hiei was raised by bandits- and they had the power to subdue him- sexual abuse would have almost definitely taken place. I think one of the reasons I like these two series in that they don't soften things up, if you know what I mean. Hn. Rape is mostly about control, after all, and clearly Masakazu feels threatened by Hiei on some level, or he wouldn't feel the need to assert his dominance so strongly. Well, at least I'm hoping so... as the alternative would be that Masakazu is just a twisted sadist with no reasons behind his evilness. I have to wonder, a little off-topic... If Kagome, a human, tried to save him- where did he get his all-consuming hatred for humans? He was somewhat on a destroy-the-world bent when we first met him, after all. On the other hand... his memories are fragmented. And there's still that Blood Moon that is clearly tied to everything. If he remembers his childhood then, it can be assumed that something of major impact on his life occurred in a similar eclipse. Power accumulates then, or so you've said in your story, so perhaps he or she managed to draw on it and broke free? You know, I'm thinking Kagome at some point is going to feel incredibly betrayed by Midoriko, who clearly took her there knowing what would happen.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I skipped a tid bit, for obvious reasons... I was incredibly impressed by the chapter. I was wondering how that 'masakazu' [sp?] tied in with the prophecy, aside from the rather obvious comment about her innocence... The story is compelling in the pain you feel for the characters- but at the same time, you know they're not going down without a fight. I'm not sure how she'll end up in the future- obviously using the well that one last time- but I'm thinking that she'll be mostly incoherent/catatonic at that point in time. Perhaps she would confide in Hiei previous to that point, and he'd help her there? Anyway... but it sounds to me like Hiei will be helping her in the modern era to recover... since he said he'd find her, in ch.2 I think?, that does imply he knows she would be around then- and in need of assistance. When he finds her... I'm almost afraid that Koenma will find him and accuse him of commiting the atrocities perpetrated on her. That'd be an emotionally constricting scene, for certain! I was going over my copies of IY manga and noticed how 'adult' they really were- I can't believe I missed some of the connotations of somethings Shippou, IY, and Miroku said...! It brought me to the conclusion that The manga doesn't go into things like rape, and whatnot- but it's clear that the characters are supposedly exposed to a great deal more than we, the reader, see. As such, a fic like this really does work. Incredible chapter. Emotionally riveting.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:18 EST
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The story is really well written which makes me doubly glad you're glossing over the horrid details.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:00 EST
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Great minds think alike. I was just the other day postulating to myself about what "raised by bandits" might actually entail. You went way darker than me, though.
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