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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 ] | Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 28, 2005 14:51 EST
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Thats sad poor Shippo thats so sad for him and everyone elas well i love it update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
| Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:53 EST
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I really like the story...nice plot & character development...I can't wait to see what happens next!!! [=
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 23:06 EST
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I hope your right. I can take on a rape scenes but if it's really bloody, I'll probably skip it and go onto the other stuff in the chapter and I can handle really dark stuff, hope it isn't too depressing for me. And I promise not to flame you!:-D Anyway, when are you going to update 'Will You Be Mine'? I know I'm asking a lot but I'm curious on how your going to finish your other stories, especially with this new one. It must be hard to be you... *gives you a cookie* I envy you! *salutes you* Ja ne until next review from me! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: March 27, 2005 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, a chapter leaving us all breathless for more. I am always impressed by how well you write. I'm rather curious about the whole moon thing, and where/how Hiei comes in and interacts with Kagome... I guess I'll just wait and see, ne?
| Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i just saw that you started a new fic... ...and it is great! hope you update soon, ;) !
| Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 27, 2005 21:22 EST
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Hey this is a great chapter i love the battle well anyways update it really soon ok thanks tootes. ~Ris~
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:25 EST
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*borrows Ryu's idea of feeding character limit to Hiei's dragon* Eh, you'd think it is immortal or something at this rate. Anyways, I was wondering if perhpas somethign would go horribly wrong and have everybody in Kagome's group in a dire situation, then Hiei comes, inexplicably kills Naraku, and lah. Then I realized you've already done this, and now I'm wondering.... How are you going to introduce them? This is going to be eating away at me for a while. At least, until you tell us how they meet. Let's see... I think Kagome has to go through hell first, though that may not be the case as you had Hiei in the first chapter thinking about her, and he said she was 'pure'. Then again, I only know he said something to that effect. So, anyways, perhaps he met her before she was driven through hell and back... or perhaps, he was the one who made her go through it. Much to ponder, much to ponder. 'Tis a real puzzle here! ^-^ I can't wait-actually, I can, but that's only because I have to-to read more. Ah well, 'till next time then! In the meantime, I'm hoping I'll be able to update before Saturday for once.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:18 EST
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^-^ I can't wait to read more of this either. Though I'm curious, how do you do it? You're like the super-writer everyone wants to be like, you are right now, succesfully juggling 2 or 3 stories, and updating constantly. My theories are that you are either a really fast typer, or you happen to be able to type in your sleep. Or you could be some sort of alien that doesn't need food, sustenance, or anything else, thus enabling you too write 24/7. Or I may just be delusional from lack of sleep. Truthfully, the last one is the likeliest. Portraying Hiei correctly... that does sound difficult, bordering on the impossible. But I'm sure you'll be able to do it, somehow! ^-^ I'll like whatever you come up with, as long as it isn't horribly OOC and there are no dancing gnomes. Or those overly cute animals that are able to melt even the toughest of defenses with a single glance. I just realized... I don't think you've really mentioned Yukina at all in your fics. Then again, the whole brother/sister relationship, turning Hiei mushy and melting his defenses is somewhat overdone. Or I'm hallucinating the whole thing... come to think of it, I can't really recall a fic where that happened... eh. Okay, this chapter was... I lost the word. I liked this chapter, or r- Ah! Now I remember what it was I was going to say. I like how you're portraying Kagura! It seems right somehow. I dunno... Hm, so they've killed Naraku, and now what? I was half-suspecting that perhaps something would go horribil | Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 26, 2005 15:35 EST
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Please update real soon. Very interesting start.
| Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 26, 2005 00:32 EST
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OMG this is a really great story so far i love it you ahve got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 20:33 EST
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*glomps Ryu* New fic! New fic! New fic! New fic! Yeah! ^-^ Even with it's somewhat dark and depressing theme, I still am so overly excited it's not funny! Or maybe it is but not too me. So far, I have to say, I love the character portrayal! Kurama, and Hiei, seem very realistic to me. I'm curious as to where this is going to go... Hm, I shall update my story soon. Really soon. Yet I feel slightly guilty now... Er, yes. I want to see where this goes! ^-^ 'till next time!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a great beginning to your story! I like how you did Hiei by not telling Kurama his guts out to him. It makes him more mysterious to him and behind his actions. Koenma doesn't seem too suspicous of Hiei? Now that's not like him to give up searching for him. Anyway, I like how this is going. Hiei seems to be upset about something and if my senses are correct, he did something wrong and bad. I also wonder how that weapon is connected to Hiei... but if I know you, your not going to say anything to spoil the plot. Please update soon! The suspense is killing me! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 16:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incroyable! I rather like how Hiei is portrayed; you give him, and the other characters, so much depth! They feel like people; something few seem to achieve in this genre. I wonder at Koenma's reaction to Hiei's absence... surely the paranoid demigod would be somewhat suspicious? On the other hand... he does know that Hiei would not risk putting Yukina in jeopardy by betraying the RT. Were he to do so, he'd be banned from Ningenkai or arrested, ne? Anyway... keep up the marvelous work!
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! One question though.... is it a Hiei/Kagome pairing? Well tell next time^_^ bye!!
| Reviewed By: kawaiigirlanime(not loged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story hope you can update soon very original
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