| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: kittenclaws [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me again love it when will you put up the next chappie oh and thanks for two in one night totaly awesome can't wait this is one of my fav stories
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 15:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwww poor poor armer Inuyasha, what a bad day hes having just to be humiliated by sango miroku and shippo!!!! ouch!!! well hmm jeee I wonder what the next chapie will hold?? hmmm Cant wait so PLEASSE UPDATE PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: No Prob
Reviewed By: InuSaga (NSI) On: December 05, 2005 11:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't sweat it. Let's just say, I understand what it feels like to get eager to post. I'm just glad you updated. There's a lot of people out here who are eagerly awating new chapters of this story. Don't delay anything on account of me.
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Reviewed By: Lynns Again On: December 05, 2005 11:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah! Another chapter up again! *squeals with delight* It was another marvelous chapter! I enjoyed it very very very much!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: December 05, 2005 10:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
roflmao! they just cant get any private time can they? poor inu and kag. sessy needs a good smack for all his goading, yes he does, but i'm not sure if anyone has balls enough to do it *volunteers* i'll do it for 'em. lmao! im still laughing from the ending. i just cant get that picture out of head. i can't wait for the next chapter(s) and the lemon! Looking forward to that. I think Kags needs to yell as Sesshy some more too....she kind of got cut short by certain events. Keep up the wonderful work, I'm loving this stuff!
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Title: ch.12
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 09:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.12 was very good and the angst is very well placed. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe!
Reviewed By: Inu hanyous 4 ever On: December 05, 2005 08:12 EST
Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOL THAT WAS AWSOME I'm still laughing, I just loved it please continue asap, I must read more lolololololol!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Inu hanyous 4 ever On: December 05, 2005 07:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME CHAPTER lol Sesshy still has the book LOL thats gonna be an awsome conflict motave I loved how you made Shippou do that whole evil Kinsue smile that was pricelsee LOLOL
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 05:48 EST
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**lips twitch** ...uhh....BWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!! Poor, poor Inuyasha, just had the day from hell. And, of course, the question is going to be which is worse? Kagome and Inu nearly getting caught by Souta and Grandpa, or actually *getting* caught by Miroku and Sango? LOL I don't know who'd tease poor Kagome more, Miroku or Souta. heh. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: kitesareevil On: December 05, 2005 02:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would blame you for me reading this fic, but as it stands I'll blame Angelica Pierce since she is the root of all evil in my fandom life. I spent 30-45 mins reading this when I should have been finishing a 10 page paper. That said, I'll blame her later. Well done, rather looking forward to the next chapter. This one was quite enjoyable though! If for no other reason that Inuyasha just whoopin' ass.
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Reviewed By: This is Lynns On: December 05, 2005 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps hands* marvelous darling, marvelous! This is Lynns by the way and I'm just to lazy to log in since I'm in a lot of pain right now. Anyways great story, awsome as ever and this sure made my day after slipping on the ice, bruising my shin and thne hobbling up the stairs to get some ice, only to trip and fall down the stairs to twist my ankle. I do feel much better though after reading this. Can't wait for the next chapter! Lynns
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 22:45 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter! Tho I can't recall what happened previous chapter. Anyway, I liked the part with Sesshoumaru letting old age kill Kaede in a more painful way, and Inuyasha's magic word - funny! Well, I look fwd to finding out what happens next, ja!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2laz2logn) On: December 04, 2005 22:17 EST
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Yeah another update!!!!!! But you had to leave it there?!!!!!! WHY?!!!!! I gotta know what happens with red tetsaiga and when is kag coming back???!!!! EVIL CLIFFY!!!!!!! Please update soon Onegai!!!! I gotta know what happens next!!!!!!!!!so UUUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTTTTEEEEEE Please *gets on hands and knees* Please!!!(soon?!!)
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Title: review
Reviewed By: silentdeath911@hotmail.com On: November 22, 2005 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Stroy I love it! Please continue its amazing! Ciao!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good stuff. I particularly like your characterization of Kikyo. Certainly not evil, but far from toothless aswell. Too often I see her depicted as pure unredeemable evil, but if she's not that, she's completely good and happy and pleasant (and should anyone like to point out that she's completely good and happy and pleasant in one of my fics, allow me to counter by pointing out that the situation had her a bit rushed and she didn't have time to be a bitch). You've got her where I think she belongs, in the middle, with a good explanation for her frequent swiveling between acts of good and evil.
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