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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: May 18, 2005 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! that was so funny! and cute! and awesome! and realistic! you've gotten so good, its killing me, i love it! you surprised me with sesshoumaru- i could have sworn he was going to go after her too- but i much rather like what you had in mind for him. much more creative and realistic! also, the deal with yumi and hojou! excellent! what a good way of putting him off, while at the same time finding a way to make kagome see the error in her actions. im impressed by your intelligence here- and exteremely pleased by the long chapter! i await your next update, happily.
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Title: lovely chapter
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 13:18 EDT
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I like your Sesshoumaru--he's hard to write and I like your interpretation. It can be tied in to the manga easily and also gives him a distinct personality for your story. Great job and I eagerly await more.~angelica incarnate~
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Reviewed By: ~Darkflameangel~ On: May 18, 2005 00:36 EDT
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wonderful story so far. as far as the possibility that someone might call sesshoumaru out of character, id have to disagree. from the series we have seen that sesshoumaru is very practical and anything he does is done for (usually) some reason that benefits himself. you have shown that he has his own agenda, but that he has evolved a capacity for compassion and dare i say love. awesome story, and poor inuyasha better get his ass in gear.. looking forward to seeing what "seduction" Kagome might have to use to get our poor hanyou to wake up. Update soon and keep up the good work! Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: tinky On: May 17, 2005 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u for updating it was driving me insain!!!! more...MORE...MORE
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Reviewed By: marens14 On: May 17, 2005 14:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You only missed a 10 in spelling because it's disdain, not distain. Ellipses are overused, and you don't use them with any other punctuation except a period. I'm really enjoying this story, though, don't think otherwise! I don't review everything! Did want to comment about the Kagome being a "copy" of Kikyo -- I wish someone would tell her that she's no more a copy of Kikyo than, at 19, she's a copy of herself at 15, get what I mean? She's evolved. I'm sure she's incarnated a few times between Kikyo and Kagome, because she's a better person than Kikyo. Another thought -- do you think miko powers come from the same source as youkai powers? That interbreeding is how said power came into the human line? Third thought -- remember in the 2d anime ep using Jinenji, he commented how Rin reminded him of Kagome? Think she could be an ancestor of Kagome? marens14 @ gmail.com
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Reviewed By: twin_star_of_suzaku (not signed in) On: May 17, 2005 05:06 EDT
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I only have one issue w/ your story, hun. Being that Miroku is a Buddist monk, he would have known about the Karma Sutra, which is a VERY old scroll w/ very explicit and.... interesting variations of sexual techniques. And being that Sango, in the series, is about 19 - even SHE would know about sex as sex during that time was a commen past time, especially for males. Try doing some research on Medieval Japan before continuing...
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Title: wow!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ashra On: May 16, 2005 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! first of all i want to say that my language is the spanish, so im sorry if i dont express myself so well.... well, i loved your fic since the first chapter, most of all because its a theme that i have thougth about, i mean, i know that kagome made a promise and all that stuff, but really, if i'd made a promise like that and everyday there was the chance that i could die, i thing that i would want to get things straight and see if i could get some loving or if i have to look for someone else.. also, your fic is so very good that it really transmits the feelings u know? and there are a very few fics that do that. Im very happy to have found your story and i'll wait to see how you get to the conclusion. please keep writing and update as soon as you can. meanwhile....i'll go read it once again since chapter one, :D oh! look at the time....maybe tomorrow night, hahhaah. pd[or is ps?, anyway]: do you have other stories or some that you recomend...really i cant seem to find good ones anymore!, aside from a few ones... well, nos vemos, cuidate y sigue escribiendo!!!!
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Reviewed By: Revera_04 On: May 15, 2005 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story...but u need to update more!
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Reviewed By: Cookie15 On: May 11, 2005 22:26 EDT
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Oooh, great new chapter. This one really shook things up, what with Kouga supposedly dead and Shippo telling on Inuyasha. I can't wait to hear what happens at the party...much less when she gets home to Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: tinky On: May 11, 2005 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story rox! update soon. please???^_^
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Reviewed By: DFA* On: May 11, 2005 03:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! love the story...including the author notes...well you could always say that Sesshoumaru threatened totosai into fixing tokinjin, that sounds likely...hmm...killing off kouga, devious and ordinarily would anger me, but you have some tricky little plot lurking so I can wait...albeit not long for for all to be revealed..love the story so far. Keep up the awesome work and update soon! Darkflameangel(*was to lazy to log in under my penname)
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 10, 2005 06:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It surprises me of how quickly you update and at such lenfth as well. You have created an excellent story. You are one great authore. Keep up the excellent work
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Title: MIss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: May 09, 2005 01:38 EDT
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You are cruel! This story is so good. I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: this is Kicnlus_inuforeva On: May 08, 2005 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you added a new chapter!!! Thank you so much! Update soon - please put in some Inu+Kag fluff! *sniffs* soo sad! update soon? promise? cookie? cake? *hands cake* UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: May 08, 2005 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. XD inuyasha's almost at a dead end.. ::cheers for inuyasha:: o_o go inu go!
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